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| "Pride (In the Name of Love)" Reviews/Comments [ 120 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 02:06 PDT
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*rolls eyes* Oh please don't have Toga (nor Sesshomaru) fall for Kimi's bullshit again. I wouldn't trust her any more than I could throw the bitch. If she changed, she wouldn't have got involved with what's-his-face's scheme in the first place. Most smart entities wouldn't trust her again for a long ass time, if ever. Besides, the story already establishes that Toga belongs to Sesshomaru and vise versa. Kimi had no chance in hell because she never loved Toga or Sesshomaru from the beginning, nor showed any such signs of changing from her deceitful and murderous countenance since. Naraku's change is a little different. He is part of Onigumo, who wasn't exactly the nicest guy, but wasn't as corrupted as Naraku... so losing his memory and how evil he was is a bit more of a plausibility with such a radical change... tho I wouldn't trust him with my life or the life of loved ones either... but he's funny as hell-as one would see a comical "rogue". Although poor Inuyasha *however is laughing*. Yet ya know... Koga IS out of commission for any hanky panky for quite some time... either until he actually grows up, which fandom dictates is a LONG process for a 'demon' or Saurix (sp) comes up with a 'cure'... sooooooo... *LOL* Unless he can continue to get a little 'sumpin' sumpin' from Toga and Sesshomaru... which I still think "COOL-Puppy Pile!" I also hope that Kagome has a good explanation on how she come by all those antiquities she cashed in. The authorities I'm sure are going to be REAL interested :D I do love your story and await (albeit impatiently) your next installment.
| Reviewed By: Lile_93 On: August 02, 2009 05:13 PDT
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1 MORE THING. i loveeeeee naraku in this story!!!! he is beast, lol. keep up the good work on him! XDXPXDXP
| Reviewed By: Lile_93 On: August 02, 2009 05:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think 4 now on or untill something good happens, im going 2 cry my eyes out. i just cant stop crying, cuz i no that sesshomaru isnt safe and toga REALLY isnt safe. *sighs* when r u gonna kill dat b***h cuz i really fell like coming through his computher screen and beating the s**t out of her, but ohh wait, i cant, and do u no yyyyy???? CUZ SHE CAN KILL TOGA DATS Y!!*huffs angerly and plops down on floor and pouts* and if she does that then sesshy will think he has no reason 2 live and that he's weak because he couldnt protect the 1 he loves, and then he'll get deppressed and try 2 kill himself. BUT if we're luckly then he'll remember inuyasha and rin, and then hell have a new found strength and kill 'the b***h'(dats his mothers new nick name, u like, lol) that way i wont have 2 go through the screen, cuz sessh already killed her XDXP. *looks up at wat i wrote* did i just alil 2 far off topic or go into rally good detail?? um.....never mind that just update soon cuz i am DIEING 2 no wats next and if 'the b***h' got killed or not*smiles big* c u laterXDXPXDXP
| Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 04:03 PDT
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Damn you for making me actually like the new and improved Naraku *waves fist in the air*
| Title: OHHHHH, NARAKU
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 17:21 PDT
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I NEVER thought I be a Naraku fangirl.....never. As bad guys go, he's one of the best, but I was actually cheering him on, GO,GO,GO, ABSORB that undead bast**d, YEAH, SEE HOW YOU LIKE BEING HELPLESS, GET UM, GET UM.....ah....ahem....as I was saying.....I love a good twist, and this story has so many of them. I'm sitting at work, it's time for me to leave 10 minutes ago, but I just had to say YEAH. It's about time for Kimi to realize that she was one half of the couple that made such an amazing person as Sess turned out to be. She needs to take a good long look at Sess and realize that he is a son to be proud of, not just a way to torment his father. Toga loved her once, all the things he loved COULDN'T have been an act....her maternal instincts need to be kicked in the ass to wake them up. She caused her own downfall, lets see if she has the nards to turn this situation around and make it positive instead of negative. Toga woke up the first chink in her armor, pride in Sess's accomplishments, lets see what else the wily old dog can do. Toga, Toga, Toga, Toga....no this isn't Animal House, the movie, but it sure has some parallels, doesn't it. LOL
| Title: an idea maybe
Reviewed By: iammecya On: July 31, 2009 12:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku, Sesshy and or Inuyasha babysittin the kids with Toga and Sairex or Miroku doing comments or flashbacks. sorry if that made no sence, I would just like to see how they would react to active kids hanging on them trying to get them to play, plus more baby Sesshy and Toga stories
| Reviewed By: Lile_93 On: July 29, 2009 03:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH DEAR GOD I THINK IM GONNA 2 CRY!!! NO I AM GOING 2 CRY!! Y! Y IS THIS HAPPENING!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT NO 4REAL, I SHEADED SO TEARS. GOSH I NEW HIS MOTHER WAS A BITCH BUT I DIDNT NO THAT SHE WAS THAT BIG OF 1:(
| Reviewed By: Sharlie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2009 17:31 PDT
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Loved the story line, but when you touched the yaoi in ch3, I had to sign off. Didn't realize that it was...I'm allergic. Excellent writing an all tho.
| Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 04:46 PDT
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Happy, happy, joy, joy ! And HOT as hell! *big silly grin*
| Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 13:43 PDT
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Good Kami I hope Toga didn't make a mistake trusting the retrieval to Naraku... I kind of like Naraku as he is now... he's such a smart-ass.
| Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 01:17 PDT
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o.O Oh for Kami's sake... they need leashes and muzzles for these kidlets.
| Title: Ch 107?
Reviewed By: Rya35 On: July 10, 2009 21:46 PDT
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Did anyone else notice that chapter 107 is the same as chapter 106?? *pouts*
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 20:32 PDT
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Awesome chapter and I love each song that you quoted in your notes. I sure hope that Sairex can save both Inu no Taisho and himself. Sessho really needs his daddy. *sniffle* Loved the inner dialog. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
| Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 14:25 PDT
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Toga must survive and help heal his pup/koibito... and I agree with Iammecya, Sairex or Miroku should use the captured void to suck up the bad guys and then figure out how to destroy the box and 'it' once and for all... enough with the bad shit! That way they can all concentrate on fucking with Naraku's head for the rest of the story. IMHO :D
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 17:00 PDT
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Nooooo! I was so afraid that Sesshoumaru would kill Toga. Please don't let Toga die. *sobs* I think there's only one person who can bring Sesshoumaru back--Rin. When are the bad guys gonna die? They need to die painful, horrible deaths! ^_^ I haven't had time to read the last couple of chapters very closely, but Naraku sure is a riot. Thanks for continuing to post over here.
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