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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
although incest gives me the squicks, and it might be a while before I can look another I/K lemon in the eye again, this was rather entertaining! Way to not shy away from exploring their sexuality, both between siblings and *gasp* two girls who aren't nessecarily lesbians. Very deep in a Freudian sort of way. And I totally loved the sci-fi, crazy genetics twist! Keep up the creative, slightly twisted good work!
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Title: Finally Finished
Reviewed By: WhatVVB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 01:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally finished reading this story. Took me awhile. Good work I really liked it. I was debating to read it, but decided to cuz it was different. Glad I did. I look forward to reading more stuff from you!
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Reviewed By: kathleen On: January 02, 2009 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was pretty amazing it reminds me of that show called eureka on the sci fi channel but it would have been cool if she told him she ha a bun in the oven i liked it
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Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: laichi16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hoping for some dramatic adoption story, but that's okay. The story kinda reminds me of "Flowers in the Attic," only they were blood siblings. It seems Inuyasha and Kagome were sort of half siblings. I think it would be like Kagome being in love with the male version of herself while mixed with two other DNAs. In a way, Inuyasha is only 1/2 of Kagome... I think. I truly enjoyed this story because it was very creative, realistic, and in depth. The emotions were believable, and just the general characters themselves. I look forward to reading more writting by you!
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Reviewed By: sinonymous On: December 29, 2008 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so the incest bothered me a bit, but i really enjoyed your story. i like how i thought hey just normal relationships here oing out of control...then later on all this aura stuff pops out. i have one question though. so are inuyasha and kagome realllyyyy blood related? i enjoyed inuyashas character! nevermind the incest, haha.
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 12:51 EST
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I don't usually read story of incest but this was really good!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... nice ending... kinda sad about their lost communication with their parents but seems that things worked out for inuyasha & kagome... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY interesting... this could even have a sequel if you wanted it... great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 13:48 EST
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BTW: where would sesshoumaru be in this fic? How about Ayame? And what about the Naraku-tachi?
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 13:45 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I feel like a sicko but i honestly love your fic. I love a good angst fic (seriously not enough good ones these days) and ur fic is AMAZING!! This review is one horrible one (i normally write better ones) but i have like no time right now. I'll reread your fic and make better comments. ^___^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inukag4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cliffy!! omg this story is full oof angst!! its great! mm is kagome the one that is adopted or are they really siblings wooow you have a very interesting plot here Will Inu leave? things happened so fast I was kinda expecting to all happen a little later but keep up the goos work! u are soo cooool!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 03:50 EST
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no errors that I saw.... but then again I wouldn't be asking the girl with the cold... great lines To Inuyasha's surprise, Rex shook his head. "No, you are quite sane, eccentric maybe, but sane. We don't mind eccentric." "Yes, that is true. You're parents are… a unique case. A major problem with dealing with brilliant people is that they often find brilliant ways to blackmail you. It was deemed better to let them go than to risk them exposing everything about Aura." Even now, as she felt him soften inside her, she wasn't sure of her feelings. For him, he had sex with the woman he loved. For her…. I just had sex with my brother…
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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but then again what happened afterwards it was kagome who started it... what will inuyasha do now?... hope he does talk to his parents though... maybe things will be clearer... update soon... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... a natural reaction from kagome - especially after what happened with her and inuyasha... good that rex spoke with inuyasha... got some info on his parents... (in the picture who was the other couple - kagome's parents maybe?... since inuyasha asked rex if he's adopted but he isn't - he forgot to ask about kagome?... that'd be an interesting twist...) anyway wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: luvininu27 On: December 13, 2008 11:10 EST
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First let me say I really like this fic. This chapter left me with an incredibly raw feeling. I really felt for Inuyasha in this. I know he is just a character but I wanted so badly for Kagome to be able to hear his thoughts and feel the emotions that were going through him. He was so devastated and at the same time paralyzed. I also felt for Kagome in this. To realize that the reason your "brother" is in love with you and having it dawn on you that he is moving away because of you is a lot to take. I use quotes around brother because even though the characters don't know it yet, I think you've been fairly direct at hinting that Inuyasha is probably not a blood relation to Kagome. I think that love finds a way sometimes even when there are impossible barriers in the way. Keep up the great writing. I can't wait for more.
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