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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 › » ] | Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 12:05 PST
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OMG (wigs out) OMG What's going to happen, Is Evan ok?!?!? Sue this is cruel and unusual punishment! Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I mean you know something is going to happen, but you don't expect it to be that bad. So, when is Valerie going to admit that she loves Evan? And will the next chapter be the one where she discovers his family history? I can't wait to find out!
| Title: Oh wow...
Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 11:18 PST
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Zel Roka? Dead? I doubt Evan's actually dead, but the question becomes...is this how he intends to release the persona of Zel Roka? Or will his comeback boost sales? Poor Valerie, I can't imagine being in that position. Hopefully Bas or Cain will find her... Damn good chapter by the way, very intense. Welcome back, and I hope everything's just fine at home. I know how hectic it can be, my sister's got twin's brewin', and my niece is three. Lol, kids are fun though.
| Title: Purity 9
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 11:13 PST
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Oh Man, I, SO, did not see that coming. Talk about whiplash. SO, Bone's not letting anyone in, is this Evan's way of leaving Rock Stardom behind, was this planned, or totally unsuspected, V needs to call Gin & Cain......when she can think again.....when I can think again....shot. Whimper...shot. Oh man....shot.....sh*t, I didn't see that coming. I need answers, please update soon, happy endings, Sueric specializes in happy endings, remember that....whimper
| Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 10:55 PST
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Who knew that Zel Roka touched so many people with his music. I especially like the fact that mostly children showed up instead of adults. That was pretty cool. I would also like to know where Evan is. Is he with his family or at a hospital. If a hospital then obvisouly its a youkai hospital. Maybe thas why Valerie wasnt allowed in? Because she's human??? Anyways awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out! Update soon please!!!
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 10:52 PST
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Wow, I didn't expect Evan to get shot! I'm surprised that Valerie hasn't tried to call Maddy for information. Then again she's concentrating more on finding out where he is.
| Title: ...No...
Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 09:55 PST
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OMG when I checked my e-mail this mornign and saw that you had updated I couldn't believe my eyes. I mean, it hasn't even been two weeks and you're gracing us with your presence again. Then, I started reading. This was singularly one of the most powerful one of your chapters that I have ever read in any of your Purity stories. I don't know how but it just...spoke to me. Thank you so much for this and I can't wait to see how the rest of this plays out. Evan-Zel-cannot be dead. Poor V :( Can't wait for the next update
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 07:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH...MY...GOD! I want to say that you're really, REALLY mean, but I know you're not. But still, I'm with V. Where is he? He's gotta be at the family mansion, right? And we all know he can't be dead. He's youkai for crying out loud. GAH! You have to give us another chapter soon, or I may go mad. Thank you for this one.
| Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 06:32 PST
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Oh no!
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 05:48 PST
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gah! GAH! GAHH!!!1!!!! Although we know a gunshot shouldn't kill Evan, V doesn't know he is hanyou she must be so emotionally distressed (maybe this incident will make her realize that she loves him? 8DD) V needs to call Maddie!!!!! Maddie will know how to contact his family ;____;
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 05:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god ness poor Valerie thats horrible - so morbid. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Title: Chapter 42: More on the life of Dieter...and Marvin's back. And, yes, you DID nearly give me a coronary at the end.
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 13:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can we say about Dieter? Dude is just...like an onion--many layers. Wow, makes me wanna know so much more about his life and hope so much to continue to see him in future Purities. He's so funny! He's also got a past that could make one hell of a movie. I SAW it as I read it and wanted to hug a fictional character--yeah, I DEFINITELY relate with Diet. What can we say about Marvin the Martian? (forgive me--the name sticks, Sue) He's so comfy and brotherly and boy-next-door-ish...ya just wanna keep him in you closet for emergency cuddling when you're down or to have a buddy nearby to watch Lifetime with when your girls are out of reach. He's SO...comfortable. It's obviously what V can handle, Marvin's personality, but she's so Jung Ho in so many ways that I think a marriage with them will give new meaning to the phrase "Familiarity breeds contempt". I hope they stay friends. I can see Evan being okay with him and even trying to hook him up with some of his female associates in an act of goodwill--with most likely tickle me senseless, though I could be surprised--all conjecture, of course. What can I say about that evil cliffhanger? I'm pinching you in my mind, Sue. LOL! This was chock full of insight and I honestly read it more than once--ESPECIALLY the Dieter portions. I learned more about the mate bond, too, so, thanks!
| Title: Chapter 41: Poor V...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 09:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laugh as I shake my head. Oh, Evan. Oh, Diet. Oh my God...you two DIDN'T! Then again, that shouldn't surprise me. But, learning all I have about Dieter has really shed lots of light on his personality. Some things I guessed wrong and others I thought "I KNEW it!" And, as always, it's so...entertaining seeing Evan as the voice of reason--seems Diet's pretty incorrigable (sp?), too. OMG, STILL laughing at the thought of viewing a work of cats screwing. GAWD, your imagination is HILARIOUS, Sue! Many much-needed laughs! This one had me smacking my 4head in commiseration. Poor V indeed.
| Title: Chapter 40: V tickles me--Diet, too!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 09:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, can I just say? I've been going "Ah-oom" and "Nam Myoho Renge Kyo" since reading this chapter. More interesting than watching V heckle Evan is her pondering the man who is Zel Roka/Evan. I love her inner thoughts on him and watching her go down her menntal checklist of assumed flwas vs new discoveries. Also, you broght Diet back! **glomps Sue** I love him--he's so random, odd and creative! Outside of his leanings to all things morbid, he's so much like me! But, of my...Did Evan say he was getting bored? Oh shit...
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 05:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to tell you, you misspelt Sydney (it was Sidney) in chapter 71 of Purity 8. Please update soon... I'm VERY BORED and I am currently while at home, reading Purity (4 then 8, now I think I will go to the first one...) but I will do that tomorrow as I REALLY should be going to sleep I have a University meeting to go to... (not that I have been going to bed early recently... been reading your stories again too much lol. Oh and how old is Evan and what time is it (Purity 9) set in???
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