| "The 500 Year Engagement" Reviews/Comments [ 222 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nice EGan On: June 21, 2008 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hello!!! ^.^ Just start reading you'r fanfic...it's so original! love it! i love the way you put the characters, it's so funny! I'm so loving this story ^.~ i hope you continue!! kisses and cheers! ^-^ Nice EGan
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 06:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not surprised the seedy looking man was disposed of so quickly, he deserved it. Poor pregnant Kagome is the focus of another plot against her. Inuyasha's explanation to Miroku was priceless, but shouldn't he be over the embarrassment of explaining the birds and the bees, he did have several sons. It should be interesting how the "pack" reacts to the sea youkai trying to gain more power, Miroku and Sango will be a big help. I am getting curious about this youkai taint that Miroku, Sango and now their unborn child has. I can't wait to see where you lead the characters next.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 06:35 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 12:02 EDT
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I'd like to see how Kagome hides a pregnancy from her school. ;p Good update! Keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Miroku turning a girl down??? WOW!!
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Reviewed By: KPawel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give you anything higher than a "10" for this chapter, I WOULD!! The scene with Sato, Kano, and the seedy photographer, was PRICELESS!And.. Souta scores a double-play in his come-backs with his mama and sister!! And, is seems, he was able to get away with it :)
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 23:26 EDT
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Really funy! I laughed so much! Somehow I could see the twins coming... I guess it just fits. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dacl73 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story, as always. Just one problem. You don't tip in Japan, ever. It is considered rude to tip in fact. To them, you are saying either their employers are not paying them enough, or that the need the tip to give you good service. Either way it is an insult to tip in Japan.
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so loving this story....poor Kagome and all her little catastrophies! The references to their past memories are delightful! The sages village is one of my fave eps! And Sango's reaction to Miroku in jeans had me in stitches! There are so many unique little plot devices in this story that keep me intrigued to find out what happens next!! I eagerly await your next installment!
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! I see you're up at it again, so I figure you're okay now... Thank the kamis, haha! Kagome really gets what she wants, huh? And Midori did a pretty responsible thing right there. Kagome shouting "Yes!" was hilarious! Haha!! Thanks for updating and keep up the good work? Anyways, cheers!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 06:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha i love those moments, when you jump up in class yelling something out lol great times XD
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you are feeling better, getting sick at this time of the year is awful. I don't see this ending well for Mr. Sato. If Kano doesn't get him Sesshomaru will or is it the other way around... Kagome getting pregnant in the middle of class was hilarious. She is never going to finish school at this rate. And Inuyasha's reaction to her request was great. Kagome's mom deserves grandkids that she can spoil and watch grow. She has so many that she missed seeing grow. It might make Kagome and Inuyasha's other children jealous seeing how the newest member of the family gets to grow up with a grandmother, great grandfather and uncle that isn't poisonous. I can't wait to see what happens next between Midori and Houjo, he seems smitten with her and vice versa. It will be interesting to see how Inuyasha reacts to his daughter dating and getting serious about his wife's ex-boyfriend. I look forward to seeing an update from you since I know that it will bring a smile to my face if not deep belly laughs.
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Reviewed By: KPawel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't stop from laughing!! :) So.. the sharks are schooling :) Kano is thinkin of eating Kagom to gain the Shikon-no-Tama?? I can only respond in one word: SUSHIMI!!!! And, I enjoyed Mrs. Higurashi's responce to her daughter's latest conversation ;) Soutra is DEFINITELY growing up !! the conversation was getting interesting ?? ;)
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 04:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was hilarious! Thanks for it... You really are amazing! Shippo and his mate are somewhat like Inuyasha and Kagome, huh? Anyway, great fic going on and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 04:24 EDT
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I'm really enjoying this & am looking forward to more, I wanna know what happens with Sato & the shark youkai. Just as an FYI on chapter 14 it's katana/katanas not kitana/kitanas for the swords, hope this helps.
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