| "Pride (In the Name of Love)" Reviews/Comments [ 120 ] |
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Reviewed By: iammecya On: July 07, 2009 13:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
easy way of killing the bad guys, use miroku's viod in the box and suck them in that, then throw the box in a deep pit.
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 03:04 PDT
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o_O This is so not good. *wimpers*
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Reviewed By: Hirumakage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 11:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off I have to apologize. When I first saw your story I thought it was going to be horrible. I thought it was going to be another poorly written slopped together story written hastily without thought. I thought it was going to have shallow characters and even worse dialogue. I was prepared to read your story for sole purpose of mocking it while waiting for something better. BUT! I was wrong terribly wrong. This story is like a cool breeze, so refreshing(despite it's darkish nature). This story surprised me into liking it. I tried to hate your story because stories like this are poorly written smut fests. But, you managed to write a balanced story of lemon and action, that actually has a flow to it. I also really like how fast you update. I've never seen anybody put out so much so fast. Most of my other favorite stories update at the most twice a month. So with you I have something to definitely look forward to. I must say overall I'm impresses. Please continue writing. I think I'll really be devastated if you stopped.
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 17:24 PDT
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Awww shit! I don't know which is worse, having it all a dream or having Sesshomaru go mad.
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 05:07 PDT
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*blinks*
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Reviewed By: bored-inu-fan On: July 03, 2009 20:29 PDT
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OMG he's evil i like the way your mind works let it keep writing stories
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Reviewed By: Lile_93 On: July 03, 2009 19:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH.....MY..........GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IF THAT WASNT A TWIST I DONT NO WAT WAS. R U 4REAL RIGHT NOW. NONE OF THAT STUFF EVRY HAPPEN!! NO WAY, I THINK HES PLAYING HIM AND ITS JUST A DREAM.WOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I LOVE U RIGHT NOW. CUZ THIS STORY THIS HERE, IS THE BOMB!!!!!!!!!!!! IT REALLY IS!!!!
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Title: short side story
Reviewed By: iammecya On: July 03, 2009 14:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ack poor sesshy as for the short story more of sess and his dad when he was little would be nice, like when he was a baby or the first month or so when toga started to take care of him something cute/fluff. to much angsty in the world need fluff :) thanks awesome story so far
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2009 09:38 PDT
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What the hell?!?!?! LOL. I'm so confused! Thanks for the cliffhanger. Is this why the chapter started on a cliff? CUTE!
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I sat and read it over two days! It's cute and funny and hot! LOL Completey fun to read.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 16:23 PDT
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ROFL The scenes with Naraku are hilarious. I hope the change is permanent. Inuyasha is about to have a nervous breakdown. It's so funny! I am so, so glad that Inupapa claimed Sess. That's wonderful! I hope they mate Rin as well, if it's possible. Have they ever warded the castle against magic? They said they would, but I don't recall it happening. Maybe I missed that somewhere. I'm really sorry for not reviewing much, but thank you for posting anyway. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 02:36 PDT
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*sigh* I hope in all sincerity that Sessh decides that Rin is his ward not a 'mate'... *reader has a real problem with sessh/rin pairings or anything actually that smells of 'het'* Sorry, if that's where your heading, although that's no reflection on your writing, which remains steller, just the reader's preference.
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Reviewed By: Lile_93 On: July 01, 2009 07:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Lile_93 On: July 01, 2009 07:13 PDT
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lol i like naraku like that hes funny. is he gonna stay like that, oh u should make him join forces wit the western land, against the dark circle. toga is one horny dog. lol, he just cant keep his hands off of sesshomaru.lol. ok i love love, love toga/sess, i really do, butttttt(lol i no theres always a but) when r u ganna show more inu/koga?? i love the smut sences u got now, but i wanna read one when it inu and kouga. oh or maby u can make a treesome wit naraku in it. lol now thats interesting XD
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 10:11 PDT
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Happy, happy, joy, joy!!! I love Sessh and Toga together! :)
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