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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 09:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA Kirara got Miroku?? OMG thats funny!! i loved that part!!!!
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Title: Boring...???
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what Kellybug's problem is, but ANY good story with *actual* story content needs a little buildup now and then. I thought this chapter balanced perfectly, so that the characters had a moment to catch their breath and at least attempt to relax, before jumping right back into the next crisis. The ending was perfect. Kagome has obviously erected a barrier or something, so I'm not worried for her safety, but it will be interesting when everyone moves in to rescue her, and discovers her bottoms are missing. LOL. I wonder if Inuyasha will think to keep her swim shorts handy with all the other ruckus going on? At least it's in the middle of the night, so no one is around but her friends.
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Reviewed By: Kellybug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Except for a couple of flashes of brilliance, I was reminded of why I generally dislike (hate?) hentai-fics: If they have ANY kind of story at all - they become ... stupid. THIS was the stupid-chapter :( Kirara's actions were amusing, mainly because Miroku's reaction was so realistic, and I especially loved the cans of Chicken-of-the-Sea (and the explanation of Sea-Youkai was VERY much in Sesshoumaru's character)! But - other than that - the chapter was boring :( Not up to the rest of this story :(
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Brandospands On: July 06, 2008 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay very awesome love it when Inuyasha was like what are hooters lol very very awesome job on this chapter enjoyed it alot and cant wait to read the next one keep up the good work!! :D
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 19:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I suspect Kagome just purified Kano out of existence. I hope that the release of so much spiritual energy didn't hurt the baby Kagome is carrying. This should take care of Kano so that just leaves Mr. Sato to be dealt with. I can't wait to see what the gang ends up doing to him.
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Title: I LOVVEED THIS STORY!
Reviewed By: Brandospands On: July 06, 2008 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this was the best Inuyasha fanfic I have ever ever ever ever read and I want to read more! I read every single one of them today and love them to death please right more!! thank you soooo much for writing these and letting us be able to read such a creative story!! Thank you ^_^!!
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 09:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again! What crazy men, even holding body parts of sexy models! And Miroku and Sango got it going on huh? Kagome's persistence in everything is truly priceless. Miroku would have been too pissed if she kept on! And Inuyasha just looooves teasing the bouzou and the taijiya, eh? I pity Mr. Sato, though. Didn't get his chance... Kano had been sabotaging his life ever since! Anyway, another nice chapter and thanks for it! Till the next time, anime~rocks~1010
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 04:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awww Miroku... never get tired of him lol and ooo Kagome is a smart cookie :P
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Reviewed By: Kellybug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another supurb chapter!! I'd say the Miko is pissed :) But, at least, Souta has something to look foreward to :)) It's a good the the boy isn't a lech ;)) When are we going to have Sashimi-no-Kano ? :))
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I think there is going to be a trap set up for the youkai in the near future? It might not be successful but they will attempt one. I guessed correctly about the speedo. I am not surprised by Miroku's reaction to Sango in a suit and Inuyasha made a nice save on his reaction. But I really would have liked to hear more about Sango's reaction to Miroku and Inuyasha. The way you phrase the comment about the digital photos at the show makes me think that Kagome didn't erase them. I just hope any showing her and her powers being active didn't come out or Kagome is going to be in trouble. I feel sorry for the receptionist that was eaten though. She was trying to use sex to get into show business but she didn't deserve to be a meal for Kano. I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru reacts to a possible uprising from the sea.
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 08:35 EDT
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So that's what Kagome's grandpa is up to! Sutras for... *ehem!* Oooohhh... Kagome fell for the contest trap... But she still has very good instincts to think that some thing's "fishy" (nice pun, ahaha)... And I wonder how her school will react when they find out she's pregnant... and HAPPY!?! Well, great chap as usual... And more worth the while waiting... At least I have this thing called "school" to make me busy! anime~rocks~1010
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 16:06 EDT
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Great chapter! I love the way you have them interacting and such in this one, and how that niggling doubt is plaguing Kagome! It's very in character for her, and the way she tries to brush it off when one of them questions her about it! the best was the "viagra" sutras!! where do u come up with this stuff??!! too funny!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I know what was wrong that Kagome was trying to think of, the credit card bill would go to her home with Inuyasha and not the shrine. I wonder when she will think of it? I love that Kagome got the rumor mill started about pregnancy and marriage, I can't wait to see what her modern friends and Houjo have to say about it all. There is one other reaction to swim wear I am looking forward to and it is Sango's to Miroku in a swimsuit, especially if the girls get him a speedo. He has the physique that could pull it off well.
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Title: Good.
Reviewed By: yellojello03 On: June 23, 2008 16:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. I do have to say that was good, but bad. You have some thing lacking in here. It's kinda hard to tell but there's some thing lacking in here. I know one thing i cant find out why there all of a sudden kissing, and then the part at how it's like they feel every thing the other partner feel's. I'm guessing you made the characters engaged like you said. (but in the story you don't say there engaged. So to me? I'm lost in thought.) If you can explain it some how, then i wont just get lost at what your trying to say. I'll keep reading, in till i actually get what your trying to input here. Please don't take this as a flame. I'm some one from fanfiction.net. My guy is yellojello03. I only found this place cause my favorite author from fanfiction.net has a guy here, and i wanted to read her story's. That's how i found yours so, ta DA! But back to my point great start, but still a little off. from, yellojello03
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooohh... Nice! Kaggies grandpa has many girls huh? Unbelievable... And Mr. Sato really doesn't know when to stop, huh? Oh well, I guess I have to wait patiently for the next update... Anyway, it always is worth the wait! Til the next time, anime~rocks~1010
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