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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 01:51 CST
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I loved the emotional connection that they shared when they were looking at the stars, it was very touching. Oh, and they KISSED!! YAY!! Ok, so technically SHE kissed HIM, but it was still sweet. Thanks for posting, I hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 22:37 CST
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I really enjoy this series of one-shots and hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 04, 2008 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new update. I loved how she went looking for him. Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 10:41 CST
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Those two are just so cute together. It was amusing sending a sick Kagome after Hiei, very funny and very Kagome-ish move to include. Loved the chapter, love you lol. Look forward to the next chapter, keep up your awesome work and good luck on anything else you work on.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 06:04 CST
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Heh heh! First Kagome thinks Hiei has upset their routine, then I thought YOU had upset ours. LOL! When I started reading, I went "Hey! Kagome had a chapter LAST week." So, see? I had the very same expectations for his appearance. (And I'm not even feverish. ^_~) It was fun to have a chapter where the action took place and we got a look at it from both sides. I have to say, I am completely embarrassed for her for not realizing it wasn't TIME for him to show up yet. We'll chalk it all up to the fever, though, and not mention she was extra-anxious to see him because of her growing feelings. Kudos for mentioning her perfectly healthy reaction to him. And I had to laugh when Hiei's reaction to having to hold her and carry her was that he didn't want to have to because he knew he liked it and he didn't want to like it, and Kaogme's reaction was "Oh! This is nice! He's all muscle-y!" Hee hee hee! She'll be falling down and twisting her ankle all the time now. ^_~ Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 21:17 CST
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Again an awesome chapter. It was a nice approach- the mom, outsider view to have. It's always when you have someone else say something to you that you just barely recognize yourself, to go, 'oh wow that's right'. Once again I'm amused by how it ends with Kags trying to steer clear from the idea of possible emotions and falling back on that safety net title of "friend". Cute chapter and well written. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 02, 2008 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They're finally starting to fall in love!^^ Yay! Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 03:22 CDT
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What? No Hiei? *stuffs piece of dark chocolate in mouth and pouts* Heh heh! You can't fool your mother, even if you're trying to fool yourself. And it is often easier for someone else to see something that is so close to you that you can't. I really enjoyed the way you had her mother let her know that it really wasn't a secret. And the bit about inviting him to come around in the daytime was cute. The poor woman probably doesn't have a clue that Kagome's "friend" is a demon. She went looking for him to tell him off for not showing up? She must be feverish. Most gals I know, (including myself!), would pay him back in kind and not be there the next time he DID show up. So glad I'm older and wiser now and know that guys don't realize you're purposefully avoiding them to teach them a lesson when you are. LOL! But she's going to corner him, huh? Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. ^_^
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 10:02 CDT
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I loved this chapter of course, probably cuz you're such a fantasic writer and I haven't yet found a reason to dislike anyhing you've worked on. I liked the last part of this, that he was willing to blame himself but at the same time he off set it by saying he could still blame her. I thought it was childishly cute. His denial is also entertaining because I can especially relate when I tried to avoid hanging out with my best guy friend because he wanted to be more than friends and I went into an "I don't need guys" mode and then it became "it's all his fault" mode and continued from there. It was horrible, poor guy. I'm glad he had such patience for someone as insufferable as me. It was enjoyable and I can't wait for the next chapter. You continue to be among my favorite writers. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: October 21, 2008 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't review the last chapter.^^ I want to say that both chapters were astounding! I loved them. Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 03:17 CDT
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I think the line I liked best in this latest chapter was the one where Hiei wondered when she began stealing little pieces of his heart. That is just worded so well. A masterful touch. ^_^ Because that is a much more accurate description than simply "stealing his heart." It's gradual, and she's doing it piece by piece, with all the little things she does without even knowing she's doing them. As you also said so well, she's just Kagome. It's not one particular thing he can pinpoint, though he is certainly able to list more and more things he enjoys about her. ^_~I liked the idea that he ended up just staying there,too, because there wasn't any other place he preferred or needed to be. So reluctant, but so helpless to resist. I suppose he will have to start meeting her in her room now that the weather is turning cold. ^_~ I'm still loving this!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 03:20 CDT
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Very nice! A great follow-up to the last chapter. And yes, there's just something very appealing about a jealous Hiei. ^_^ Again, you managed to really portray Kagome in a very "real" fashion. Not being able to get Hiei (and Inuyasha) out of her mind, even though she was so angry at him and hurt by what he had said, just struck me as a very realistic reaction. I loved the tidbit you threw us that she supposed Inuyasha had probably found someone else by now--someone who didn't remind him of Kikyou. That was a nice touch. Having Hiei stay away after their last encounter was very much IC for him, too, I think. And I liked the way you had Kagome tell him that emotions are only weaknesses if you think they are. Very, very nice! This was a wonderful treat. And, BTW, I would recommend "Flame of Recca." I actually read it before YYH and I have heard the two compared quite often. (There's also a big "tournament" arc in FoR.)
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: October 13, 2008 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're so welcome. I loved the new chapter. I can't help, but bounce with giddiness when Hiei gets jealous.^^ I can't wait for more updates! :P Thanks for answering my questions.^^
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i love that he was jealous wow sorry that was not able to review soon I have been looking for work and finally got hired i love you story please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 07:34 CDT
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thanks for the update, can i have another tomorrow?
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