| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo...V's gonna be maaaaaad...I wish she would say she was sorry already. I want them to make up. He should just tell her everything about himself. Then, maybe she would understand. He's so into her. And she is so jealous of every female that comes within a foot of him. :sigh: I hope it happens soon.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 20:07 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to stick your foot in your mouth Val sheesh.
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 17:48 PDT
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I feel bad for Val. That was super embarrassing. I'll never understand why the person never tells the other person that he/she is sticking his/her foot in his/her mouth. Val was going to find out it was his mom either way, so why not just say before she continues on a tirade that "hey, chill, she's my mom". I look forward to her apology, but I just don't see how Evan can be all that mad when she didn't even know she's his mom and his women normally don't matter anyway.
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Title: Random Question
Reviewed By: Forbes697 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 16:19 PDT
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I was just wondering if you know who your are going to write a story about next. I know that you said that there would be 11 all together but there are so many different characters. I personally would love one about Ben and Charity because there is definatly something going on. Also are any going to be as angsty as Purity 8. (I loved it but it made me cry so much!) thanks for the great stories
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 15:49 PDT
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Poor Valerie, you must want to crawl into a corner and die after that. If you ever want to apologise, good luck with that. It'll be interesting to see you try to pin down Evan short of buying him for the night. Good thing that he was taught chilvery, since it seemed like he was two clicks away from decking her for saying all that. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 15:16 PDT
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Aww...poor Valerie. She must feel horrible. I bet that didn't make Evan feel to great either. I love how Evan handled that so well. He sure has a way with making people feel...well something. Great story! I hate cliffhangers but for this story they are DEFINITELY worth it! ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 14:54 PDT
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Wow, I didn't think that V could be so catty! Lol. It was good, but maybe if it was warranted! I was surprised that Evan didn't snap at her, but then again, I wasn't. I don't know, I don't think the night is going so great for Valerie, shame that Marvin can't seem to notice!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 14:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor poor man he REALLY got screwed on the name department... If I was him I'd marry some one else and take their name... EVAN was so SWEET!!!!!! Gin is SUCH a CUTIE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 14:18 PDT
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V's kind of a bitch...I'm not really sure if I like her too much yet..Hopefully you'll remove the stick from her ass soon^.^ And Gin, sweet little Gin, I still love that girl.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 11:40 PDT
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Oooh, Val... Seriously, ouch... Gotta curse that tongue, haven't you? This should play otu ineteresting...
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Reviewed By: milenalupin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 11:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The big advantage of reading - instead of listening - is that you can go back, again and again, check and recheck. Yup, Pinkle, he said. *dies* ... Did you know that "pinkeln" in German means "to pee"?! Killing me here, and rather not softly. *gasps for air*. -- On another note, Val deserves being given the cold shoulder. Generally I commiserate with her, having to deal with impossible-to-deal-with Zel, but this night, she was being a complete bitch, eaten up by her jealousy and bias. *grrrrrrrrrowls*(Yes, I love Gin dearly, and feel insulted on her behalf. Forgive me for snarling protectively. Just backing up Evan here...) So, yeah, cheers for Mama's darling boy, and I do wish you keep him angry for a bit. You don't go around insulting inu mom's and remain unpunished! Considering the reaction of InuYasha would show after slurs like those to his baby girl, I guess Vee can consider herself lucky she's only being snubbed...
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Title: a majorly long review
Reviewed By: bigdogboy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 11:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so this review is a long time in coming. Last year my girlfreind got me hooked on reading purity justification and it was pretty good and it was enough to have me read most if not all of your putirtys. Now i am a sesskag fan. But can i just say that purity 1 is the best pairing of kagome inuyasha and it beats the stuffing out of virtually all sesskags. You made me believe that inu and kags belonged together. I love how inu had to court her. You filled in the one major gap that had been throughout all other inukags being you made inu grow up and be the type of man i want to be. You also did something for me that i'll be extremly thankful for you made mating drasticly increase a mortals life span which is a treat. My next favorite was purity forver. I absolutely love ryo he is awesome and i love how nez raked him over the coals. I also love how she came to understand that ryo was who he was cuz he fought and i love the introduction of the youkai voice. It amazes me and makes I want one. Justification was rough on me it was so sad hearing about cain and gin but by the end of it i really really loved how they ended up. It was amazing and cain and gin are on of my favorite couples now. I enjoyed phantasm's syndie she is one of my favorite charaters she had sas just like any other kitty. Her and bas' aruguing reminded me of me and my girlfreind no lie it was an excellent one. I absolutltuley loved all your one shots inculding a very purity christmas inyasha was hillarious and so is the one shot impending doom. I nearly died of laughter from that one. Imagine sesshyomaru being dragged to inuyashas house in nothing but his underwear ooo and can i just say thank you for bringing back kagura you gave sesshy a strong mate that balances king fluffy :). And purity revolutuion was so sad you made my heart break and made me actually cry and i dont cry unless someone in my family just died so you truely deeply moved me. I loved purity the fairy tale it was amzing. I absolutley adored morio but it ended so sadly plz say they get the happy ending they deserve. purity vendetta Was one of the best peices of literature of read. You can really see the emothions you were feeling through your work i am sorry for loss even though i never met you i wish i could have given you a hug you showed us your soul in this one. i absolutley adored tanny she was awesome even if she was called stinky butt cain was so great helping them out to. "kurt is as bent as ryo" lol. Thought can i plz say i can not thank you enough for not maiming miroku by making weak and pathetic without the wind tunnel. You made him how he was supposed to be a ass kicking monk and i really enjoyed his final test for realease. Old granger waas awesome too i love how he fell in love with a youkai that was truely betuiful. and can i say kurts dreams with miroku and sango were exceptional and practiclly made my heart burst. I really hate to say goodbyye to them i was practiclly devestated. But you did end it well just plz say that kurt will be in your other stories even if its just hassling even or a oneshot i'll real miss him. I connected with him the tragic hero and his horrible backround so thank you for creating him and plz let us see him again. when i first read subterfuge i wasnt quite sure what to make of it but now i like it. thats just your magic sue omg she crossed the line how could she say that about sweet lil gin i'm not sure she's gonna get out of this one. but im sure it will be good. hey will we any of the rest of the family showing up like kurt or ryo or bas in this one? and lastly are you okay? i'm pretty all of us got worried and a lil scared cuz you never miss an update. so your in my prayers and lastly let me conclude by saying thank you for giving of yourself 5 days aweek 52 weeks a year and thank you for sharing your heart and emotions with us you create beuaty and ever day you make the world brighter with it so thank you!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 11:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, yes, Evan...he said Pinkle. Ha ha ha ha! I swear, one of these days, you're going to make me bust a gut. Poor V. I would be so embarrassed! She basicly called his mama a slut in so many words. V doesn't really know how to take Evan does she. Not after having to put up with Zel for so long. He can't blame her for that.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 10:00 PDT
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There isn't much that will piss Evan off, but Valerie crossed the line. You do not talk about his Mama. And add to that the fact that she was being a narrow minded bitch to him for no reason when he approached her as a gentleman. Feh! she just made my hit-list. And whatever apology she comes up with better be hella good especially after dissin' someone's mama! loved the chapter cant wait for the auction. what happened yesterday? I checked my email a million times but there was no update. Are you ok? Update soon. :-D
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