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| "Stream of Consciousness: A LiveJournal Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"It Could Be Me" Bwahahahaha…very well written. Though it's clearly smutty in natural, generally speaking, there's also a twinge of creepiness associated with the notion of the tiny pervert in the dark, doing as he pleases. And on that note… Noooooo!!!! Say it isn't so! While I never got off my duff to join Iyhedonism in the first place, and I can't honestly say I'm riddled with regret at the missed opportunity, I will most definitely, definitely miss all of your (and everyone else's) posts in response to the various challenges of that forum. I never had the time (and still don't) to drop whatever I'm doing to bust out mini after mini based on random prompts, but it both sounded and looked like fun. Still, I can agree with the mentality that it's better to burn out than fade away. Rest in peace, Iyhedonism. Now, let us not forget that there are still other communities out there, which brings me to "Generosity". Kami…how did you master the ability to pour so much emotion into so few words? One of these days, I'm going to have to try my hand at writing a few minis, community prompt or no. To be able to paint a masterpiece with so few brush strokes is a talent I have not yet mastered.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 13:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Twin Peaks"…cute title. So Inuyasha is a breast man? Makes sense when you think about it. He's always rolled his eyes at Miroku's fascination with asses, and let's not forget how wide-eyed he got whenever he 'accidentally' caught a glimpse of Kagome's naked chest in the manga. I also loved how you tossed in the 'hanyou' bit, that he's so amazed to find himself so blessed as to have such a woman in his life. As for "Spicing Up Our Sex Life", I love that instead of getting all butt-hurt by Miroku's comment (no pun intended), Sango came up with a legitimate solution, giving him what he asked for while simultaneously making him pay for having asked for it in the first place. And you managed to toss in some taijiya history into the thing at the same time! Because it does make sense that if they specialized in slaying demons, then where did her knowledge for human hand-to-hand combat come from? Sango the ninja…well done!
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 15:15 EDT
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there is a strong distinction between choosing to be protected and not having a choice. one is a weakness and the other is a strength. so many times authors paint her as un-able or as weak, but she is neither. even though she is untrained she is courageous and determined. from the first running from the village when she realized the centipede was after her-- she set aside fear and regularly took on great odds without a second thought. --BRAVO! ♥
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awestruck...what can I say? I'm as awestruck as Inuyasha. Such a simple, easy thing to write, but the images you managed to portray with so few words went beyond emotion. It wasn't so much that you had Kagome kick-ass, we've all seen that before and I think we can all appreciate an anti-'damsel in distress' Kagome from time to time. But seeing it through Inuyasha's eyes, his first time realizing just how powerful Kagome truly is. Excellent take. Definitely needed to be first-person. Well done!
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2010 14:08 EDT
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Poor Inu his privates a snack for ants!!! As usual, you are spoiling all of us with your great writing and clever ideas!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2010 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, "Shippou's Dos and Don'ts of Love" has self-fulfilling-prophecy written all over it. If that scroll was locked away in a secret compartment in an ancient chest that had stayed on Kagome's property for the last 500 years, then it was obviously never intended to be read by anyone else. Now it sounds like it's Kagome's job to make sure Shippou writes it...again...just like she probably made sure he wrote it the first time around. As for "Sweet Pain"...WTF? ROFL! What on Earth inspired that little doozy? Inuyasha's lucky he's got youkai healing, LOL.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2010 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Bad Dog!"...what can I say? Except Hahahahaha! You're right, even though the two versions are identical, they are somehow very different. But I still can't get over the visual of either girl whacking their respective inu-youkai on the nose with a stick! As for "Blue Sky"...Awwww. Dude, that is the kind of writing that makes people question if you're really a guy, or at least straight, and if you want my opinion, you should never take such questions as an insult. You've said yourself that you are on a mission to prove that straight men can write gushy girly romance just as well as us skirts, and I would say even with this one piece alone that it's Mission Accomplished. That weather analogy was beautiful, and that scene at the very end, with Kagome leaning against him at camp and him thanking her for the ramen...perfect.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! Can't go wrong with crops, ball-gags and strap-ons! I really like "Stress Relief", as silly as it is. Now, "Polishing His Staff", on the other hand…I love! I loved the whole damn thing. Kagome and Inuyasha's initial commentary, their equal surprise at Shippou's commentary, then their reactions to Shippou's *other* comment (especially Kagome's silent thoughts on the matter)…but that twist at the end! Well, it wasn't so much a twist, but you just extended the gag a couple of seconds longer than I was expecting. Totally awesome!
