| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 12:39 PDT
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This was freaking AWESOME!!!!!!!!! GREAT CHAPTER! I was laughing the whole time. Madison is very devious, but in a good way. LOL. Valerie seems way more open then I first thought she was. And Evan, I don't think there's a guy in the family just like him. LOL. He's one unique person!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 11:35 PDT
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Holy Hell in a hand basket. I'm breaking a sweat over here! Yep. It's offical. You are only, what, five chapters in, and this is my favorite so far. What can I say, give me citrus, and I'm your best friend forever!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 10:23 PDT
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Oh, wow... I'm actually amazed that Val didn't freak otu more... unless she already has a crush on Evan? (She totally does, in my opinion.)
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 20:17 PDT
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AAAGGGHHH I LOVE YOU!! I was wondering if you where gunna write Evans story lol. I was curious about Gunnars story too lol.
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 12:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I love this story! I'm finally caught up with everyone else and I just finished the latest chapter of Purity 7. Wooh...it's taken me, like, months! Anyway, I don't usually leave reviews because I figured it wasn't that important to tell you that I love your work since everyone else tells you the same thing...Anyway, I just had a couple of quick questions: Is Valerie a youkai, or a human? How long do you think this fic will be? and Will Madison have her own story about finding her mate? I just wondered if Evan would have a bit of a hard time dealing with that since they're like best friends. Just wondering since I didn't catch them in the actual story but I could have just overlooked them. Anyway, great job and I LOVE your work! lol
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 23:32 PST
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I really like Bugs, he's someone that I would hang out with and get a good laugh from. I've noticed that over the purity series that the characters have grown with the audience that you are writing to (and it's almost too late for new readers, it would take way too long to try to read all of the Purity chapters that you have so far). Starting with Inuyasha and Kagome, they were naive and almost completely innocent; and now there's Evan… that's all I have to say. Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 22:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, is V a youki or human or hanyou? Thanks for writing the chapter. Was amusing. J
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 16:47 PST
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Evan is hilarious. He just says what he thinks doesn't he???? Evan AND Madison together??? Now that's just asking for trouble lol. Great chapter Sue. Can't wait for the next one. I wonder how Valerie is going to feel about Madison giving Evan those pictures. She said okay, but she WAS intoxicated:)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 15:45 PST
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Lmao!! I loved how Maddy got Evan to agree to the terms lol. Oh that was too good!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 13:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love Maddy and Evan together!! Update soon please and keep up the wonderful work!! ^_^
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Title: **choked snort**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 10:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO rocked the wrong vote in the forum...and I'm so HAPPY! Yay! Evan's story! **backflips and struts like a chicken** Whoot! **goes to Home Depot to get ~ahem~ additional shower fixtures! This story is outrageous and I'm in love already! Write on, Sue! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 10:11 PST
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Poor Bugsy.. Poor Evan, for that matter... sounds like the poor guy had a boner for the entire chapter... Well, guess the game's on for Val, eh? Wonder what'll befall poor Marvin?
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 09:08 PST
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If Madison really did that with the pictures I'm sure Valerie should kick her ass. With a friend like that who needs an enemy?
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 23:22 PST
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It's amazing that Evan lasts as long as he does, with all the stupid stuff that he does. One of these days his hanyou/youkai heritage isn't going to save him from all of his bad habits. There has to be a limit, even with his remarkable healing. A good stay in the hospital after an accident would likely reform him to a degree (or the visit from his mother while he's stuck with the IV in his arm). Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 18:40 PST
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Wow, this is the most far out thing you've written. As usual it is a masterpiece, but this is just the most far flung idea. But kudos on making the Evan and hte other characters so beliveable. Madison seems kind of bi, and loose. I'm guessing its bad boy losens up the uptight chick while the chick teaches the guy some much needed manners. Good Story!
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