| "Tales of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 16:35 CST
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Okay, how did I miss reading this one? I really, really loved it! Kagome's thoughts about her dream were so very poignant. At first, i thought it was inuyasha who told her she didn't belong there anymore, but then she realized it was Hiei's arms she felt. I am a little saddened that she feels she cannot make it on her own--that she HAS to have someone like Hiei around. But, of course, it was so very nice to have her wake up and realize she WAS holding Hiei's cape or scarf or whatever. Even though he was at the window, obviously he had been close enough to touch her. And despite his words, we know he missed her, too. I am so curious to see what her reaction will be to his changed appearance. And, honestly, I am seriously wondering how Hiei may deal with a returned Inuyasha, when they reach that point in the canon storyline. Very nice chapter. Enough with the tears, though! On with the good stuff! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: December 26, 2008 23:38 CST
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Thanks for the 2 for one.^^ Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2008 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the new chapters! I love this story and I always look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS (not logged in) On: December 22, 2008 14:58 CST
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Ah, the heart ache. Like the new chapter, you write emotional stuff so well. Loved it, love you lol. Keep it up and good luck in all you do.
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 21:03 CST
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wow this is very good plzzz update soon i love it very much and will patiently wait for your update.
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Reviewed By: madmiko, notsignedin On: December 16, 2008 06:15 CST
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Yay! He has returned! Poor Kagome. (I seem to say that a lot. LOL!) She has been thinking she drove him away. That rotten little fire demon owes her. And he will be returning rather changed, now that he has mastered the dragon. I wonder if that will come into play? I love getting to see inside Kagome's head, and her thoughts about Hiei and Inuyasha seemed very natural. Now, it's time to see if missing her while he was away will affect the way he is with her now. ^_~
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Souta was right, Kagome is predictable because every time she was upset over Inuyasha she cried in front of the Goshinboku. This was a sad chapter, what with Kagome crying and all. Also, I liked the imagery of the storm reflecting Kagome's sadness. I can't wait until Hiei and Kagome see eachother again! :)
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 10:26 CST
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Ah! So cute, Hiei had a lot of time to think about what he wanted and he still denies it to a certain extent. Stubborn men are just the cutest things ever lol.Loved the chapter (of course you wrote it after all)and I look forward to see what part Kurama plays in upcoming chapter... if he does, it seems kinda like he will with the way you wrote this chapter at least. Anyway looking forwrad to more, you're still the best and good luck in all you work on
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome chapters. story and all o.o. and i agree with ladynorth76. the characters are definately not OOC. but the question still stays. you'll probably have to have kurama find out sooner or later? haha maybe maybe not. but keep writing. your chapters are beyond good =]
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 28, 2008 02:09 CST
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Of course I enjoyed it!^^ I think the characters are acting in character. I'm guessing you're going to have Kurama find out about Kagome somehow or no? Update soon! I look forward to your updates. No one seems to write good Hiei/Kagome fanfics anymore. :( Thanks.
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 23:59 CST
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Yet another great chapter, can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 22, 2008 13:47 CST
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You could never disappoint!^^ Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 23:58 CST
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It seems that Hiei is finally coming to terms with the fact that he has feelings for Kagome. I liked the part where he thought about being willingly kissed by a Miko and rubbing it in Kurama's face. That was amusing. I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for another!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 17, 2008 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter. I look forward to your chapters.^^ Is Kagome going to get really powerful and while Hiei is away learn her new abilities that have been granted her? Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 10:03 CST
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poor kagome she thinks hiei doesnt like her and now that he's going to be gone she'll blame herself
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