| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
| Pages (158): [ « ‹ 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 09:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
I caught that. V and her daughter who is seven @_@ I'm still thinking that play she wanted to go to was her child's. Evan is such a nice guy, and letting V see this side of him shall up his chances with her damnit DX he still needs to think of a way to get rid of that tweeb of a fiance without doing something illegal lol.
|
Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 08:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Honestly, I thought he was going to be visiting the victim of his accident in the hospital, but this wasn't surprising. I'm curious to know why he feels like he has to be the screw-up. I've never really had a rebellious side, and I love volunteering with children. So if I had the money to just hang out with children all day every day, I'd do it in a heartbeat. It's interesting that he only allows himself this simple pleasure once a week.
|
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 08:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! I wanna glomp Evan SOOOOO much right now! I mean, how SWEET was he with those kids? Oh, and seriosuly... Marvin's never given her a single damn flower? Not even a rose on valentine's day?! How bloody frigid is HE? C'mon, Val, switch to Evan, you knwo you wanna!
|
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 07:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HE'S SO CUTE!!! It makes you wonder where all the good men are. If I would V, the press wouldn't have to eat him with a spoon, because I'd do it first. Thanks for the new chapter.
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 00:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know I'm driving on my way home and I think, you know I wonder if Sueric has updated, it's been ages (for your VERY regular updates(although I know you said that you had stuff on...)) and here I find out that you have a new update... VERY COOL!!!! Great chapter... It's funny because I think that even if Evan had all this stuff it wouldn't make him under the influence, he would have a fabulous metabolism...
|
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 22:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, that was a sad, uninformative, rudundant series of interviews. Well, what did Val expect, they were all drunk and high! Keep up the good work, dark
|
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 15:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
*wouldn't want*
|
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh... it seems like the clan is covering for someone...I wonder who it could be. It doesn't surprise me that Evan, being the sweetheart he is, would want someone he cared about to take the blame for something of such caliber. I hope V gets him off...he doesn't deserve jail. I love their compatibility. It's adorable. I love bad boys that are sweet Mama's boys. They are the cutest! Well I hope all is better with your son and yourself! Don't overwork your self. I can't wait until the next chapter! Keep Up the awesome work on the best story for my FAVORITE character! ~MSMND
|
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 15:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
they're all definitely protecting someone. glad that ur back hope everything is ok at home and with your son. i really needed a pick me up when i saw this chapter in my email. so thank u. really thank u for posting a new chapter today, ull never know how much it meant to me to stop my tears for just a moment. i hope you got the picture i sent to u of morio and kagome. until next time. great chapter i luv all of evans friends and of course evan himself. and really. thank u so much.
|
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 09:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm getting the feeling that soemone else crashed that car and Evan's covering. Knowing Evan, it's not that far-fetched an idea...
|
Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 08:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm still thoroughly confused as to what actually happened in the accident. Have you told us the details of what he's being charged with and I forgot or is that something we'll be learning soon? I mean, I feel like someone died in the other car, but I also think Evan would be a lot more cooperative if that were the case. Then again, I feel like he wasn't driving, and it was probably family that was.
|
Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 07:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! I was so excited when i got the email about a new chapter =3 I cant wait until V finds out Evan is a hanyou
|
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 06:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, at least we have one more piece to the puzzle. Whatever happened that Even's not sharing has something to do with who all left together. If I had to venture a guess, it would be that it's one of his family members and he wants to keep them out of the press. I'm guessing Morio or maybe Mikio...could be any number of people. Thank you so much for the update. You made my entire week. I hope everything and everyone in your life is doing better.
|
Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 06:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
okay nevermind scratch my last comment....wow, its just been one of those mornings you know? I'm JUST now reading Purity 3 and NOW I understand the whole youkai voice difference between purity 1 and 9. I've just never been a Ryo girl, Kich was always my fave so I sort of skipped that one... =^_^=
|
Title: Val kicks butt!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 06:30 PDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, so Subterfuge is Evan centered and Valerie (so far) is the heroine. She seriously kicks butt. I've been tired out of reading fics where the female is a helpless ole secretary gal who is saved by the male in the relationship. Financially, she is incapable and in danger. But Valerie is different. She doesnt need Evan in the classical sense of needing him for sustainability in life. With that aside, she can clearly want him without having to worry about "am i marrying/dating/having sex with Evan because I am using him" I think money is a problem that lots of couples dont think matters (which it really does). Valerie is also smart. Intelligent females are great to read and i cant thank you enough for writing her. What goes on in her brain is always interesting to think about. The chemistry is unmistakable between them and every chapter just amplifies it. Oh i know you dont do requests but have you ever thought about doing a another purity prequel with Sesshoumaru and Kagura? (I swear they are the couple that is least written about) Cuz i remember the one with Cain's parents.... >< random thought.... anyway, val in her element is amazing to read. (I love Bitches' answer about her legal name. I think my mother would have an aneurism if i ever changed my name to...bitches...) All in all, Zel's cast is hillarious and my fav? Oh and are you going to write a Gunnar/(insert name here) fic? He's STILL single and he needs to hurry up and get mated.... (laughing out loud... >
|
| Pages (158): [ « ‹ 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 › » ] |
