| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 23:55 EDT
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thank you, thank you, thank you! What a great update. I love this story and was very excited to see it updated. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very cute ending... I wonder what would happen if on of the miko's in training tried to come and visit Kagome...
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 14:26 EDT
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thank you for the update, i wonder how the other miko's will react to the fact that kagome is in love with her husband
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 14:11 EDT
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Amazing. Please continue the story, is just fantastic. You have a great gift to be able to put words together in such a captivating way. Thank you for sharing, I look forward to your future chapters and stories.
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Reviewed By: Florence On: August 09, 2008 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another amazing story! I've never been sucked into reading Alternate Universe stories that took place in the past, especially with so many war references, and of course, the disussions of battle and politics, but your style makes the story enchanting. I've read through everything without skipping a word, and it has kept me glued to the computer for hours. I await your next chapters impatiently! Please continue to write- you have a beautiful sense of writing and capturing the audience.
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 06:10 EDT
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love the story can't wait to finish it
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 20:08 EDT
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Wow, thanks for the quick update! So kind of you to not make us all wait too long after you left us hanging halfway through the tournament! I'm a little surprised that no one DID make a fuss about Kagome healing herself and the rosary being out of commission. Even if she did save one of their princes, there have to be some sorry jerks out there looking for an excuse, right? On the other hand, she had probably just won a lot of points for winning her second round injured, so maybe not so many! Not to be selfish, but I do hope your next chapter is out as quickly--this story just seems to keep moving right along, and I'm always looking forward to seeing updates! Cheers!
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Title: Major Awesomeness!
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The fight was awesome. I didn't wanna leave my chair till i was finished reading. I wait impatiently for the next chapter(s).
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Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 13:29 EDT
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keep going i want to know what eals happens so keep going plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 05:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the end of the fights... another good chapter.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 00:28 EDT
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kagome kicked but and no longer has the beads, what a great chapter
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Reviewed By: Kurisuchin On: July 20, 2008 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fricking sweet! I absolutely loved it! Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: blackrose626 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! The depth of each character is amazing. It is like I am there listening to their every thought, and feeling their every emotion. The plot is one that I have never read before which makes it all the more exciting. The detail with which you described each battle scene was incredible. Keep up the good work. Please update soon I cannot wait to read the rest of this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 12:26 EDT
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Holy cow! She actually won against all those youkai? That's hard to imagine. She must have been trained much as a slayer would've been. Poor Sesshoumaru, having to watch her get injured like that. So, he destroyed the beads? What about the treaty? If someone forces the issue and the beads are replaced, will she die? Makes me wonder if Tenseiga is still around. Hell, she saved one of their own. Now there will be a real struggle. She saves a life then humiliates youkai by defeating them. Such a quandary. I hope that wasn't a bad political move. There has to be assholes waiting for the moment to make trouble. Sesshoumaru is so sweet and Kagome is so strong. She was right, though. Best to have gotten that shoulder fixed immediately. I had expected the beads to stay in place until a true battle required their removal. Gina was great. You really make her and the other original characters true three dimensional personalities. The contest scenes were well done. I could follow the moves. Thank you so much for not using Japanese phrases for moves. I wouldn't be looking them up for a description that could have been done in English to begin with. I appreciate that very much. I'm really squee happy with this chapter and can't wait til the next! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 23:30 EDT
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.......noooooooooooooooo oooooooooooo......I'm screamen here......noooooooooooooooooo.....you finaly update and start the turnament the thing I've been waiting for since it was mentioned and you leave a dang cliff hanger like that....whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!......I this not koo you hear me not koo...what is Kagome going to do with a bumb arm...the stupid guy...the stupid cheating Demon lord.......Ya know what I think...I think it would be koo if they let her remove her 'collar' so she could heal her self....ya that sounds like a plan...come on she can't be out already I waited to long for her to be out already...she has to kick their *sses....so she can prove to fluffy the capable warrior she is........I still can't beleive he got her...but then she was up against a whole asortment of new....bigger guy...smaller ring...big guy with speed and a brain...it was not what she was used to so its understandable but still not fare....................please please please update this soon so I can find out what happened this is eating me up inside.....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ......Nyuka
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