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| "Stream of Consciousness: A LiveJournal Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Title: Sunrise
Reviewed By: norwegianwoood On: March 13, 2010 09:22 EST
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I just have to tell you how much I love this one. Inuyasha's childhood and experiences growing up after his mother died is something we rarely see, or it's just glossed over. We know he had a hard time and he went about learning to defend himself. But to actually imagine a single event from that time period and to flesh it out (even in a drabble format!) like this--AWESOME!! Badass kid Inuyasha is someone I'd love to read of more often!!
| Title: Happier This Way; How The Mighty Have Fallen
Reviewed By: norwegianwoood On: March 13, 2010 09:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too funny. TOO FUNNY. I couldn't stop laughing throughout both of these stories. Poor Sesshomaru. Yes I can tell you have A LOT of fun torturing him! Agh it's just TOO. FUNNY!!
| Title: Dirt and Bug Soup
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have kids, and honestly, I have no idea how I would face such a situation, but damn, there has to come a point where if the kid's gonna cry, then the kid's gonna cry. LOL, poor Kagome...she definitely shouldn't have been so quick to pick on Inuyasha and Shippou. That was karma right there.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe, naughty Kaede... while I doubt Rumiko truly intended for us to imagine anything along the lines of "While You Were Sleeping", one cannot help but to wonder what the elderly miko did do during her teenage years. As for "Hojo vs. Inuyasha: The Epic Showdown"... poor Kagome, LOL. Umm...steroids? Premeditated with a fake, counterfeit desk? Maybe, if she's lucky, this'll turn into one of those things that for some reason the school just never talks about ever again...like when he blasted away half of the wall and ceiling in the auditorium during the cultural festival. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to that April project!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really like "No Regrets". It's 100% canon, in that you have brought to light the fact that he cannot, in reality, magically increase Kagome's lifespan to match his own. It's a wonderful fantasy among the fandom, and one I love indulging in, myself, but it's an invention of the fandom nonetheless. But I love his outlook on life here, that he's going to cherish every moment he does have with Kagome, and finally, when the day comes that it's her body he's watching burn, he will have no regrets. Beautiful. As for "Ayame's Revenge", cute and silly, and inspirational! One of these days, I think I'm going to have a story with Ayame in it, and have her tell him off for real, instead of being "fall-back-girl" when it doesn't work out with Kagome. ;-)
| Reviewed By: FrameofMind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 15:48 EST
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Congratulations! Your story (Practice Makes Perfect) has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Yaoi/Yuri for the Fourth Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join the group yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- FrameofMind
| Reviewed By: FrameofMind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 15:46 EST
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Congratulations! Your story (Turn Out the Light) has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Romance: Inuyasha/Kagome for the Fourth Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join the group yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- FrameofMind
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2010 20:34 EST
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I love how your mind jumps around - sexy stories, touching stories, cute stories, and just plain silly stories, you are giving us a taste of everything! On top of everything your stories are well written and a joy to read!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, "Stepping in It" is really cute. Stupid Miroku... Open mouth, insert foot, but then at least he decided to have a little fun before they killed him, LOL. As for "Teaching Him", I really like this one; short and sweet. It's very true that without a human heart Sesshoumaru cannot feel human emotions, but that doesn't mean youkai don't have their own brand of love. With as much as he once despised his father's 'weakness' with regard to Inuyasha's mother, to actually allow himself to succumb to the desire of having his own human wife should tell Rin right there how much he really does love her, in his own way. Very well done.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2010 19:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I really like "The Sly Dog". Maybe Inuyasha's way really is better. What makes it so funny is that he actually thinks he is being slick. As for "I Am Happy", kudos on an angle I don't think I've ever seen done outside of the "Look Who's Talking" movies! I really, really liked this perspective, and while we don't know the gender of the baby or his/her appearance, we don't need to. You at least gave us a hint to the child's youkai strengths, considering the sniffing and memorizing of Inuyasha's scent, plus I seriously doubt an infant that was more human than youkai would be that intelligent...but then again you never know. Either way, wonderful job!
| Title: A Virgin's Dilemma
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2010 15:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sure Sango's family would forgive her the indiscretion, under the circumstances. After all, they are engaged, and with their current mission - even though we now know they lived happily ever after - at that time in the storyline neither of them had any way of knowing if they would both survive to enjoy married life with one another. There's no disgrace in not wanting to die a virgin when the one you seek out is the promised love of your life.
| Title: Miroku's Worst Nightmare
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2010 15:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO! Oh holy shit...didn't see that one coming. The paper appearing showing Shippou's advanced rank was a nice touch, as was Inuyasha's rather begrudging appearance. Evil wenches, indeed. I wonder if the whole thing was originally Shippou's idea, or somebody else's... I bet it was a collaboration between the three of them. Sango probably started it by muttering to herself after the houshi stumbled drunkenly off to bed, then Kagome was probably the one who said that he really ought to be taught a lesson one of these days, then Shippou probably took that cue to pipe up with "Well, how about I do this...?". All three of 'em are evil! LOL, Inuyasha should be grateful they left him alone.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2010 09:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, good for you, Shippou! I love "When Not to Be Early". It is true in the Canon that Shippou seems to be 'aware' of the adult things most people write him as too innocent to understand, not that the Canon is all that riddled with 'adult' things in the first place, but here and there... As for "Snow Day", I agree with Kagome, it's wonderful to see Inuyasha act so carefree, and "Super Inu Digging Wave"? WTF? LOL, I could just see Inuyasha sending out waves of snow from between his legs as he dug with his youkai speed. They never stood a chance!
| Title: A Hand's Tale
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2010 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, at least you gave the poetry thing a genuine try. It's not like you went "Hickory dickory dock, Miroku discovered his..." BUT on a more serious note, I wonder what happened to this glowing magic of his right hand and why it has no effect on Sango? Perhaps he inadvertently uses up all the magic on himself? Hentai... LOL
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2010 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Spirits on My Shoulders" is really well done (not to mention HOT!). Although I've seen the whole youkai/human split-personality thing done before, both in Canon and AU stories, as though Inuyasha were schizophrenic in some way, I've never seen it done quite like the old fashioned "Angel and Devil on the shoulders" analogy. That really is the best way to describe it, explaining how Inuyasha, as the combined unit of both forces, has his own distinct personality, and then there are the two separated entities that exist within him, rather than him merely arguing with his youkai side, as if he himself is his human personality, which clearly he is not because if he were then his personality wouldn't change during the nights of the new moon. This is really, really well done. As for "One Steamy Dream", LOL! A hot spring full of ramen? Only Inuyasha could dream up something like that. I found it funny how Kagome was getting annoyed that he was ignoring her, when it appeared as if the whole thing had been her present to him from the very beginning. The only thing I'm finding a little confusing is that you labeled it "post-manga" yet they seem to be out camping, as if the mission were still under way. Though, on the other hand, if we are to assume that his dream-memory of knowing that "she tastes good too" is accurate, then it definitely is post-manga, and they are merely out camping for some other reason. Not that a detail like that truly matters all that much, anyway. But you've given me an idea for a possible future story...this is definitely something Inuyasha would like licking off of Kagome better than strawberry flavored KY. ;-)
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