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| "Entrapment: A 21st Century Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2012 22:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is SOOOOOOO AWESOME! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ | Title: *filled with anxiety*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2012 22:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to stop reading several times cause I got so caught up in the story and so scaried for them I needed to breath and do something light before I could go on...and now this cliff hanger...your dang right "rable rable rable" | Title: Rabble! Rabble! Rabble!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2012 15:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness you updated, my shakes were getting really bad! LOL, so thanks for my fix, but ah man, what a cliffy! Still, though, I can still say "Yay!" because it does indeed look like everything is ready to be wrapped up next chapter. Thank you for not dragging out the second go-round of their 'adventure' in our century. By the by, I like the level of connection you showed between them. Theoretically, such levels of spiritual connection are actually possible, so presuming they are both strongly thinking of each other at the same time, plus they've both got some magic in them, yeah, I think it's 100% believable that they've got the amount of connection you portrayed without it having to have anything to do with a 'youkai mating bond' or any other such fandom cliches. Nicely done! | Title: OMG NOOOOOO!
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2012 15:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O___O What! You can't hang it there! T___T and please update soon... Not week... Days!? | Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2012 07:48 PST
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love it! please update soon! | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: December 29, 2011 20:18 PST
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I am so incredibly worried about what is happening with Kagome on her side! Is she okay? Maybe she's hiding in the well and no one knows yet? Did the government take her? DID SHE DIE?! Blah blah blah! Things I have no answer to! Can't wait til the next update so my questions can be answered! :D | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2011 14:02 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy...gah! First you made me want to scream Nooo! and then you made me want to cheer Yes!, so I guess you're forgiven for the 'Nooo' part, but damn! I am very glad that you did not decide to drag this part on and on, that after such a messed up start of a chapter we already have Inuyasha rushing to the rescue at the end of that same chapter, but damn it, now on I'm pins and needles again! They just LEFT the future! Well...at least one bit of good news is that we know it isn't Yoshida's men waiting for Kagome (and Inuyasha) on the other side of the well, but the bad news is that those government people still want to take Inuyasha away, and they have the tranquilizers with which to do so. Which they might just have to use on him since he'll be in full battle mode on arrival believing Kagome's life is in immanent peril. Still, though, since losing Kagome was ultimately what it took to make him realize how strongly he loved her, and this stunt of Kikyou's was what it took to get the undead miko to realize Inuyasha's feelings as well, then it's pretty clear to me that you were portraying that had this not happened, nothing would have been immediately resolved in the love-triangle back in the past. Inuyasha was unsure how he felt, was arguing with his honor, and Kagome was and still is prepared to give him up while Kikyou had been determined to claim him. Now Kikyou is gone (I agree that if Rumiko can have her soul ascend then so can you!) and so now after this NEW craziness in the future is finally resolved, Kagome and Inuyasha can have their happily ever after. But how long will that take? *sigh...* Hurry up and update! LOL | Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2011 18:29 PST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: December 09, 2011 08:48 PST
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Woohoo! Finally made it back!! XD | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2011 05:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! *Happy Dance* It kind of sucks that they're out his fire-rat robes, not to mention her good ol' trusty yellow backpack, but really, how else could they have come up with a distraction? That was perfect! Have the humans all focus on the flying streak of crimson while blasting the hell out of the well house and making a run for it. I'm so glad that Inuyasha was able to slice off the sealed top of the well before losing consciousness, and that Kagome was able to shove him in and dive in after him. I wonder why they didn't try to stop her, though. Of course they wouldn't shoot her with the hanyou-strength darts, but Kagome didn't know it wasn't Yoshida's men. Still, one would think they would have had some gunmen with normal strength darts to sedate Kagome. Oh well, maybe they did but Kagome just lucked out, or maybe they hadn't thought of that, thinking that if they sedated Inuyasha before they got to the well that Kagome would just cooperate. After