| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 08:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am grinning from ear to ear and sitting on the edge of my seat from sheer excitement!!! I can't wait to move on to chapter 3!!!!
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Title: Prologue
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 07:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've caught my attention with only the prologue. I cant wait to move on to the next chapter. ^_^ Tusuke Kounami
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 17:15 EDT
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OO, this story is absolutly woderful!!!!I can't wait for you update, and I hope you have a great time in Mexico and that it inspires your writing!! Have fun and update as soon as you get back!!!-HCDK
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: April 07, 2008 23:10 EDT
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I adore this story! I don't think that I could compliment you enough on your writing style, attention to detail, and character development. I have read other Sesshoumaru and Kagome pairings, but I have found few that compare. I also would like to thank you for the constant updating. I get so excited to see a new chapter posted that I ignore all to find out what happens next!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: l80hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Believe it or not, this fic had my total attention. It is romantic, yet not too mushy - the perfect hint of drama. I like Sesshomaru as a more approachable individual. An excellent read! I can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 00:18 EDT
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EEEEEEeeeeepppp..that was awesome..as usual XD I like how sesshy need to visit her in the infirmary...shows a weakness we dont normally see....wish I was kagome... anywho...have fun on your trip...and if you can update...cause i wuv your stuff so much...if u cant though thats ok cause its all about having fun...tell us how it went...XP
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 23:07 EDT
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Yes Finaly....XD...You have a new chapter after all the wonderful ones I read On fanfic......I'm so happy that you are still updateing so quickly....I love this story soooooo much...sniff* sniff*....and the fact that Sesshoumaru's solders are makeing sucky faces at Sesshoumaru's name......to much.....Kagome's going to kill herself with the constant removal of her beads to get rid of them...the hickys that is .............So anyways that is the reason Kagomes brother went crazy...it was that stupid General that has a unreal fasination in the exstinction of an entire race.....well one of them any ways.........I can't wait until the negotiations....I mean is it going to go well or is she going to say something she should not.......ohhh...I can't wait....XD.........Lots of love for updates......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: sovereigntytoo lazy tobothersigninginatschool On: April 06, 2008 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bordello, I had to look it up.... lol I loved what Gina said.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best story i've read for awhile!! now be a good writer and make me more chappies!! *threatening with a lollipop* this story has a fresh air about it! i totally love it.*thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:21 EDT
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HAHAHA...poor sesshoumaru...cant wait to see peoples expressions when they see that...and this was another great chapter...as usaul i cant wait for the next one but you have a fun time on your trip...but update when u get back XD thx
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:03 EDT
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Awww...that was so romantic...i cant wait till they have kids are you going to continue the story to that point and after a birth or isnt that planned at all? just wondering cause i think u can do it and really well...good luck and i cant wait to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 00:42 EDT
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WOW...I saw this and never new it would be this good...i love the story..usually i am really picky with sesshoumaru/kagome pairings because of it being OC but u got them perfectly and the whole storyline works...i cant stop saying how much i love it...I freaked at the intense parts and felt warm and fuzzy at the romance between the two and laughed like crazy at the way you have them bicker...this is truly an amazing story and i will look into your other works but update thisone as much as you can because it is amazing and i will recommend it to others...best of luck on the next chapter...i will be readily awaiting its update XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason Why I like this fic for lines like these............ "Oh, let me tease you. For old times' sake at least." "Old times' sake? I wasn't under the impression you'd ever stopped." "You're a good story teller," she murmured. He wondered at what point she fell asleep.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
on chapter 2 Kagome needs a good Pych and some drugs....
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how nice, update soon!
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