| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 23:52 EDT
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holy shit! that was an awesome chapter! i implore you to work hard on getting the next chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 19:42 EDT
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Wooooo!! The ass-kicking begins! I wonder how Sess will handle her injury. He'd better let her keep fighting if she's able, because otherwise neither she nor I will ever forgive him. ^_~ I can't wait for your next chapter to see how it pans out! And poor Gina--she DOES have to take care of injured Kagome, after all...and I imagine deal with a prickly inu mate in the bargain! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 09:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
owwies...
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 On: July 14, 2008 02:53 EDT
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Awesome chapter!! I'm so excited to read more. Keep up the great writing.
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Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 00:15 EDT
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Well now we have to wait a while for the next chapter to see how the tournament continues. I'm wondering how Sesshomaru is going to react to the fact that her arm is hurt. I was at the edge of my seat practically reading this chapter. I was amazing. Please update as soon as you can!!!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like one of your other reviewers, I haven't read a fanfic in the gods know how long. This is quite a refreshing one to read. There's so much originality in it and like nothing I've ever read before. I enjoy the fact that Kagome is going to spar with warriors of the other houses and I'm DYING to know how that turns out. The writing quality runs so smoothly in the fanfic so far which is always a great thing. I love the fact that there is high vocabulary, also. Please update soon!!!
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Title: Please update soon!
Reviewed By: Sango-san On: July 07, 2008 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of the three stories I have read by you this is by far my fave. Enjoy your trip Amiga and post as soon as you can on this story and your others too! Lots of luv ~Sango-san~
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Title: Hard to put down
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 05:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first time reading a fanfiction in months...maybe a year and I am quite joyous I picked this one. I used to read fanfictions none stop and originality of this story is a beautifully shocking surprise. I look forward to the next chapter and I hope it is soon forthcoming.
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: June 24, 2008 23:48 EDT
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Another great installment! I am glad to here that the next chapter will be up soon. I got so used to you updating every 3 or 4 days that when you did not post for awhile I thought something was amiss. I am a HUGE fan of this story and I am wondering when Tensegia will be used...will it be Kagome or will it become hers?
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: June 24, 2008 05:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Again another lovely chapter from one of my favourite authors. XD Please say that Sess will change his mind and be the other member of the west to compete in the competition. If for no other reason then to make sure Kags is safe....lol It would be funny as all heck to see him finally have to fight his mate... aww poor sessie...lol *Giggles* I am very much enjoying this story and can only wait with anticipation for the next chapter... which I hope is going to be the tournament. Goo luck and have fun writing Kags beating their buts so bad they wished they were human...hehe I am looking forward to it.. *grin* Chao! InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: June 24, 2008 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I don't think I've stopped reading since I stared! This story os a,azong and I'm thoroughly enjoying it!!I was happy that you didn't make kagome and sesshomaru fall in love too quickly... you made it believable and you got me hooked! Stories like this are few and far in between so plz continue till this story has an ending!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 06:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a very good chapter... hope the child problems go away... (I meant the problem and not the child... lol)
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 02:23 EDT
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Your delaying the matches between the houses on purpose aren't you....lol....You just love to see your readers squirm with antisapation....sigh* but I can't believe that the other houses would be so dishonorable as to try and put Kagome out of commison on the first match....I don't like it...but Ya know what I think this is even better because thing could always NOT go as planed....I mean wouldn't it be like the best if after all the evil planning Kagome still managed to NOT get a depramising injury and was able to win the tornament....that would so ausome..........XD....I hope the tornament is next chapter cause I'm going out of my mind here.....oh and that was funny how Inutashio was tring to get Sesshoumaru to fight Kagome and he's all like "did she put you up to this" its funny really...XD......love updates............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 00:41 EDT
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God, I can't WAIT for her to kick all their asses. It would be awesome even if she did it with a broken arm. You can't let her NOT kick their asses...you just can't. >.< I will scream out my window at you if you do. Yeah...and then I'll keep reading. Sigh. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 23:33 EDT
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thank you for updating, i hope the next update comes soon. i want to see kagome beat the youkais
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