| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, God. I don't know who to feel the most sorry for. I just can't imagine what would happen now. Will she still be his lawyer? Will he want her to be? I have no idea how anyone would handle that situation.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 10:08 PDT
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i dont know how everyone else feels about this chapter but i frickin loved it!. i think Evan put some sense into her head. LOVE LOVE LOE his ATTITUDE. now Valerie should take her ass to marvin, dump him and say pimp your own research and go home and reevaluate her life. i mean she really was about to suck Evan off just because she so carelessly threw out the promise of Anything for her fiance who im guessing definitely wouldn't have done the same for her. What if she had made that promise to someone else who wanted more and would have TAKEN it. Evan gets Kudos even if he went about it that way. sometime people have to learn things the hard way. ass for marvin would he take it in his upitty ass for his research? lol thats funny to me. i mean im not to happy with valerie right now but she said she had a headache and he still asked her to do something for him. feh wat a dick! KUDOS TO SUE FOR AN AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!! AND KUDOS TO THE CHARACTER OF EVAN he is still reigning supreme as my favorite character. then there's Morio and Ryomaru. ah my boys! ***Stares off dreamily into space***
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 08:31 PDT
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wow just wow. He really cares for her huh? And I don't know why she doesn't pay attention to some of the inconsiderate things Marvin does. No doesn't mean he's a bad guy, I just think that he cares more about his research then her. And thats how a lot of marriages fail, nothing should be more important then your family because you can lose your job but your family can ALWAYS be there for you if you let them. Am I on the right track as far as the Marvin thing? Great Chap
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dayum! What a nailbiter! I kept thinking "Is he really gonna make Val do that?" Jerk...but poor Gin didn't deserve what was said. I'm lovin' the storyline so far! Keep writing! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 07:14 PDT
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I'm glad a couple more people feel like being upset at Val for what she said is irrational because she was saying it about another one of Zel's floozies, not Evan's mom.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 03:41 PDT
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$1,250,000? 0_0 That's, like, two-thirds more than what Bubby got... (my maths teacher is in my head, dammit)... I wonder when he and Val are gonna make up? Ahhh, that sucked. He shoulda told her that Gin was his mama from the start instead of playing around. Baka... I wish SexxhoMaru had gone up as bachelor number four... I think my house would fetch enough to buy him if I combined it wuth my life's savings and my parent's retirement money... give me a bidding paddle!
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Reviewed By: bigdogboy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay so who dun it who got into the trouble that evan was said to have gotten into maddy, bas, bone, dieter which on of these is he covering and ready to go to jail for. and oyyy val may be pissed but how could she say that about gin and can i just im laughing my ass off from gins charater evolution cuz no one would have mistaken her as a pornstar in purity justification. im just interested to see what will happen next oh please sueric dont make us wait to monday we lost a day this week please dont deprive us of your genius (insert shameless groveling here) any way if we dont here from youu have a good weekend
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Evan, all mixed up inside. He should just rip Val a new one..
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 18:00 PDT
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Great chapter! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 16:53 PDT
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Aw, the ending was really funny, Gin selling her precious son away! I really hope Valerie apologizes soon though, I feel so bad for both of them; I'm glad that Evan declined Sesshoumaru's offer too!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 16:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHHOO!!! Evan beat Bas! I would've put myself into the biggest debt ever for a date with Evan! He's fantastic!! OOh.... Valerie's in for a surprise after the charity (heehee) fundraiser... She really should think before she speaks. Can't wait for the next chapter! You're doing a great job like always!! ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What V said before really hurt Evan.. How old is the woman that bought him??? Youki or not? Even's a little mothers boy at heart... it's very cute!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:13 PDT
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.___. I hope Evan and V make up. Even though she said those things, how was she supposed to know that was his mother? and he never stopped her to say so. From her experience with him the case had always been that he had some slut with him or something, so I believe that its just as much evan's fault as it is Valerie's. He shouldn't be so made about it, when she apologizes he should accept it and point out that he should have told her instead of letting her go on and on. but really your probably going to let this angst draw out for a bit eh?
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 14:51 PDT
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in ur face is right. he just totaled like 50x some ppls salary. Eesh I'm jealous. i loved this chapter. i think it would be an interesting twist if evan told valerie that he wouldn't use her as his lawyer anymore. if the other lawyer got him off and valerie was left to ponder just how deep evan really is. that would be cool. like she said those things about his mom and he really was being serious. no matter how morally bankrupt he is, he still has a line and she crossed it and now theres no turning back. anyway im glad to hear that ur ok health wise. i thought maybe something had happened to u. but changes in living arrangements isnt so bad. i hope everything goes ok. how is the family coping? well ill be here when u update next :-D if im notin the hospital that is. ive been in and out all week. UR AMAZING luv OB
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 14:31 PDT
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Does he think Val knew Gin was his mom? I don't get how he could be mad about what she said if he knows that she didn't know who she was saying it about.
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