| "Kindergarten Flirting" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2012 11:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!!! Beautiful update! I didn't even notice the lemon wasn't in your style so your friend did a good job trying to make it match, and I loved how you did the declaration of love, and I loved how they were both still playful afterwards and joking around and teasing each other. You're totally right that too much seriousness would have made them seem OOC for them, considering how you've already established their personalities to be. You've got me wondering if those bites Inuyasha planted on her were just love bites or something more, though it didn't seem as if he'd infused her with any of his youki at the time, and she hadn't noticed any strange marks while taking a bath so I'm going to just assume they were harmless love bites until if and when you say otherwise. I loved how at the very end they started talking business, Inuyasha's company would be screwed if it weren't for Kagome and I'm glad he knows it. All in all fabulous update! Can't wait to see what happens next. :-) |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2012 00:03 PDT
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That was such a sweet chapter. Inuyasha is being so warm and fuzzy. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: May 18, 2012 02:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh it was so CUTE! I love it!!!!! Kagome gets to say 'i love you' YAY!!! Im going to read it again haha |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2012 20:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwww...good update! This chapter was so sweet! That surprise lunch date was over the top, in a good way, and I loved that he was serious the entire time and didn't ruin the mood by pranking, and that he reflected on how much crap he really has put her through. Looks like our little boy is finally growing up. There's nothing wrong with still being youthful and playful, but there most certainly comes a time when enough is enough. You're handling his character development exactly the way I'd hoped you would. Keep up the awesome work! :-) |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2012 15:58 PDT
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Bahaha! Using the Saimyosho as person was priceless! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2012 11:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Lovely update. I like how you managed to name-drop 'kindergarten flirting' into the story text with regard to Sango's students, LOL. Time to get down to business now with all this pesky Kikyou and Morimoto business. Looking forward to all of that, but also looking forward to Inuyasha and Kagome's date next chapter. :-) Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2012 07:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwww...thank you for this chapter! That cat food prank was funny, LOL, but then the WAFF afterwards was totally squee-worthy. Just what the doctor ordered; I was so excited to see you'd updated. I love that Inuyasha got serious again for a moment and shared what was in his heart. Now that that's behind them, it's time for him to try to own that scoreboard! Looking forward to the next update! :-) |
Reviewed By: Angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: April 30, 2012 00:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear I will never stay logged in haha anyways the chapter had me giggling and nawwing. It was cute beyond befief haha |
Reviewed By: Angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: April 23, 2012 06:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't excepted that.. Disappointed that Inuyasha didn't go all animal sex like on Kagome haha but Im guessing (and hoping) we get to see the Demon High Court, they sound interesting and hot haha |
Title: WooHoo!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2012 19:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is nada thing I'd change in how you're telling your story here. Nope, zip, zilch, nada! You have kept me highly entertained all throughout with your storytelling, and I can totally see each and every character being as you've written them, including the OCs! But when I see Yash and his sense of humor it just makes me wonder if that's how he would've been in the series if RT would've let the lose reigns. And it be a shame everyone can't have a fun and interesting workplace as the one you've created in your story. Would be fun as hell to work in such a place, all things considered. Thanks Much for writing and sharing. ;) |
Reviewed By: Ame'sLostIt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2012 18:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first found this story last night, and began reading it, I swear I was hooked. I was up until 3 in the freaking morning reading this, and only got about halfway through. Then this morning when I got up, the first thing I wanted to do was continue [ But, alas, I had things to do! ] But I finally got back to reading it about four hours ago. :) I very much love the creativity you put into this story, I've only seen about one or two stories where Kagome works for InuYasha, but everything else about this is very unique! :) |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update! I think this went perfectly! It was funny that Kagome was mad for a second for him dragging her away to remove the renchaku now, just because he hadn't asked her...a 'principle of the thing' kind of mad at him, although she was clearly going to go along with it. I LOVED that he had that serious moment where he sincerely apologized, and she has forgiven him from realizing that he honest to truly didn't mean to hurt her, he hadn't known and he hadn't done it on purpose. It was an accident because he's just an idiot; an idiot in love. I love that he took her out to eat and that she's basically willing to stay with him as close to 24/7 as needed to stay healthy until it wears off (I'm kind of glad that there was no way to remove it aside from upping the ante with the higher up mark; that fits better with what you'd originally intended the renchaku to be. After all, if it were reversible then it wouldn't have been so deadly in the past or outlawed in the first place). And just when we might start to think Inuyasha's really matured from this experience? BAM! Trick roses! I have to admit that even I didn't see that coming and was just as shocked about the water in the face as Kagome...before I proceeded to laugh just like the people out in the hall were laughing, LOL. I think this was perfect, he proved that he can be mature and sincerely apologize, but now that she's forgiven him and it's 'crisis averted' he can happily go back to being himself. After all, if she's ever going to fall in love with him then it has to be the real him; what good would putting on an act do? Something tells me all that childish behavior is not an act, he's just stuck in perpetual 'class clown' mode, LOL. I love it! I'm so glad that she was (more or less) okay with it and her thoughts were not that she's given up on him all over again and is hurt and/or pissed off by him reverting back into his pranks but rather her thoughts were 'It's on now!' and she intends on playing his game and winning it. I'm routing for Kagome! LOL |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 15:22 PDT
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"I love you...I love you" Bam! Water to the face. I laughed so hard. You are ebil! Hilarious chapter. Love Totosai and glad Kagome wasn't mad. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Breebear On: April 13, 2012 11:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so great so far. I really can't wait for you to finish writing this. I hope it's soon. I can't wait to see what happens with Sango either. |
Reviewed By: bluerose3514 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2012 15:42 PDT
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"I'M IN-TUNE WITH HER BODY TOO; YOU DON'T SEE ME FLAUNTING THAT!" Classic, lol. Wonderful chapter. Inu can be such a child sometimes, haha. |
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