| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya Kikyo letting Kagome take over her love life does sound scary!!! lol... can't wait to see what you have next...i am really looking forward to how you play this out!!! oh and yes i am talking about Savwah Fehrr...sorry i guess i forgot to mention it...but i only have 2 stories up so i guess it just slipped my mind!!! :b
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 18:12 CDT
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*laughs* really great story you got going. I just can't imagine Kikyou turning to a melting glop of goo over a man. Still the way you describe the characters and the dialogue (which is so hillarious) is so interesting. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i giggled when Kikyo started to think about her White Rose XD too funny :P and OMG did she just said that to Kagome?? blah i cant wait XD and actually im in Australia :P and if i do take it, ill try to keep Kikyo in the light :P
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Title: loving it!!
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just have to say that i love this story!!! it is amazing...but i keep thinking that kikyo's white rose is InuYasha...its just these little things you drop and it correlates with Kagome...but i hope not!!! i wouldn't want to see heartbreak and sadness cause i know that would be the case for like everyone involved...also i just wanted to thank you again for reading and reviewing my story "Was It Worth It" a while back...i am working on a new story so if you have anytime to check it out and give me some advice that would be amazing!!! Anyways can't wait to see what will happen next. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 00:44 CDT
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sounds like a bit of a crush is turning into a somewhat unhealthy obsession. for all she knows, the guy's married-- or gay. "If he was bringing this to another woman, I knew that I would have to rectify the situation before it got out of hand." methinks she has graduated to unhealthy obsession. o_O
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im sorry i didnt review the other chapter... school kinda caught up with me >.> 20 days left?? till what?? wait hold on.. you must be on the other side, so that means your going into your summer holidays!?! NOT COOL!! a interesting chapter?? OOOoooo i must read XD and Oo ill love to try and tackle it lol, but its got to be after that one im doing... killing me lol anyways Oooo thats how they met, must be some bad memories for Kikyo... and bloody hell! this is KILLING me... maybe its Onigumo.... *starts to think*
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu (not logged in and i'll lose everything i typed if i logged in now)= On: April 26, 2009 21:14 CDT
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NOO! don't put such pressure on me. it would be better that you didn't mention reviewers than bring attention to the single one-- or better yet, put up your replies from other sites. yeah, make 'em feel bad for not reviewing when apparently so many other people did. PEOPLE SHOULD REVIEW, DAMNIT!! ♠ now that that was out of my system... ♣ so yasha got to be the hero, and now he's very protective of her. ♦ i always thought that as the manga progressed the depiction of kykiou had started to soften although she was still determined and a bit cold she quit trying to kill kagome shortly after she took her shards. i think she realized that kagome would never stand in the way of yasha's happiness even if it meant losing him. i think there is a biblical principal that says to be nice to those ridiculing or persecuting you and it will heap hot coals on their heads... or something like that-- that's what kagome did with kikyou *shrugs* ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 21:51 CDT
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well, i can only think of a small few that i would describe as 'white rose' in 'iy' but i'm not opposed to pairing kikyo to someone in another anime... um-- enishi from 'rurouni kenshin' would be an interesting replacement for naraku, or 'narato's kakashi... (hey, this is fun!=D) ♠ seriously i'm happy the yash/kag is back together and i like the fact that you're not portraying kikyou as most fan-fic authors do. it's nice to see her as something more human than a soul sucking female monster in a human girl disguise. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 11:38 CDT
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seems like yasha was a bit worse for wear since the breakup. it was nice of kikyou for facilitating the reunion and possible reconciliation. one hopes she isn't too squicked out by having 'feelings' for her sister's love-- that seems like a whole 'nother can of worms. ♥
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to tell you I'm still reading and still enjoying! Kikyo really is trying to make up for how she reacted which was a little extreme. I'm suprised Kagome dumped her relationship with Inuyasha so quickly! I know Kikyo is important to her but to do that without even talking to Kikyo and trying to work things out before taking that drastice step...porr Inu must think he's pretty unimportant right now. I hope she can convince him to give her a second chance.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well thats good ^____^ and i n'awww at the end :P that was sweet of Kikyo to do :P i kinda died when i read that Kagome broke up with Inuyasha... sounds like my cousin lol doing things without thinking first LOL anyways OOo i got a idea... do this story in Kikyo's view, and then do through Kagome's eyes watching Kikyo and Naraku ^__^ and i know what you mean... im behind in homework aswell XD
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* fluffy guard dog :P so im guessing were going to hear Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship?? and plus, are their demons in this? or just normal humans?? anyways im surprise (even if its Kikyo) that i can sit here and read it XD after all the stories with Kikyo being a bitch lol
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 17:54 CDT
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at least her sis takes precedence. ♦ one likes the 'coffee shop' atmosphere. i especially like when the place has live music or poetry- sip an iced latte- listen to some folk/jazz tunes... ♣ so are you gonna post a recipe for the chocolate death? >=P ♥
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 06:16 CDT
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Wow, that was pretty harsh of Inu, especially considering that they he was saying it to her sister. If they are supposed to be close .. he might consider that his rough reaction could cause a rift in their relationship. Would he hurt Kagome like that? I would say both Kagome and Kikyo are to blame for the issues between them and it is between them to deal with it. Will it come to that point that someone will have to choose? oh... that would be very angsty!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo snap! lol Kikyo got a big mouth full of it from Inuyasha :P i always go N'awww when Inuyasha goes all protective over Kagome.. too cute :P anyways i shall think that it is Sesshy :D
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