| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
| Pages (158): [ « ‹ 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 ] |
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:31 PST
Comment/Review:
"What's your name" That's priceless lol. Hmmm....what was up with the flashbacks I wonder; and who was this mysterious chick?
|
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 14:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Evan, you are such a bad puppy... I had forgotten that you mentioned in a previous author note that this story was about Evan. Let's just say it didn't take me very long to remember
|
Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 08:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great beginning!! I have a feeling that I'm going to enjoy Evan's story!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 05:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect that was so very Evan. I can't wait to see where this goes :)
|
| Pages (158): [ « ‹ 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 ] |
