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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 › » ] | Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 22:09 PST
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Evan's a bad boy in the public eye, and at home most of the time, but he's sweet. I like him...and V, I think she's good for him. You write so beautifully my dear. I hope this series keeps up for years, lol. It'd be quite the shame to lose an artist like you.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 21:55 PST
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Aw, I like Bone!!! I'm glad that we got to see just a little more of him and his character in this chapter! I hope you and your family are doing better; thank you for the update, Sue!
| Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 21:24 PST
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AH! Yay, another chapter! AH! lol, I sound like an overexcited fangirl...but really when I got the notification that Purity had been updated I could hardly believe my eyes! I've been waiting a long time for this. My life is complete...lol!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 21:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm wondering HOW long it will take for her to actually think "some thing is VERY, VERY weird with these people, other than the fact that they are rockstar/groupie/other... I was looking up on the internet about visual kei bands.. and they all look like girls... mostly... Evan is nothing like that is he???? (as long as he is meant to the voice that sell the tickets and CD's I dont really care.... but if it was all looks... I'd be very sad...)
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 19:39 PST
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Awesome chapter! Update soon please and keep it up! ^_^
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 15:14 PST
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:squeals: I almost cried tears of happiness when I opened my e-mail. I love Bone. I just can't wait for the youkai secret to come out. The supense is killing me. She doesn't pay attention to some things, and other things, she chews about for ever. :Shakes V: Ask questions! Thank you so much for the new chapter.
| Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 14:46 PST
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By now, I'm not sure why she thinks that she's going to spy without Evan noticing (even without super-senses). Heck, she couldn't stay hidden from me at the bar of a restaurant I'm eating at. If I were her, I'd make it a game of following him. It'd be fun to talk about later. PS I'm not sure what the cause of the delay has been, but know that no matter how sporadic the updates, they are always welcome and appreciated!
| Title: lol >< XD
Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 02:37 PDT
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Me again! If you didnt get my email, it said that I had sketched a fanart piece for you depicting Evan and Valerie. I told you I was plannin to color it, and whatdya know, I finished it within an hour of writing you that email! XD If you wanna see, heres the link, just do the dot thing! ^^ I'm actually surprised at how it turned out o_o. http://i16(dot)photobucket(dot)com/albums/b50/ChickenToot/allingoodfun-3(do t)jpg
| Reviewed By: lemonera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 16:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, thank YOU from the bottom of my heart. I love writers like you, I really do. I'm glad I made you feel that way, it makes me feel I'm giving a little bit back for all the various degree of emotions your stories have given me, needless to say I feel very indebted towards you, I could talk incessantly (Trust me, I'm Panamanian/Cuban-American, we do that), but I feel that no matter how much I say thank you, I just won't be able to express my gratitude to its fullest extent... I can try, certainly, but It's too much to bear. I'm reading Vendetta right now, and boy, woman, it just gets better and better and better... Now that I think about it... Are we going to see the inclusion of a Latin American Tai-Youkai? xD I can help you with the latin background if you'd like, That's all the Purity series needs, a little bit of Latin Spice! (That's kind of an oxymoron, a little more spice into these stories and they'd be illegal...), anyways, yeah, any background you'd like on Cuban or Panamanian people, ask me! :) Gunnar should get his ass kicked by a Cuban girl, I insist. And he should be swept off his feet by one. There's something to be said about Latin women and how we tame our men. Yeah, you guessed it, xD we're a little bit more violent. But that's exactly what gunnar needs. Like my Abuelita says: "Un buen par de nalgadas pa que aprenda!" roughly, "A good and very needed ass kicking!" And I shut up now. Purity doesn't really need anything added to it, It's perfect as it is, but please excuse my latin american blood for wanting to form part of something I love so much, and forms now a big part of me. Again, sorry if this is a little too out there, making suggestions and what not, it's probably not my place, but It would just be soooo cool xD. Again, I love you, I love your stories, your characters, everything! You're a great source of inspiration and, If I were into web design again, I'd so make and run your fanlisting and or facebook fan page :) Sueric, you are truly a gift from the heaven's above! I thank whatever supreme force led me to your stories! I don't know what I would do without you! Lemonera, aka Ming.
| Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 11:35 PDT
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omg they are sooo cute together!!! she needs to dump that ass marvin and admitt she loves evan!!! can't wait for that chappy!!
| Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 08:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always get chills when I read chapters like this. by far my favorite chapter yet!!
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 21:56 PDT
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Heh, he's not bored, he's restless. And one of these days Valerie's going to (reluctantly) give in to the temptation to date him. Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 19:40 PDT
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Amazing- like always, though maybe a little short, but I'm just happy to have an update that I sorta don't really care. I look foward to the next chapter, and yes I still will be checking at least 3 times a day because my life really is sad enough that all have to look forward to at the moment is an update from my favorite fanfic.
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 18:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know Evan is so cute... Almost would make up for the heart attack... (due to him being outside the window like that) I wonder what V wanted to do when she was younger...
| Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 17:24 PDT
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KUWAII!!!!!! oh dear lord I love love love love Evan's character! God you make him sound like my dream man! :D curse you Sueric for you the inexplicable way you described that chapter. I would love to be V right now. There's just something about a strong man holding you and making you feel small and safe.
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