| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 04:47 PST
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bah ha I love Syndie XD its so like her to give him a picture like that of herself and make V jeaous bah ha ha
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 01:34 PST
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I knew it! She actually asked to be on the tour ^^. Glad to get something right at last.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 23:48 PST
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I know who his dream woman is!!! haha Welll so does everyone but.. haha. I loved it keep up the good work! LLLOOOVVVEE IIITT!!! and I take it the uncle was Kich? Love him too! ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 23:10 PST
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Yay! New chapter. I liked it a lot. She's starting to learn more about him. Vice versa?
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 17:54 PST
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Ah, I can't wait until Valerie meets Sydney for the first time. One-sided catfight anyone? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 16:20 PST
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Awww...that was so sweet! I love the two of them together! They are just absolutely PERFECT. I sense that Valerie's starting to catch onto the connection between them and she seems like she's going to be the perfect kin dof jealous ^-^. I can't WAIT for them to go on the tour together. Oh snap XD! Can't wait till next time! Oh, and one more thing that I know you probably won't have time to answer: Do you have this ENTIRE STORY planned out, or do you just make it up as you go? I just think it's amazing that you could do either and get these chapters out so fast! Anyway, was just wondering. Still wish I had your talent, Beautiful
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 15:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this it was great the inuendos and the way there both getting under each others skin. Everything I love it :)
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 13:48 PST
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I'm looking forward to V meeting Sydnie. lol thats going to be hilarious. Almost as funny as when she meets his grandparents. LMAO. I love that Evan can play like every instrument there is. It shows that there is more than meets the eye to him, and that he has an appreciation of culture on a global level. update soon. P.S. tropicana twister diet orange soda is disgusting...AVOID IT! :-D
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 11:29 PST
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I wonder if Val can help Evan work through his issues with Bas... Oh, I can't wait for the babysitting chapter!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 10:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...he's so dreamy. :swoons: I wonder how many times a day you hear that...Anywho, thanks for the great chapter.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 09:45 PST
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Aaawww poor Evan. Poor V. Stupid Marvin. lol I'm thrilled your updating more again! I love to see these two torment each other.
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Title: Woohoo
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 17:48 PST
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Yay! Awesome yet again. I don't know how you do it honestly.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 17:02 PST
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OOh! So V got to witness the "brotherly love" haha I loved this Chapter. I love Gunnar's attitude about things. It's so "I don't have time for this". Keep up the great Work! I wonder what V's gonna do now that she knows she didn't win... ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 02:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! Though I feel sorry for Val, especially witnessing the display and no way to put it in the context of Youkai families. It was funny as heck when Bas started sputtering like he had never come face to face with an angry woman. :D A completely awesome chapter.
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Reviewed By: alchemie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 00:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love, love, loooove this story! Thanks again for writing :)
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