| "Kindergarten Flirting" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: February 22, 2012 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo i was giggling at Kagome's plan and at the end of the chapter XD going to be great to see how Inuyasha gets back at Kagome =P |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2012 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aptly named chapter title, now that I see that scene at the end there, LOL. Over all though, excellent update all the way around! Things are certainly falling into place with all that nasty business, though it looks like the next chapter is going to contain quite a different variety of nasty business. Can't wait! |
Reviewed By: Angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: February 16, 2012 00:25 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh i think Im in love with this story XD freaking awesome!! I love how you made Kagome thinking so evil and that Izayoi is an awesome mum!! but Naraku a good guy?? interesting haha I CANT WAIT to read more!! |
Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: weyrdkat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2012 06:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter! I love the vindictive streak you've instilled in Kags. I also really like your characterization of Yura. The dialog is really good too. I enjoy their banter and can easily see these characters saying these lines. Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2012 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I like how Kagome thinks! I love using the word 'wolf' since 'bitch' might not be an insult, hahaha. All around great chapter. That round of 'would you rather' was hilarious! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2012 19:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A little short, yeah...but 'short and sweet' I'd say. So glad you updated! And I really like how this chapter goes, just them loving each other and relaxing and not thinking about all the ominous crap you have planned for them just around the corner. Keep up the great work! |
Title: great addition
Reviewed By: weyrdkat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2012 05:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey WB -- great new chapter! I noticed there were a couple of misspellings and missing letters, but I wanted to point out that you have Inuyasha's shirt unbuttoned twice. He undoes it when he flops on the bed the first time and then Kagome works on unbuttoning it when she crawls on top of him. Other than that, it was a hot scene and great movement forward in the story. Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Inuyashas love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2012 15:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic! I love it when Kagome has revenge on Inuyasha! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2012 20:27 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on your wins! You definitely deserve it. Really like the new chapter. We're not gonna get sucker punched with that paternity test, are we? Nah... *crosses fingers* But I really like what you did here, Kagome deciding to ditch the second half of work with Inuyasha to get him out of his funk. She's got it bad. Looks like she knows it, too. Looking forward to the next update! :-) |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2012 07:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have two things to say: awww...and whoo-hoo! Awww is for pretty much the whole chapter up until the Jacuzzi bit right at the end there, so whoo-hoo is for what I can only imagine is about to happen next, LOL. Besides getting a kick out of their family, just as Kagome had, I also really like that you have shown it bothers Inuyasha that she never says "I love you too" back to him. Of course, she doesn't say it yet 'cause she isn't there yet emotionally, so it's understandable, but it is something they should probably discuss soon. Does she think he only says it in lightheartedness? That he's just kidding around? That's partially his own fault for originally saying it all playful-like and void of seriousness, of course, but at this point in time Kagome's got to realize that all joking aside he really does mean it. Just like Inuyasha, I'm waiting for the moment when she says it back, knowing she'll mean it when she does. :-) |
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2012 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And Yash thought Yura was bad? Lol... Mama Izzy gonna kick ass now, hehe. Wonder if Kags am there standing in confusion or bent over in belly laughs. Am bettin on belly laughs. :P Me wovs this! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2012 20:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahahahaha...mother?! Oh gods...maybe going back to his place hadn't been a good idea. He's a grown freakin' man Izayoi, jeeze! Can't wait to see what happens next with that cliffy there. Anyways, really loved what you just completed before Murphy's Law kicked in, with regard to the whole Rin thing. Even I had forgotten about Rin, momentarily, when he'd first told Kagome he was taking her back to his place. That was absolutely perfect the way you worked that, Kagome a little perturbed but quickly realizing his intentions had been honorable and letting it go with just a playful threat of never pulling crap like that again. Awesome as always, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Bert13 On: January 04, 2012 01:26 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Funny romantic fic! Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2011 13:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Awesome update! Getting the 'L' word to slip past her lips shouldn't be too complicated, I just hope she can forgive him without too much difficulty when she finds out who Rin is. Once she can actually come to grips with the fact that he honestly does love her, because something tells me she's not really taking it 100% seriously when he says it, then I'm sure she'll understand why he felt like he had to go to such desperate measures. I mean, I do think she believes him, but on the other hand he does say it so playfully it's easy to assume it's not really the deep, profound and heartfelt confession she probably wants it to be. Plus she's afraid it won't work out from her past, failed relationship, so there's undoubtedly a healthy dose of denial thrown on top of the mix. But first things first, the case! Looking forward to seeing what happens next with all that craziness, too. On a semi-related side note, I think it's fun how you made somebody else other than Naraku the bad guy in this one, and that Naraku is actually a good guy. Of course, we still have Kikyou playing the role of bitchy ex-girlfriend, so you're keeping at least one of the fundamental cliches alive and well. There's nothing wrong with sticking to the mainstream popular themes, after all they're tried and true, but every once in a while I personally find it refreshing to break with cliches, if for no other reason than the characters needing a break from always getting such a bad rep. I like it! :-) |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2011 09:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I was not expecting the possibility that Souta's accident wasn't an accident! That's messed up, but a good plot twist! Glad this story doesn't seem to be anywhere near over yet, there's still tons of craziness to unfurl. Keep up the awesome work! |
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