all, there was no way she could have cut into the well herself, that was all him. Never underestimate a desperate hanyou! Can't blame Mrs. Higurashi for crying out on instinct but hopefully Kagome never gets a bug up her ass about it enough to ponder if it was really her mother and want to risk going back. Heaven forbid she fear for her mother's safety, thinking Yoshida got a hold of her and was holding her there as hostage. If that really were the case, then she would have been killed the minute they dropped down into the well anyway, so really there's nothing Kagome could do in either case. And even though it was the CIA instead of Yoshida, still don't want to let them get their hands on Inuyasha, either, so Kagome and he definitely need to stay in the past. Maybe an epilogue will reveal they somehow did survive the five centuries? Ah well, that's not necessary and certainly still a ways off. Just because they're back in the past now doesn't mean the story's over! Especially with Kikyou showing up right away like she did and that lovely departure of Inuyasha's after Kagome snapped at him. Clearly he didn't want to go, but hopefully he'll come to understand why Kagome couldn't tell him not to, as he was probably hoping, wanting, or maybe even needing that excuse; her telling him no. She can't do that. Although telling him go wasn't necessary, either. She could have looked at him softly and said "I can't tell you not to go..." and then let him make his own decision; he probably would have reluctantly still gone, but at least he wouldn't be pissed off. Oh well, I know he'll calm down, I just hope Kikyou doesn't do anything drastic. Oh kami, I can't wait to see what's next! | Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2011 19:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOO!!!! I fell like I've been waiting for this moment from the seconded chapter. But I'm SO HAPPY!!! Yeah!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2011 21:28 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I was just perusing what might possibly be new before going to bed, and I find this lovely gem! It was only a matter of time before something progressive happened between them, and I think the way you handled this was perfect. It was already preestablished that Inuyasha knew of Kagome's feelings for him, and we also have the excuse of him being human tonight to make him more emotional in return, more able to give in to his desire and accept that Kagome wants to give herself to him from a place of love while fully understanding his lingering dilemma. Speaking of...the 'morning after' scene should definitely be entertaining! Not only do we have your a-typical 'he was human and now he's hanyou' hurdles to overcome, but Kikyou is still a legitimate issue in this universe. Can't wait to see what you do next, or how you decide to conclude their love-triangle, for that matter, though of course that's a few chapters away still. On another note, since they are in Tokyo now and are completing their journey to the well on the morrow, that's going to be a whole other adventure in and of itself that I'm on pins and needles to see how you conclude. Keep up the awesome work! | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: November 06, 2011 15:13 PST
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Geez! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha can't catch a break!At least not where it's really needed anyway. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: November 06, 2011 15:13 PST
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Geez! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha can't catch a break!At least not where it's really needed anyway. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2011 20:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! I mean, it was only a matter of time, but this chapter still had me on pins and needles. I'm a little torn... I guess, if it really were a black and white situation, then Japan's CIA would definitely be the lesser of two evils versus a freakin' crime boss and his mob of gangsters, but my favorite scenario, obviously, is still for Kagome and Inuyasha to just make it back to the past. Something tells me that won't be so easy, though, unless they freakin' burrow a tunnel underground to get to the well. Hey...the well is underground a little in Kagome's time, isn't it? Don't they have to go down a few steps once they enter the well-house? But I digress... We can't forget about Sango and Miroku in the past, and their collective need to find/kill Naraku! We can't just let the CIA take Inuyasha away for however long it takes them to determine he's not a threat when we all know there will be those nuts, just like your lady captain thought herself, who would deem letting him live be too much of a risk. Never mind the fact that his being kept from the past will alter the time line as we know it and Naraku will reign and destroy us all. Couldn't a compromise, if the government really is just concerned about the safety of their world, be that they witness/escort Kagome and Inuyasha through the well and then destroy it so that they can never return? Hmmm... Well, I know you know what you're doing, so whatever you do next I know I'll love it! Keep up the awesome work! | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
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