| "Pride (In the Name of Love)" Reviews/Comments [ 120 ] |
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan(nsi) On: May 08, 2009 13:53 PDT
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WOW im so glad i got my interwebz back. i missed it sooooo much. thanks for the WONDERFUL updates. and i hope to see more involving the relationships. those always make me more happy. shippou is a little sneak. but it will be great to see who he turns into a chick
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 21:59 PDT
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Hahahah! Dog boys are chasing sticks! *snicker* Cat munch for desert! That was too cool. Now word that InuTaisho is alive will start getting around. Wow, Miroku's evisceration was kind of gross. I was a bit confused about who it was that was getting cut up when it was happening. Poor Sairex got raped and has sired a child. I can't believe they are bringing back that damned dragon. Sess needs to be claimed before then. Sucks that the Sess and Inupapa spent the night together and didn't act upon their urges. Poor guys must really be suffering. I'm a bit surprised that the guys have been so laid back about getting up a protection spell. It should have been done the moment they decided it was necessary. Now it is being put off another day. That just seems a bit irresponsible. Oh wow! What the heck is up with Rin! Can't wait to see what that's all about. I thought I might mention that it gets a bit confusing when you quote more than one person on one line or more than one in the same paragraph. I sometimes have to read lines over to make sure I know who is speaking. You asked about fic length. Heck, the more the merrier! No one wants a great read to end. ^_^ Snow
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Title: Length
Reviewed By: animeGaki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 18:50 PDT
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I wouldn't worry too much about putting this into parts. Personally, I tend to want to read something if it's longer. I say keep it as is.
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 04:05 PDT
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yeesh, lol, they'll be up all night just thinking about 'it' anyway... might as well enjoy it for 'real'!
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 03:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru chasing a stick... priceless! LOL
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: animeGaki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 20:58 PDT
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Good stuff. Read the whole thing last night and was pleased to see an update already! Very nicely woven tale you have here. Really enjoying the in depth look at Sesshoumaru. Keep up the amazing work.
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Title: back again
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 16:47 PDT
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totally loving the whole father son bit. the evil charactars names are giving me a bit of a fit. but thats okay. names dont matter. as long as they can go away with the rest of the gang safe
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 15:13 PDT
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Oh no! A sorceress is going to try to bring that dragon back to life? Well, maybe they can use HIS heart to heal Sairex. I wonder what being brought back will do to Sesshoumaru and Sairex? *shudders* I sure hope that Inupapa will be at full strength by then. I wonder who that woman thinks she was made to be with. A nice mystery. Aw, Sess and Taisho are so sweet together. I think they make a perfect match. You're introspective piece put a logical light on the pairing. Hm, I also have to wonder just what Inuyasha's experiences are. You mentioned Kouga. Was that a bit of foreshadowing? ^_^ Well, nice introspective chapter. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 02:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh, Yasha's brazenness... LOL And the curtain melee... had me loling :D
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Reviewed By: kougafun101 On: May 02, 2009 19:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really in awe of your wholel writting style but towards the last 5 chapters you lost me. With no offense, I disagree with the direction that the story is going and I hope u reconsider. Sess is suppose to be a broken man and the fact that his father and brother is taking advantage of him is horrible.
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Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 01:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And where DID you ever get the habit of referring to yourself in the third person...surely not from me... // LOL
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Title: Pride(In the Name of Love)
Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 02:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thoroughly enjoying the ride :)
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Title: From the author...
Reviewed By: JezzRa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 19:30 PDT
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You know, I'm not sure what the proper way to respond to my readers on MM here is, and don't know if any of y'all will even ever see this. But I do thank you for the reviews this far, you've made me warm and fuzzy. *waves a Sesshy/Tai flag* I know, the standard inucest is Sessh and Inuyasha...but... but... Taisho is hot... and...and no one really writes Tai / Sesshy fics considering that it's hard to come up with a way for Taisho to be around... and I love writing unconventional pairings. >> Of course, with so many people running around it's probably just going to end up as one big orgy. Oh well. Thank y'all for your reviews!!! ~ Jessi
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 14:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i havent been reviewing lately. TOO MUCH going on! the story is getting intense again. im standing on my toes !!!. i love sesshy and taisho they are sooo hott together
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 01:48 PDT
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So much happened in chapter 40. I wish Inupapa had been at his best. He would have kicked the bad guy's ass. I just hope that poisoning poor Sairex wasn't a ploy to get Sesshoumaru outside the grounds. Poor Sairex, he's had a rough life. Heheh. The scene with Inu Taisho and Sess was cute. All of this attention might eventually start to scare Sess and make him think he really is a whore. We'll see, I guess. Cool chapter. ^_^ Snow
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