| Title: Sperm(s? Spermoids? What's the plural form?)
Reviewed By: Kiroku Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This reminds me of Butteryasha's fic "Hanyou Fantasies", where, in the last chapter, Inu's dick provides a running commentary. Hilarious! Also kind of sounds like Family Guy, except the sperm (sperms? spermoids? plurals, maybe?) aren't little Star Wars shooters... :) (from Testicular Boot Camp!) ~Kiroku Ookami~
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2010 14:55 EDT
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Loved all three of your latest stories. The big question is: did "Spermayasha" come directly after "The Drunken Rematch"? If so poor Kagome is in for one big surprise when she sobers up! Love how clueless Hojo always is, he would probably still try to go out on a date with Kagome after she and InuYasha mate and marry!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww..."Just for Fun" was so kawaii! Inuyasha may not have had much of a childhood himself, but that didn't stop him from becoming a wonderful father. As for "Hojo vs. Inuyasha: The Drunken Rematch"...your sequel makes me want to see a sequel! On a side note, WTF? Hojo was going to do a drinking contest with tea? LOL! As soon as everyone started getting tipsy I knew something was going to happen, but I wasn't expecting that little twist you threw in at the end there. We definitely need a third installment of this, at least eventually. Now "Spermayasha", on the other hand, I think stands alone quite nicely. *groans*... This was silly, but it was also kind of cute in a demented sort of way. They actually did the whole "sperm" thing at the beginning in each of the three "Look Who's Talking" movies, too, which is what this more reminded me of than something on Discovery Channel...or does DC also use such amusing commentary? Either way, I'm glad the silver-haired, dog-eared sperm took the prize in the end. Makes sense that he would be a stronger sperm with more of the youkai genes than human. Yay for genetics!
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 17:58 EDT
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As always your stories (long or short) are just great, but I particularly loved "The Hunt" poor Miroku always stalking his prey, but generally coming up 'empty handed'!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can really say about "Green and Gold" is Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... It's only natural for Kagome to feel homesick from time to time, but she definitely made the right choice; her husband will never let her forget that. As for "The Hunt"...LOL. I knew there had to be something at the end there, but I had no idea where you were going with it. Well done! Keep 'em coming...
| Title: Go now!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh kami, LOL. I was really finding it a stretch that Shippou would really say some of those things, but then that tiny twist at the end made it fall right back into Canon-land as far as I'm concerned. I want to see what happens when Inuyasha confronts Kagome...
| Reviewed By: norwegianwoood On: March 14, 2010 04:15 EDT
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AGH! I left 2 more reviews but they didn't pull through... I'm so sorry but now I'll try to remember everything I mentioned. I commented on "Leveling the Playing Field": "Heel, bitch!" is one of the best lines I've ever read, ever. I can totally see him saying it--his face, his stance, then the blushing shock afterward. And "Spirits on my Shoulders" is my favorite piece from your entire work. I only realized upon reaching the end that Inuyasha and Kagome never spoke, and the only ones "speaking" were the extreme halves of Inu's psyche. I love how it is represented here that Inuyasha is the perfect balance of these two, and that Kagome loves and accepts that, and they tell their emotions through looks, caresses, and the ways they make love. Words aren't necessary and Inuyasha is pretty much telling his two noisy "spirits" to shut up cause he knows best. Lemon was also very, very well-written. Tender and hot. Love it! great job!!
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