| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter Love this line She snorted and crossed her arms over her chest, pivoting on her heel to glower at him, too. Too bad that the sight of him, dripping water from head to toe, the sight of the tiny rivulets coursing down his skin, the strange pants that were now clinging to his legs as the weight of the water dragged the waistline precariously low on his hips. A moment later, however, the illusion was broken as the man dropped to his hands and knees and affected a full-body shake akin to a dog that had just come in from the rain.
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Title: Chapter 36: A laugh a friggin' minute!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 16:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See, now, this is NOT the chapter to read in public. My damn jaw and stomach hurt from holding in my laughter. Evan's so...Evan. It had so much fluff mixed in, I must've looked like a mad schitso (sp?) laughing, Awwwing and shaking my head ruefully in turns. And, my MIND Sue...When V said "I like pictures..."... Bad! Bad me! And GAWD, the cuddling scene with Maddie and V...so HELP me, I KNEW EVAN saw it as kinky before I even READ it! OMG! This chapter just made me laugh so hard!
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 15:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Closing his eyes, Evan wrapped his arms tighter around her. `There'll be other tours.' Aww that made me just melt. And now that she met the family, I wonder how she'll react. I feel that V's got alot of issues she's hiding in herself as well. Not to mention alot of PRIDE. Wow, keep them coming Sue, this Purity really just makes me really happy.
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 15:43 PST
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Wow, two chapters in two DAYS?! What did we ever do to deserve such...such...AWESOMENESS?! lol I loved this chapter; I've been wondering if Valerie would react the way Nezumi did when she first saw them fighting. Of course, Nez did have a thing with blood, but still; I'm dying to know what V is going to say when she finds out not only is Evan insane, but a demon as well. O_o BTW, "Bo-oo-nes...I am your faaaathaaaa!" HILARIOUS! Best quote of the day. Can't wait for more ^-^
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 15:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read all of the puritys their are I just love all of your stories I read them everyday.Your a AWSOME wirter
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Title: hahahas!
Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 15:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lols. thats so funny. brotherly love my ass. then Evan wetting V because he shook like a dog. so funny. keep writing! love it!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 15:06 PST
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Ah, so she got to witness a little fighting match! That was a pretty good ending to it too, Evan launched into the pool, to bad Valerie thinks that his whole family is bent now, rather than just him lol.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 10:42 PST
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If she thinks Bas and Gunnar are insane, she... has...no... IDEA... *cough*Morio*cough* I wonder what her reaction will be when she finds out they're ALL dogs...
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 08:32 PST
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I liked this chapter. Bailey is adorable. And of course I love Evan.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 08:21 PST
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bah ha! I love the whole Bas=mack truck XD Bailey seems to have taken after Sydnie more than Bas XD so cute
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 07:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, she has no idea how true that is. The family is insane! Ha ha ha! Great chapter, but I was hoping that V would call him on throwing the bet. Maybe next chapter. At least she got to meet more of the family. I wonder what she'll have to say to Maddy once she sees her again. That's bound to be a great convo. And Evan is so...awwwwww is the only thing that comes close to how he is with V. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 06:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Poor V hasn't seen nothing yet! (Yay Gunnar!!! More like his Grandpa than he'll ever know :D)
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 06:18 PST
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You have to wonder just when that boy is gonna go a little too far before he tells her he's youkai - well hanyou. Seriously though - loved the chapters. Good to have you back.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 05:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very insane but we love them anyways LOL :) Another great chapter darlin' ):
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 22:04 PST
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YAY!!!! THANK YOU!!! Awesome as per usual, though I do have to add what would make it EVEN better is to put us all out of our misery and add the next chapter... soon. Because...well... I want to know what Valerie is going to do to Evan. (hehehe) I personally think that the name of his new album should be K.M.B.G (Kissing My Balls Good-bye). But on a more serious note, honestly great- absence certainly does make the heart grow fonder.
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