| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 06:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor V he's a little hellion if there ever was one :)
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was hilarious!! An I found the last chapter damn near sweet as well, you painted Evan (from the last chapter) in a totally different light, one that we haven't seen in any of the other stories he's been privvy to. Nice work, Sue!!
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Reviewed By: jable [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read all your stories so far, all of them are great. just want to make 1 little itty bitty correction... Valerie states that ''the toxicology reports indicated that he had enough marijuana in his system to kill a horse'' it might make more sense to change ''marijuana'' to ''alcohol'' because its impossible to overdose on THC, the drug found in marijuana, and a bottle of good ol' JD will put lesser men in the hospital. please don't take offense to this suggestion.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 00:11 PDT
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Paparazzi would be really bad at that moment. Especially when Valerie learns that she spent the Night at Evan's house, even if it's just the guest room (I'm assuming that he's gentleman enough, and Valerie's drunken enough, to have her stay with him for the night, and not try to make it to her home.). Her hangover's going to be bad the next morning, with all that drink she had. And that means that she's going to do the nastiest things she can to Even in retaliation. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 15:02 PDT
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Another beautiful chapter! XD Aww Evan is so sweet. This chapter seemed like a bit like a hentai version of Purity 4. Mostly because Evan and his youkai said they were going to die... And it was cute that he asked to marry him, even if he didn't know why.
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 14:47 PDT
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Thank you for "getting us ready!" VERY cute chapter - and Evan being sweet and the voice of reason.. go figure.. and his youkai finally piped up too! Hope V remembers some of this... *hee hee* I love cuddling up to warm guys too!
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Title: Chapter 10: And the love Jones begins...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my, this chapter, Sue... I laughed, I smacked my forehead, I held onto the PC screen in an attempt to stiffle the many guffaws clawing their way up my throat! (Damn, but his YV is a horny little devil!) Then, I went "Well, awwwwah! Evvie!" I love seeing his sweet and vulnerable side come out and I always knew he had a noble streak in him from the time he, supposedly trying to irk Bas, brought over catnip for Sydnie, to taking her to her GED test, to how he cared for Jillian with her ups and downs with Gavin. he's a big ol' sweetheart under all that bad boyism heshovels out to the masses. And, awwwwah, Sue! He freed the fishies--err, LOBSTERS! Wow, where it comes to a rockstar blowing his money on a chick, that one was just too sweet and memorable! CC was right--I love, love, LOVED this chapter! KUDOS, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 09:24 PDT
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...Evan's youkai is ALREADY telling him to marry her? Well... actually, it's not that hard to believe of Evan. Oh, and Val... HUMANITARIAN-FIVE!
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 06:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Valire is going to HATE herself in the morning lol. Oh Lordy...
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 04:38 PDT
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How cute. Doesn't she kno evan is dog Youkai? He's so sweet. Wait till she finds out he's a big mama's boy. Worse than kichiro is. Thanks for the chapter. I am soooooo ready
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 03:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that this is being written, however... VERY sad that your other story has finished! I heart Evan.. he is so cool...does V have body issues? or another other weird issues?
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 22:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...I'm so glad I stayed up late tonight. You love us so much, you gave us a chapter a week early! I love drunk V! She's so funny and not uptight. She needs Evan, and Evan needs her. They freed the fishies!
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 22:15 PDT
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I cant wait to see what Evan his in store here. I mean I dont think its going to be good (DUH!). I mean we are dealing with Evan right? Just hope that he has enough balls to face V's wrath. Lol! Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next chapter to come out!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 20:17 PDT
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Cute!! Keep up the fantastic work and update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 15:24 PDT
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Evan is horrible. haha He has to be one of the funniest characters in this series. He's one of my favorites... so blunt and open... haha Great Job!!
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