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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 › » ] | Title: Chapter 16: You got that song stuck in my head, Sue. LOL!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 15:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Except, I kept switching to Aretha! LOL! Moving right along... First, OMG, I can't believe Madison said that about Cain--wait...yeah, yes I can. The more I find out about Evan, the more I wanna hug him. He sounds borderline lonely. **pets Evan** And i love how honest Madison is with V; the dress deal tickled me. marvin better look out.
| Title: Chapter 15: Mama's baby steps up to the plate
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell, where's my paddle? I'll bid all my... **counts money...digs in bottom of bag, couch, change jar** ...$17.48 for Evan! No, but seriously, that was so sweet how he caters to Gin. Warms the heart and reminds me of Ryo and Kich with Kagome. Poor stuck, heart-scared, settling V. She's lonely, isn't she? No wonder she takes her job so seriously...outside of Madison, it's her biggest and most fulfilling challenge (and it gives back). Though I know they won't stay together throughout the story, I still think they might make good friends (though, there may always be a tad tension in the air with Marv and Evan). I shall see...
| Title: Chapter 14: Evan's got a good heart.
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Way to guard the marital bliss, Evvie! Dieter's wife wasn't dumb at ALL, was she? have i told you lately how much I adore Madison? Whoo, her wit! Tell it like it is, girlfriend! And Marvin...dude, pay attention. I mean, yeah, V didn't tell him about the trip and where she really was going but for him to just assume so easilly that she's open to dropping averything and complying... **le sigh** Then again, she's not all that verbal about her needs, is she...
| Title: Chapter 13: Oh, Evan...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 15:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAWD, something about Evan whining is so funny (and sexy--yeah, something's wrong with me drooling over a fictional character but, well, what can ya do?). And V's past with her family... The plot thickens. **rubs hands together gleefully** Gee, Marvin's got Tunnel Vision, huh? I both admire and sigh over the guy. Poor V, settleing for less. What happened in her past to make her want a marvin-shped security blanket, I wonder... Evan, Evan, Evan...somehow, I can't help but wonder if he got arrested on purpose. He's just wild enough to do it to get her attention. Poor V... **shakes head and chuckles**
| Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 10:48 PDT
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re-reading purity 4-Justification (my favorite thus far!), and I think I understand why Evan hates Cain so much. I mean it stands to reason right? Evan is a Mama's boy and I'm sure after hearing the hell Gin had to go through before she and Cain were finally able to be happy, he was pretty pissed? So maybe that's why he can't stand Cain, and maybe since Bas is pretty much another version of Cain, that's why he can't stand his older "bubby" (that's what I've always called my little brother who's name is Evan lol!) Am I warm?
| Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 09:37 PDT
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I'm curious...why did Evan just forgive and forget so fast? Is it BECAUSE they're mates and mates can't be mad at each other for too long? Or is it just because Evan is like that? Good chapter and looking forward to the next one! Oh and have a good weekend! --'-@ Sweetheart @-'--
| Title: WHY!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: jack2jokester [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 12:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you don't understand I'm sitting on the edge of my seat checking my e-mail every 5 seconds in hopes that you've posted a new chapter! why must you be so cruel...to leave your poor loving readers hanging?! lol j/k. but seriously you do have me on the edge of my seat begging for a new chapter....I love your stories and have been a dedicated reader since the 1st Purity Waiting anxiously, Jackie
| Title: Love this story!!
Reviewed By: alchemie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 01:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to say, I've been waiting and hoping for a story about Evan, and I love this so far. Thank you so much and especially thank you for your quick updates :) Cheers!
| Reviewed By: My-Only-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 17:52 PDT
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I like the playful banter between V and Evan. It's sweet. And I'm curious about why Evan doesn't really like Bas and Cain. Is that something that might be revealed later? Oh and a few chappies earlier, how Madison slept with Gunnar, is that a set up for a later story maybe? ^__~ I just thought he'd fall for the exact opposite of his ideal woman so everyone can give him a big fat "I told you so." Keep up the good work ^__~
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 17:38 PDT
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That was so funny, Cain telling Evan not to make Valerie cry again! Lol, he's only got his "girlfriend" for one day and already he's already being reprimanded!
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 16:09 PDT
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^_^ it starts with pretending... Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 15:38 PDT
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great story so far. im really diggin it. im glad zel and v are getting along again and i cant wait to see whats in store. Im hoping we will get to see what has caused Evan and Bas to be at odds with each other. I think its a little to do with the story of them at the park, but there must be something else too. Oh and just a parting thought. Ive been listening to the song Crazy Bi--h by Buckcherry, and i can so see zel roka singing this song. Anyone else or just me haha. See you next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
reads their reviews... or not... the best stories are when you become emotionally involved with the story... like with Harry potter, wanting to throw the book threw his head while reading it.. *then realising that is impossible due too the fact that he is fictional!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I didn't realise that people didn't like the characters.... both of them a very real people (atleast personality wise...) I loved this Chapter, Evan is so cute with his MOMMY!!!!!! Evan just cant fool Cain can he...
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...Cain is such a sweetie. Lol. "Don't make her cry again." Nice update! ~Amber
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