| "Pride (In the Name of Love)" Reviews/Comments [ 120 ] |
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Reviewed By: dashllee On: April 28, 2009 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHH WHOOOOO IS HE CALLING IN!!!! UR CLIFFYS R KILLIN ME LOL AWESOME STORY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 13:47 PDT
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as snowfall said! i would love if all 3 of them were together! i love that idea! oh! i am sooo worried about the raven!! i love him! please~ be okay
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 09:45 PDT
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Ooooh! What better reassurance could Sesshoumaru have than to be his great father's mate! I wonder if he could be both the mate of his father and of Inuyasha. That would be too cool. They are all family. It could work because the same blood runs in all their veins. Hmmmm, delicious. Plus, I think that Sess would be better off to have his father be his first because he trusts him so much. Yummies. You're such a hentail. Yay! Those bad guys don't know who their up against. Please don't kill off papa! I love him! ^_^ Heheh. Gotta run. Love what's happening. Snow
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 06:52 PDT
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my head hurts.. but i still read on! it was good. iced cream!? lol wow.
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Title: *phew*
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 14:09 PDT
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Very, VERY, amazing chapter! i loved the end. it was amazingly emotional and touching. it was amazing. i loved every flippin moment.. i hope your enjoying your story as much as we do!
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Title: Chapter 35
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 18:41 PDT
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Okay, I admit it. I've been lurking on your story for a few days. It's so sad and I almost cried at this chapter. That evil bastard is still alive! Gah! I suspected as much when Sesshoumaru felt pain while he and Inuyasha were fooling around. I'm so glad that Taisho was brought back and was able to save Sess. I hope there is some way they can remove or override that mark. Poor Sesshoumaru. *sob* Thanks for updating so swiftly. Snow
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Title: oder den me
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 13:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOAh! i cant belive someone else updated! WOOO YEAH!!!! good job girl keep it up. have fun. cant wait to see new one!
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Title: Pride
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 12:31 PDT
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I have been reading this story since you posted the first chapter, and I love it. It absolute blows me away that Kitsunesan has been your only reviewer (until me, that is). I've always had a fantasy of seeing Father and sons together in a picture, ah man, talk about drool-worthy. I think it's a VERY good thing for humanity that all these guys are fictional charactors. No-one would get ANYthing done with these three to look at all day. Inu & Sess are wonderful, but being an older woman myself, it's papa Inu that I would trip and beat to the floor if I had the chance, but I digress. I am hoping that you are not drawing on personal experience while writing about Sess' inner termoil. Recovering from rape and torture is a long process, and most people never fully recover. I have become incredibly invested in this story. I wait with bated breath for each new chapter. It's been awhile since I have been so caught up in a story. You are doing a wonderful job, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: get better zoon.
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel so sorry for whats going on with you.. i hope your reading my reviews.. i love this story itself... thank you for taking the time to do this... this chapter was great. no flaws at all. stop worrying about the things your writing. and have fun with it. make it fun. not a job. we love the story... love to read the story. so you should love it too. take your time. thank you for sending this out onto the interwebz. and i hope everything gets better for you..
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Title: loved it!!!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 12:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MEAN TO TELL ME I HAVE TO WAIT!!!?!?!?! WAHHHHHHHH cry....
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 16:29 PDT
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OH GOD!!! who is it!! WHOOOOO!!!?!?!oh..by the way. i hope you feel better. the chapter couldnt have been any better i promise. it was great. THANK YOU
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Title: OH! yes! yay!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 06:08 PDT
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WOOT YAY OMG WOO!!!! .. gomen... that was great! keep going!!!
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Title: im signed in this time XD
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 08:31 PDT
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Oh wow. yay shesshys claws are back! yay for the raven! Oh i really love those two together.
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan(nsi) On: April 14, 2009 13:24 PDT
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OH WOW... the battle was good. im so happy the bird was okay. i was crying XD
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Title: oh
Reviewed By: kitsunesan(nsi) On: April 13, 2009 20:35 PDT
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god. ive spent all night reading this. and UGH YOU JUST STOP RIGHT THERE!!!?!?!? WWAHHHH ugh. cry. i feel sorry for the raven. i loved him. the story is finally getting intense. its got me in a trance. im so sad for sesshy. inuyasha. miro. and the raven... ugh.. wahhh. please update soon.
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