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| "Stream of Consciousness: A LiveJournal Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2009 23:55 EST
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OMIGOD!!! You posted the "Shop" one at the PERFECT time, because Bob sent me a VIBRATOR in the mail today!! From OHIO!! XD A'course, mine looks like a swan, not a butterfly. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD This one has me convinced to join First Tweak. Can you believe that I've never joined them, even though they're IK? :/
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2009 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, "Let Nothing Go to Waste" was the perfect drabble, indeed! And I'm not talking about word-count! Now, as for "Panty Mail"…where do I begin? First, I would like to say that right out of the gate my mind went to that other one-shot, "Kagome's Panties", so it's nice to see that that piece really was inspiration for this one and not just a bizarre coincidence. How many people could randomly decide to write a story about Kagome selling her used underwear? LOL, and yes, it is true that men can (and do) buy used women's underwear in Japan. I like the route you went with this, which is basically the opposite direction of the inspiration piece, but that's the point, isn't it? Take a rudimentary idea and flip it around and change it until it's completely your own. And look! You inspired somebody to write a sequel off of you, again! That's gotta tell you something as far as your creativity as an original writer. We are getting inspired by you. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 02:12 EST
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haha, i loled at Panty Mail again. and squicked. *shudder* you know now just what turns me on and off, haha, like a lightswitch. XD anyway, here's the link to the sequel, as promised, my baka. http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_ch.php/164333/579656#fic_c enjoy!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2009 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I gotta say, "To Break the Mold" had me chuckling when I first realized the surprise pairing. I won't say it here for risk of spoiling the fun, so we must talk in e-mail! As for "Push Onward", I like stories that reveal Inuyasha is not quite as impervious as he would like us to think he is. He is half human, after all. I'm sure everything unfolded for him just as he imagined it as soon as he made it through the door. Well done!
| Title: "Slut" trilogy...
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2009 02:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, with the one that became your actual entry, I commend your desire to write something dark for a change. "I Think of You" was good, in its own way; you could definitely feel Kagura's pain. While I'm not really much of a fan of darkfics, myself, it's also my intention to write at least one or two, one of these days, simply because I do not wish to limit myself. "Services Rendered" was…hot damn! LOL, I don't know what it is about "We must have sex or I will die!" inspired situations, but I've always been partial to those types of lemons, and then you went and made it even better by having them get together in their horniness. Quit writing stories I want to write sequels to! I think you should tackle "part 2" of this story…or…if it really is just supposed to be left to our imaginations, then so be it. My imagination is definitely not lacking in that regard! Which brings me to "Be Careful What You Say"…I can come up with a few different possible scenarios for after the two of them got back to her room, although I know the more canon and boring version should just be Kagome changing back into her normal clothes and the two of them returning to the past again. *sigh*
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh kami… Okay, well first fics first. I thought "Turn Out the Light" was unbelievably touching, in a very believable way. I could totally see that entire scene taking place. Beautifully done! As for "Twitch", it was a cute taste of hentai, even if the idea of Kagome wondering for even half a second if Inuyasha's ears could possibly fake is totally farfetched. Still, I got the impression this one wasn't really supposed to be taken all that seriously, and that last line had me chuckling to myself. Which brings me to "How the Mighty Have Fallen". Totally ridiculous, and it had me actually laughing-out-loud, but you want to know the best part? Even though, at first glance, you would want to immediately think "No way!"…it wasn't really that impossible. Now, granted, I am quite sure the 'real' Sesshoumaru would probably just tell Rin to cease such foolishness, upon getting upset over Jaken's refusal to play, and she probably would've obeyed him, too. But supposing she really was that upset, really was crying…and perhaps Sesshoumaru had secretly wanted to stick it to Jaken because the imp had been more annoying than usual in general lately, then I could totally see Sesshoumaru humoring Rin, to a point, in part to appease the girl but also in part to mess with Jaken. I can hear him telling Rin he liked her tea "thiiiiiiis" much in his usual, monotone way of speaking, and all the death glares he kept sending Jaken's way to play along, and Jaken's subsequent reactions to all he was witnessing, were both fairly in-character. I'm not sure about Sesshoumaru being willing to give Rin a kiss, but then again since he considers human emotions weak and pointless, that is probably the perfect formula for being able to plant a kiss on the girl without caring one way or another. If Jaken was correct in his horrified belief that he actually saw a faint dusting of pink on his master's nose, Sesshoumaru's embarrassment was only in how far he had allowed the farce to continue while in Jaken's company. You know what I would really love to see? A companion piece from the same universe with an adult Rin reenacting their tea party with real tea, just her and her lord, of course. I can totally see it in my head. They could repeat some of the same words, as she asks for payment for the tea, which she is now serving him properly in the finest china, then his reply that he has no money, and her request for a kiss as payment instead. Cut to something primal smoldering in his eyes as he leans forward to deliver his payment…end scene! (or not)
| Title: From Mourning to Moaning
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I remember that South Park episode! And I thought this was really weird...but really well done! So long as they can avoid the temptation to do anything zombie-ish in front of their children, I would say that everything should be just fine.
| Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 22:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From Mourning to Moaning has got to be my FAVORITE short one-shot of all time! Absolutely brilliant, especially since the Halloween thing hasn't really quite left the blood yet. Wonderful work, I giggled the whole time!
| Title: Wow, can people be overly sensitive.
Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2009 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously. That didn't strike me as homophobic in the least, and I'm glad that the Mod stood up for their rules at ICC regarding the censorship issue. I honestly think that this was very original, and a great way for the pansy boys to scare off crazy Jak! XD Love when they're talking about the fake... ahem, PARTS: "I wanna fuck 'em!" Pricelss.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 20:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not really all that into yuri, myself, but I would've given "Novel Comfort" a chance even if you hadn't suggested we all do so, simply because it's you. I must say…that was in no way what I was originally expecting. I want to talk about it but then again I don't want to risk accidentally dropping any spoilers for those who might skim reviews before reading the story…I know I do that sometimes. Let me just say…WOW! I will admit, I had started to suspect that might be what the potion would do, but then I thought "Nah…" and then sure enough, yup! I'm sure I can't speak for every woman out there, but I will admit that something along similar parameters has been a fantasy of my own from time to time, though it can obviously never happen. Still, I'm glad Sango and Kagome got to enjoy it. Really creative! Even though I'd thought of it in passing fancy, I had never considered actually using that idea to make a fanfic out of it! LOL. You can make a story about anything! Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 20:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked "A Lesson in Appearances". I found it 100% canon, because Inuyasha would know how to sip tea properly, and without breaking the stupid china. His mother had been a Hime, after all. Just because he didn't give a rat's ass most of the time didn't mean he had forgotten his mother's lessons. Kagome's actions were also spot-on, I'd say, as well as the nervous husband and wife. We don't have to know them to know how just about anybody would react to the sight of Inuyasha handling their finest china. Well done!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
People were offended by "To Hoodwink a Homosexual"? Why? I found it kind of funny, in a crack-fic sort of way. You didn't make Jakotsu any more flamboyant than Takahashi did. I could see some people not sharing in your sense of humor and finding the drabble stupid or pointless, but offensive? Pfft. Like I said, I found it kind of funny; I wasn't expecting that twist at the end there. Makes me want to rent Silence of the Lambs, 'cause I'm having a serious 'WTF?' moment, in an amused sort of way.
| Reviewed By: FrameofMind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 01:57 EDT
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Congratulations! Your story "A Final Act of Healing" has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Lemon for the Third Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group
| Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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For happier this way. You are evil. It was wonderfully funny. Poor Sess.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 11:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked "Remorse", it brought a more serious, more "real people" perspective to what was originally more or less just a backdrop for a porno. It's clear to me that even though he went a little overboard and caused his wife actual pain, it was just very rough spanking and fucking...not like he had literally turned into a wife-beater and was punching or kicking her. It was also instantly clear, even to his wife, how tremendously he regretted his actions, and I think it was very valiant of her to forgive him. That's not to say that he didn't deserve some type of punishment, and I love what you had her do for her revenge. She basically forgave him completely for her pain, and got him back for leaving her unsatisfied in the sex department. I'm sure she'll untie him...eventually...but one must make sure he has truly learned his lesson. After all, just because she forgave him this once doesn't mean she would necessarily forgive him again and again.
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