| "Mayumi's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting movements through time. The mixing of time passed was almost confusing but it was a good way to introduce a deal with several issues. Why don't Kagome and Inuyasha stay to see Mayumi? Is it because they are afraid their scent will stay on her or are they awaiting an invitation from her to stay? I would think that she would want to see them occasionally. You briefly mention children but how many do they have, what are their sexes and what are their names? Also you have me wondering if Mayumi was the second person that Sesshomaru loved (I was originally thinking it might have been Kagome but now I am wondering if it was her daughter)? I eagerly await to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 23:34 EST
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it must be hard for kagome and inuyasha not to be able to see their daughter:( will they ever see each other? wow who knew sessy would like that kind of type, or even a hanyou, is mayumi the woman that he was in love with or was it kagome, or was it rin! please give me a clue!!!! i loved it keep up the awesome work:)!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis one also had me in tears(tear,tear,tear) i love ur writing....it was inuyasha ans kagome on the ledge right? oh how heart renching:( i loved it so much! i my self do not agree with sex before marriage but to each his own:) keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 14:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice wedding scene. Of course Inuyasha and Kagome are going to be there for their daughter's wedding, no matter how upset they are with her or the fact that she is marrying so young. I am interested to see if they lose their oldest son to the past too or does he manage to bring her into the future. Either could be interesting. Miroku was right to make Mayumi aware that he did not approve of her actions and that her parents were upset. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next for this pair and how her parents manage to contact her without letting any of the wolves know it is happening.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 19:16 EST
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i guess to prevent any premature pregnancy at least before the wedding-- yasha had to be 'on the ball'. one wonders what all you have in store for the 'ill fated' couple. good stuff ♥
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 18:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Inuyasha was keeping an eye on her despite of the huge fight. It was sweet that they could secretly be at the wedding. Having her brother there certainly made a difficult time a little easier. I really like where you are going with this story and I can't wait to see where you go next. Until next post...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not sure who I feel the sorriest for right now, Dai, Mayumi or Kagome. They are all three hurting about this decision. I am a bit surprised that Inuyasha didn't remind Kagome of how her mother let Kagome time travel with no assurances about her safety except Inuyasha' promise to keep her safe. Inuyasha's reaction is surprising me a bit, I didn't think he would be so calm to losing his daughter to Kouga's son and the past. I can't wait to see how this all works out.
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 21:24 EST
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That wS the mother of all fights (bad pun intended)! Kagome needs to reach back & remember how her mother dealt with her time spent in the past at 15 yrs old. Once she calms down, she'll come around.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 17:26 EST
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i cried silently to myself...i loved it,,,keep up the awesome work you put so much soul into these stories i have loved them all...can't wait until the next
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 11:31 EST
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the hardest thing-- to let go. for mayumi it will be to apologize. young people are so absolute and so volatile. ♠ you have stirred some rather unpleasant memories *skips off to read something silly* ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW this was so sad:( i loved it all in all:) keep up the awesome work i can't wait till the next
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Title: So cute
Reviewed By: Yona45 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 18:19 EST
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So cut keep going, will she and daichi get back together in the past? Because if they do then it would be great! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 18:16 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Mayumi still doesn't fully understand but that is to be expected from one so young. He will be her Daichi when she gets back from being with him as his mate. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 00:19 EST
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one guesses that after five hundred years, a scent would change. the fact that he was just an adolescent as opposed to the adult. one thinks that maybe the base smell would stay the same but diet, age, environment would all be factors. ♣ what a revelation! one can see why she would be stunned. ♥
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering when she was going to get the connection. I am surprised that she didn't get it earlier from scent, but I suppose Dai used something to mask his odor like she does in the past. Now I just wonder if they are going to tell her everything or not. Should be interesting either way.
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