| "The 500 Year Engagement" Reviews/Comments [ 222 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome really got the rumor mill started with that story. The whole restaurant is probably ready to spread the story about Kagome. It might be interesting to see what rumors are picked up by Mr Sato's man. It might be interesting to see what would happen if they picked up a "mom" reference. Of course if anyone picked on Midori their life would be over, between Inuyasha and Kagome any threat to their pup would be annihilated. The byplay with the policeman was hilarious, especially the way Sango reacted to the whole thing. I am waiting for the next chapter to pick me up and laugh at. You have a true affinity for writing comedy.
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Reviewed By: KellyPawel On: August 12, 2008 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave it the mixed revies because I'm still suffering from hentai-overload with this fic. It's still enjoyable, though, but the quality is slipping. Tis an unfortunate-aspect of Hentai. Soon or later, the plot in the story (if the story has a plot) suffers :( On the bright side: The award for Best writer, director, and Actress in a sene goes to... Higurashi Kagome for announcing that She's Pregnant!!
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is being evil her but I love it. Give me more.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 01:04 EDT
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please update soon i love this i wonder what kagome is having boy or girl and what's it's name going to be? i wonder what Kano has in store? keep up the good work! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again awesome job with the newest chapter :) I cant wait to see what Kano is planning next and what is school gonna be like on monday lol hope to see more :D
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Title: Loving it.
Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rely like this story. I hope you will do more with it and I look foward to seeing Kagome doing more with the school. I realy want to see Iny lose it to Hobo though.
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: kagome167784499 On: July 22, 2008 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story,iam galide inuyasha and eferyone eals is okay, can't wath to ready wath heaapins next
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's amazing that Kagome gets aroused even after that getting eaten and losing breath episode... Just goes to show her drive is very strong! Wonder what the plan on land is?!? Well, cute chapter! anime~rocks~1010
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo Kagome got smarter with ya barrier XD and her demon blood makes me laugh XD
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I can't wait to hear what Sango and especially Miroku say to Kagome and Inuyasha about their swimming "party". And I don't even want to think about what Rin and Sesshomaru would say (actually yes I do, I think it would be hilarious). I like what you did between Kagome and Kano much better than what I thought happened for two reasons: one, it extends the story by keeping Kano alive to battle longer (true Rumiko Takahashi style there), and two, it is just funnier. Poor Mr. Sato keeps losing girls, first the secretary then the budding actress. Actually I feel sorrier for the girls than I do for Mr. Sato. Shouldn't the police start looking for these missing girls, it might be interesting to see how Mr. Sato handles being suspected by the police in the disappearance of the two girls and counting. Another thing I am curious about is what Midori has been doing while her parents have been busy, has she been with Houjo or her mother's family, or both? I am looking forward to seeing where you take us all next.
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Reviewed By: Kellybug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! What a nioce lay-up! I must admit, after I read Kagome's first lines, I was thinking, "She hasn't learned much in 500 years!" But, THEN! She turned the tables of Kano!! Look who got caught in the fish-trap ;) Yes, a Miko's barrier makes a great bargaining-chip!! :))
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 09:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me again... WHAT HAPPENED TO KAGOME??? Uwahh, what's with the cliffy?? Hahaha Inuyasha showed hi horn dogness again, I see... And what exactly did Kirara do to Miroku? Did she bite "them"? Funny and nice chap and please update... Thanks and cheers! anime~rocks~1010
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Reviewed By: hanyou4ever On: July 11, 2008 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! What happened to Kagome? Write more!!!!!! The suspense is killing me!!!!!
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Title: cool title
Reviewed By: 674kagome On: July 10, 2008 10:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plaisce don't like off kagome, inuyasha, sango or mriouk., and there kid or inuyasha's and kagome's pups. but the sec deaimo you can. but outhere than that love the story, can't wath to ready mouer.
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Reviewed By: kagome231 On: July 09, 2008 11:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have better not killed off kagome, but outher than that i liove the story , or her and inuyasha pups
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