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| "Kindergarten Flirting" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] | Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2011 16:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am so in love with this story! | Reviewed By: janjan10111 On: December 11, 2011 21:07 PST
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AWesome! finally realised!!! lol update soon! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2011 17:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update! I like that you cleared up any possible misconceptions that he was going to try and make Kagome extra jealous by showing interest in Rin in return; Rin just being interested in Inuyasha a little bit was all that was needed to get Kagome's jealousy and reconsideration going, and I agree that the last thing he would have wanted to do was hurt her with the drama of actually possibly losing him, as if she'd had her chance and blown it. That is such a common cliche done over and over (and over) again so much so that I absolutely love the different (and in my opinion much more realistic and emotionally healthy) way Inuyasha is handling things in your story - practical jokes not withstanding where emotional health issues are concerned, heh. But so anyway great update! Looking forward to seeing what happens next! | Reviewed By: bks On: December 10, 2011 23:01 PST
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i loved the new chapter (to lazzy to log in anna_7) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2011 15:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I for one like the way this chapter turned out. I think Rin is pulling off her character perfectly, showing an interest in Inuyasha but not just immediately trying to whore herself out to him like a gold digging bitch - good name for Kikyou, by the way. But back to Rin, I think her trying to be Kagome's friend, and asking about her interest in Inuyasha was a brilliant move, because it makes it seem more like Rin is genuinely interested, but would possibly back off if Kagome were already planning on going for it herself, so as not to step on any toes. She was either trying to get Kagome to say she wanted him, or to give her permission, which Kagome did, so I'm sure Rin will be acting even more interested in Inuyasha now that Kagome's given her the go ahead. In the mean time, I like how Inuyasha gave Kagome that quick kiss and whispered 'I love you' because he doesn't want her to think that he's suddenly decided 'fine whatever, never mind then'. If he really does love her, then he'll just give her what she wanted and back off...which is exactly what he did, mind games not withstanding. But that was a cute little bit of reassurance for Kagome's side of things; he doesn't want her just going into a depression after all, thinking she'd blown her chance. Reminding her that his feelings are still there gives her the knowledge that it's not too late to change her mind. Good job! Looking forward to seeing what happens next. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2011 06:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Okay awesome, so this story isn't almost finished! Not if Operation: Make Kagome Jealous is just now getting underway. Somebody should have told Kagome to be careful what she wished for. I've read a few stories over the years where in a similar setting Inuyasha would honestly say fine then, would honestly try to move on, or at the very least flirt with a genuinely random woman in the hopes of making Kagome jealous with that random woman's heartstrings pulled as collateral damage, sometimes even with Inuyasha going further than he should have and giving Kagome genuine cause to doubt his loyalties. That'll certainly never happen in this scenario because Sesshoumaru would skin him alive! So this is perfect; he has no intention of actually trying to get over Kagome 'cause she says she doesn't want him, he's just trying to get her to see that she does want him. Let the games begin! :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2011 10:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good so far! I certainly hope that's not the end of it yet. It does feel like we might be nearing the end, but on the other hand I feel like there's gotta be at least a couple more chapters left. Kagome's gotta cave and become Mrs. Takahashi for real, plus is the deal with Kikyou really over with? After all, she's still knocked up and officially telling the paparazzi that it's his. Whatever you decide to do next, I'm sure I'll love it, since I've loved everything you've done so far. Keep it up! | Reviewed By: winnathepooh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2011 13:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love all your stories! | Reviewed By: boredchika On: December 01, 2011 17:47 PST
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This story is too cute! Very original! :) | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] |
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