| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2017 07:33 PST
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I do think it was all wrapped up with a bow:) I'm so glad kells got
to meet his grandpa even if it was only for a day. And their
daughter sounds just adorable. I can't wait to see what's next in
the purity universe! Happy Thanksgiving Sue!!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2017 04:19 PST
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I have (as always) loved going through this story with you.
Unpacking each character and weaving together seamless plot is what
you excel at. I'm truly glad that through this you've got your
drive back and I look forward to seeing where it takes you. I can't
believe Kells has a girlfriend all at the rip age of 7. Ashur and
Jessa are going to have a whole lot of fun with that one. And as
for Aine... I hope her future is nothing like predicted.
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: gsmith On: November 17, 2017 14:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome Purity story. I love your creativity and how you
have kept the Initials story alive and expanded it.
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2017 08:24 PST
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It's always bittersweet when I reach the end of one of your
stories. This one was no different. You never cease to make me run
the gamut of emotions. You truly have a gift. Looking forward to
the next.
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2017 23:44 PST
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That was a beautiful wedding. I loved how they included Kells, and
the vows Jessa said to him. I, too, love the way you've woven the
Purity universe together. Nora meeting Kurt should be interesting.
I, too, wonder if Sesshoumaru will talk to Inuyasha about their
father. And Sesshoumaru's mother may still be alive? Please, oh
please, answer that question.
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2017 23:38 PST
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That was a beautiful wedding. I loved how they included Kells, and
the vows Jessa said to him. I, too, love the way you've woven the
Purity universe together. Nora meeting Kurt should be interesting.
I, too, wonder if Sesshoumaru will talk to Inuyasha about their
father. And Sesshoumaru's mother may still be alive? Please, oh
please, answer that question.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2017 16:18 PST
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Sue, genuinely, the way you continue to weave together the Purity
universe is brilliant. The thought and planning you put into your
work is clear and much appreciated. Linking Granger, made me
chuckle and wonder if Nora is going to take kindly to the grandson
of the man who "stole" her daughter (he is due to put up the
sutras). Though, this glimpse into Sesshoumaru has been my
favourite part (outside the magic that is Kells). I do wonder if he
will speak to Inuyasha about what he's remembered, perhaps even
share memories of a long forgotten father. I am thoroughly looking
forward to what comes next. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2017 19:17 PST
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Iâ€͐ 2;m loving these last two chapters and the
development it’s shiwn for sesshoumaru. And
fraternal twins???? That’s so sweet! What does
Chiasa look like? And where is Inuyasha? Not invited to the
wedding? I wonder if Inuyasha and sesshoumaru will have a convo
about the change in memories? Really good chapter!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2017 11:36 PST
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And there it is, the reason I have followed you so devotedly over
the years. That moment of revelation and tenderness between Sess
and his son, then with his mate. That and your wicked, evil sense
of humor. You make the bad days good, and the hard days better. I
hope you never stop writing fan fictions.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2017 11:36 PST
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And there it is, the reason I have followed you so devotedly over
the years. That moment of revelation and tenderness between Sess
and his son, then with his mate. That and your wicked, evil sense
of humor. You make the bad days good, and the hard days better. I
hope you never stop writing fan fictions.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2017 16:00 PST
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Omg this chapter was full of so many bombshells! Somehow I sensed
the connection to granger early on, but sesshoumaru's mom????? Omg
I honestly wonder how you are going to expand on this in the coming
stories. It’s too juicy not to. I hope Kurt
finds out and I wonder what sesshoumaru has to say. I had to catch
up on the chapters because of my busy schedule but
I’m just blown away!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2017 14:55 PST
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Omg... so much amhas happened. Love the ring and having kells do
the proposal :) so cute and just what she needed I think. I do find
it sweet how she wants to be surprised like the rest of us humans
on when she has a baby. It sounds like with this whole Phoenix
thing that it probably shouldn't stay a secret long lol
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2017 18:46 PST
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These last two chapters have been heart-stopping. I'm so glad the
Duke will no longer be a problem. I shudder to think of what would
have happened if Ashur hadn't shown up. Sounds like Ashur is going
to have his hands full keeping Jessa and their daughter safe. I
love the way you connected everything. Kurt's crazy grandfather was
married to "fairy" that was really Jessa's cousin. I'm going to
hate seeing this story end.
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2017 18:45 PST
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These last two chapters have been heart-stopping. I'm so glad the
Duke will no longer be a problem. I shudder to think of what would
have happened if Ashur hadn't shown up. Sounds like Ashur is going
to have his hands full keeping Jessa and their daughter safe. I
love the way you connected everything. Kurt's crazy grandfather was
married to "fairy" that was really Jessa's cousin. I'm going to
hate seeing this story end.
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Reviewed By: Laura On: November 08, 2017 18:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting lore! I love it
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