| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2017 04:37 PDT
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So Devlin ran away and these two are still running around in
circles while danger creeps ever closer. And there I was berating
Ben with Charity, clearly it's all genetic. I do hope Ian gets what
is due to him in this story. Thanks for updating Sue.
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2017 19:57 PDT
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Wonder what is Ashur thinking now. Thanks for the update. :)
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2017 12:22 PDT
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Sorry I haven't reviewed I've been reading I just... it's been one
of those weeks ya know. When things are overwhelming and I'd never
thought little romantic me would want to step away from love. Your
stories help even if real life love is harsh and hurtful this love
you write shows how it happens but can also help you grow. Thanks
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2017 17:39 PDT
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Aww her poor horse... she never did get to see him again:( And it
can be hard to admit that your jealous, even to yourself. Let's
hope he doesn't get set on fire again lol I'm surprised the earth
wasn't shaking when Ashur walked up to that. Let's see if they can
undig themselves out of this mess!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2017 12:12 PDT
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LOL...shoe's on the other foot now! She threatened to set hin on
fire again, I am SO glad that I'm not 18 anymore. LOL
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2017 08:21 PDT
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I guess I spoke too soon about a kiss huh? These two and making a
right mess of things.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2017 15:13 PDT
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Kells is adorable, truly. Manami always gets such a bad initial
reception because she's pretty. Jessa should consider herself lucky
there was no kiss this time to work through. As for Kyouhei/Asher,
he may be smug right now but Devlin is going to turn up much sooner
than later and unlike Jessa I doubt he's going to let it be known.
Three weeks of just adult time is going to be interesting. Thanks
Sue
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2017 19:56 PDT
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This is getting more interesting. I can't wait for the next
chapter. By the way Kells is my favorite character in this story,
he just says the funniest things.
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Reviewed By: Quinn On: August 12, 2017 09:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just started my new job 2 weeks ago and this is my first day
off. Reading your work has been such a treat! Thank you for sharing
it!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2017 09:05 PDT
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Well better late than never on starting to track down her horse! It
didn't take the neighbor long to figure out the horse thing
either... Ashur better step it up. I have a feeling he's not gonna
be happy when he finds out about this dude hanging around jessa...
And I adore kells lol babies indeed lolol
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2017 07:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, I'm enjoying this story immensely. However, I don't trust
that Devlin at all. I think I know who he really is. If I'm right,
Jessa better be on her guard. Kells is just adorable. Looking
forward to the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2017 04:02 PDT
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Wait. Wait. Good looking, Horse riding, aristocratic Brit moves in
next door to Jessa. Potential chosen suitor of Jessa has no photo,
public appearances and mystery mother and is currently nowhere to
be found. Thank goodness Manami is stopping by, she will shed some
light on this. Maybe he'll turn out to be Manami's mate and not
real competition for Ashur. Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2017 19:19 PDT
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ANNNNNND the other shoe drops! So the Viscount appears...english
nobility has more names and titles than a person can shake a stick
at. Wonder how Jessa will feel when she finds out that "Devlin" is
the boy the MacDonnah wanted her married to...either that or I am
WWWAAAYYY off, which has happened before. Ashur better wake up and
smell the coffee before we wind up with all the makings of an
international incident! LOL I hope he is able to find and buy those
horses, it might be more important than he realizes.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2017 16:45 PDT
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Hmmm... I'm very suspicious of this new fellow. He could be an
undercover agent for Ian. Though given that Jessa only just called
the consulate and unwittingly alerted Ian to her location, it's
unlikely he can work that fast. Ashur is being pigheaded and
unkind, a little competition will be good for him. Though I think
Kells will definitely have something to say about this new fellow.
Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2017 05:43 PDT
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Looks like Ashur may have some budding competition, he better find
her horse soon cause that's one way to this women's heart for sure.
I just feel like this new man is gonna be some trouble somehow...
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