| "Mayumi's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now Trace should be shaking in his boots over what he let slip to Mayumi. She now knows that her family can hurt him and I am sure that it won't take long for them to figure out how. She just has to explain to her father that she met his father by time traveling further into the past. That is going to be a large temptation for Inuyasha to be able to meet his father. I just hope dad doesn't air the "anti-hanyou" garbage in Inuyasha's hearing if Inuyasha does go back. And they have a ready made "trap" for Trace when everyone guesses how to hurt him. They just have to let Trace think he found a way to get to the jewel. I think it is going to be an interesting confrontation. And poor Daichi is being kept in the dark about so much. Is that going to be when he loses Mayumi? I can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 01:03 EDT
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some people just don't pay attention *shakes head* and i'm not just talking about your story. ♣ such a wonderful twist. i'm thinking midoriko didn't have kids as she was a maiden miko-- but could have had siblings who may have founded the taijia village? therefore the miko rin and taijia kohaku being kagome's/mayumi's ancestors. ? and of course whether izayoi had powers-- and we all know about inu-no-taisho [gramps, lol] was where yasha got his powers. ♦ one is wondering if fenn is going to become involved in trace's defeat? ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who is mayumi? is she someone else in the future? i can't wait until the next chapter! keep up the awesome work :) i love your stories:)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting confrontation between Trace and Mayumi. It answered some of the questions about Trace's origins and motivations. I am sure that as soon as Inuyasha learns of this he is going to confront Fenn about the whole thing. I am sure Fenn is up for an uncomfortable confrontation. In some ways I can't wait to see what is happening in the modern era and how Kagome and Inuyasha are dealing with all the grandkids that they have through Mayumi. It should be especially interesting for Kagome to have grandchildren that are older than she is. But I also don't want to see that because it means this story will be over.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 10:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed at Mayumi's meeting with the priest. And Daichi's reactions to guns was hilarious also. Sesshomaru needs to get a new human representative quickly. The encounter with Trace was intriguing and set all kinds of possibilities going in my head. Inuyasha's reaction to Mayumi's encounters was spot on, he would find the priest funny and get angry about Trace. I feel he will be hanging out more in the past to watch over his daughter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 02:31 EDT
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a great book to read: 'sho♦gun' by james clavell~ ♣ one wonders why the 'strange youkai' doesn't elaborate so that she can at least consider his reasons. compliance can be obtained if the explanation is good enough. cryptic responses will not work. ♠ love the 'typical guy' responses. ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting...hmmm i wonder what will happen!:) keep up the awesome work!! thank you very much:)
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is the end coming near?!?!?!?!?!?!? only time will tell thank u so much for ur stories! keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 15:18 EDT
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both time lines keep progressing and pretty soon should catch up to the time kagome first starts going back. one wonders if the 'bad youkai' will be trying to cause problems with that.-- or if he can. ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2009 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what sweet sorrow is the life we live:) i can't belive what has happened! it must be hard for kagome not to be able to live with her grandchildren and see them grow:( and not even to attend her granddaughter's wedding how sad...keep up the awesome work:) this deserves a 20 not a 10 but thats all it will let me give:)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 22:45 EDT
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everything seems like it will come full circle as time goes on. interesting to find out what causes her to vanish and if she would eventually appear again. ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reqlly want to know what will happen next! i just hope everything will be ok...it was so sad that sango and miroku did they will forever live in my heart:) who would have thunk that inuyasha's dad didn't like hanyou keep up the awesome work:)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 13:46 EDT
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in a way-- one can understand how he feels but he has kids to think about! good thing it turns out for them. one wonders what causes her to get stuck away from her family. it's like we know the ending but not a clue how things turned out that way. hearts;
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good conclusion to Kazuki's side story of being in the past. It tied everything up well and left no loose ends, at least none that I noticed. Though I feel bad for his kids because they lose both parents and the only grandparents that they know so quickly together. It was a touching scene in how you described Sango and Kagome not noticing that Kagome hasn't aged and that they treated each other as the close friends that they were. I was glad to hear that Kagome had at least one child that shared her love of education and became the doctor she dreamed of becoming. I do hope that he is happy as a doctor and wasn't pushed into it to make his mother happy though. Inuyasha will always watch over his kids and help them to the best of his ability, no matter how old they become. The only things left to deal with is the strange time traveling youkai and Mayumi herself. And maybe an addition of Mayumi's grandfather and Midoriko. I just realized that Mayumi now doesn't have anyone to send to the future for help, was that one of the reasons that you sent Kazuki away? To force Mayumi to the future to get her father and mother to help deal with the bad guy?
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 22:23 EDT
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the time police! with claws and teeth. one wonders why he's just insisting she return instead of just destroying her, with enough of his 'youkai' her could. i guess she's going to have to be leaving soon, one wonders which way in time she'll disappear to.
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