| "Of The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: too-lazy-to-log-in On: February 27, 2012 22:51 EST
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You've got some major formatting problems. I'm sure it is MM's fault, but I would highly recommend that you find a way to fix the giant paragraph problem. |
Reviewed By: 3lue 3utterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2011 23:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this, hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2011 21:20 EST
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I see that you have updated. ^^ Thank you so much for writing this chapter. It was a wonderful one, I, especially, like the part where Inuyasha "proved" to Kagome, of what is his kind. Lol. Anyways, I wish you well on your national test on becoming a pharmacy technician. xD |
Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: November 18, 2011 13:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember my password so this is not going to be signed. Anyway; I love this story and the concept, it's very intriguing. Now don't stress out too much about your exam. I just passed the VTNE in July to become a Certified Veterinary Technician and the best thing was to not let myself get stressed out. If you get stressed then you will second guess yourself. I am sure you will do just fine. Just study for about 2 days straight then just relax and have a drink. If you've been studying well so far then you don't have to worry. Now go pass the damn exam so you can update ASAP ok!!! |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: November 17, 2011 20:10 EST
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CHAPTER 11!!! This story freakin rocks...sure it was a long wait but it was worth it. Waiting for chapter 12. |
Reviewed By: Kateyez8690 On: November 17, 2011 08:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just out of curiosity, in chapter 4 did you realize that even though Inu told Kagome he didn't have parents, after his question about Souta liking soccer, she asked, “Do you have anything like that with your father?” Just figured you might want to fix it.. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2011 19:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, an update! I'll forgive you for the few boo-boos I spotted throughout the story since you said you posted it straight away without proofreading it. I appreciate that you wanted to get it to us so quickly! Really liked this chapter. I wasn't expecting Kagome to think it was a trick at first and not believe Inuyasha, but I love the way you handled that. It would have been too much if this whole chapter would have been her not believing him and him trying to convince her and her storming away angry and him wondering how to get her to believe him, but so just that real quick splash of anger on her part which he immediately shot down with that crimson display, that was perfect. Kind of hard to deny the truth when he went and turned all primal on her, not to mention she can feel him. Good job! By the by, to link a picture to a story, you first have to upload the art into MM's web space, which you do by being logged into your account and clicking on the "My Artwork" link/tab. In there you'll see how you can upload artwork, and all uploaded artwork appears on the "My FanFics" page in a little box right below where you type the story summary for a new story. Then you can click on whatever artwork you want to attach before clicking on Add Story. Since this story is already posted, you can click on the Edit button on the right hand side next to this story down in your list of stories, not the Chapter Manager, but the solitary Edit link that is above the Chapter Manager. That takes you back into the same My FanFics page but for that particular story, to edit say what the summary says, the rating, genre category or what have you. So you can then click on the pictures, once you've uploaded them, and add them to the story! :-) |
Reviewed By: ToryTory On: November 16, 2011 07:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update! |
Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2011 00:09 EST
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Yay an update! thanx for continuing this even though ur busy. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see how inu and kag will handle there new intense relationship! update soon please! ^_^ |
Title: Love the story:)
Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2011 08:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My heart lurched when it just ended there, I had to double check when was the last time updated this story. Im so happy that it was this year, as many a great writer on this website suddenly stop writing:( Love the story so far, the story line is very well written. I love Inuyasha and Kagome fics:D Please update soon, as i am hooked to the story and would love to know whats gonna happen next. Can't wait for the next chapter:) xx |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2011 09:19 EDT
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I just found this fic and I LOVE it! =) I can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: ToryTory On: September 28, 2011 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update! I loved it! |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: September 09, 2011 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I can't believe the intensity and emotion this story is just oozing! Can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: twistedf8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2011 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahh! Cliffy!!! Oh well have to keep us on our toes... Again this story is a definite Fav of mine. I have to agree with Angel I'm a total sucker for the whole soulmate concept, but I also love your twist on Inuyasha's origins... Waiting somewhat patiently (lol) for the next update...Wish it could be sooner lol |
Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2011 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I love the idea of the fic. I was expecting Inuyasha to be a demon to sort of relate back to the canon, but was pleasantly surprised that he wasn't. I can't wait to see where things go next. Also, if you are still looking, I would be OK with becoming a beta for your fics. |
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