| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: @ On: April 04, 2008 04:11 EDT
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why do i have a feeling that sesshoumaru have something to do with the death of kagome's father. please update soon wanna know who the killer is...badly.
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Reviewed By: @ On: April 04, 2008 02:49 EDT
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who killed kagome's father? update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 16:35 EDT
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hehe, that was really good. I must say that you have a way with bringing humor into very serious things.
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Reviewed By: VampiricTears666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 07:24 EDT
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Tee hee...finished chapter 18 not too long ago, realized I didn't review, came back and found chapter 19! ^_^ I lurve this story!
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Reviewed By: @ On: April 03, 2008 02:26 EDT
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Why haven't you updated yet? Please update, your story is so good.
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That is the only word that does your story justice at the moment.
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh. This is so good. I can't wait for the rest of the story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 01:25 EDT
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whooaa naraku can't mark kagome! that'd be sooo bad! boo to the cliffie, can't wait for the next awesome chapter
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Trini421 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good, why haven't sess removed those damn beads! I can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!!!!!!! He can't do that! Please, Please, Please, udate soon!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 12:21 EDT
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I absolutly LOVE this story, it is amazing, you HAVE to update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so sad and then AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna steal this Sesshy!!!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:58 EDT
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Darn. I forgot something. I hope you don't mind this, but I have seen it appear in other stories and take a turn for being boring. In an effort to bring more depth to my characters, I studied those who were masterful at introspection. Now I'm afraid that my stories will become more telling than experiencing for the reader. It's a tight rope and I've been told that one story is losing its impact. So, I'm trying to allow my readers to experience more than explaining things to them. I've noticed that there are areas in your story that could use less telling and more action to show what is happening inside of a character. I don't have the fic open right now, so I can't give you examples. Take a look and see if there are places where you can have a person's action display what they are feeling as opposed to telling it. Please don't beat me up. You have a great story and I'm only trying to help with the only area that I think could use a little improvement. I'm having to watch for the same thing with mine. Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:15 EDT
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I am finding this story quite believable, interesting, and enjoyable to read. The suspense is what I like the most. Kagome's penchant for self-destruction is disturbing because it is very out of character, but I can see how her history would bring it about. I can't wait to see how you manage to make Sesshoumaru take the beads from around her neck. It will be exciting, I'm sure. Oh! I'm not sure if you realize it, but you can revise a chapter just by going into the edit option on a chapter and reloading it. The other settings can be left alone. When I saw all of the notices of new chapters, they only seemed to be revisions. That's why I mention it. Thanks for the great chapter and for updating so quickly! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhh, that's so nice. Although, the whipping was a bit harsh. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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