| "Fruit of the Forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 03:33 EST
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I can't help but wonder if they are in fact siblings. I'm kinda expecting that photo to show perhaps Inuyasha's real birth mother holding him or some such. I'm also kinda half expecting their parents to be sleeper agents or something. Or maybe they stole Inuyasha when he was a baby and that why they don't want him going to America. Or... as you can see my brain is working up all kinds of scenarios that sound very spy movie. I also am really curious as to Kagome's take on their incident. You stated at the beginning that it was not rape... which makes me wonder what was she saying that his brain was to fuzzy to hear? And did he actually see betrayal in her eyes or was that just his interpretation of something else entirely? I eagerly look forward to the aftermath of his lapse in control.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome finally found out about kouga & kikyo... what is up with inuyasha & kagome's parents?... what will inuyasha decide to do after his talk with rex... the birthday didn't end well... and looks like inuyasha finally let his feelings loose with kagome... what will kagome's reactions be after... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 00:04 EST
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Welcome back after a long absence! Nice to hear you got your computer problems worked out. Another interesting chapter..... everyone's deeds seem to have been put in the light, pretty much..... now you've got me waiting for the responses to come.... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOO!
Reviewed By: lifesabitch25 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 22:21 EST
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You can not do this to me, it was just getting so good and then you cut me off. This is really good story and I can not wait for the next chapter. It is well written and there are many twist and under-line plots going on with in the chapter.
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Title: YOUR FATE IS IN YOUR HANDS
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FOR I am OLDDOG 333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. they are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a coupLe of hours before coming home!!!! OLDDOG333^-^ YOUR FATE IS IN YOUR HANDS
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Reviewed By: inusouta On: November 10, 2008 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this capter was great keep up the great work =D
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 21:13 EST
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Interesting story, good writing, and amazing speed in updates... What else can a reader ask for? I congratulate you for your courage to try such a topic in your story. I'm really looking forward to see how you will pull it off.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things aren't going well for inuyasha... what's up with the parents... and kagome is clueless about what's happening around her... wonder when she'll find out... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: The Iron Reaper On: November 03, 2008 23:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, Everything is well written and very original. I hope you contiue this through to the end, many wonderful stories like this one have been dropped this year (I read just about any Inu/Kag, Inu/Sess, Inu/San, Inu/Mir, Inu/Kik and Inu/Kouga story on this and 2 other sites) Please continue writing whenever possible. Your Faithful Reader, Reaper
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 15:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems interesting, you've caught my attention... I'll keep reading ;)
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 14:01 EST
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What an interesting fic! No one really seems to be where you would think they would be.... Inuyasha the smart one? Kagome and Kouga in a good relationship? (and Kouga cheating with Kikyo?) Miroku and Sango with the relationship problems? Oh, not to mention Kagome and Inuyasha are related.. (at least, thus far, I'm curious to see if they won't discover they're not.) I'm quite interested to see where you go with this fic! BTW, I love the frequent updates, but I hope you don't burn yourself out. This is such an interesting idea, that it would be such a pity to see it not finished. Again, cheers, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 13:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... hope kagome finds out about kouga & kikyo soon... maybe catch them in the act... what's inuyasha getting himself into... seems like a spy or agent thing... sango sure has issues... wonder what happens next... things are getting complicated... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LY On: November 03, 2008 12:07 EST
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Your fanfic is very well written, i'm really enjoying it. Though in a new, somewhat twisted way, Inuyasha still seems true to the original, in his insecurities and alienation, and Kagome still staying by his side. I have to say, the thought of any type of incest story usually sets me on edge and i would ignore it all together. But this one caught my interest and i find myself rooting for Inuyasha. I think the ability to make a reader identify with a character they would normally hate is a sign of a great writer. I hope to read more from you.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 06:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: 44inu-yasha44 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 18:21 EST
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I like this story I'm very curious on how the inuyasha and kagome things is gunna work out KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK :D
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