| "Ward" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: July 30, 2003 20:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! All of the loose ends are tied up and Bulma and Vegeta can live Happily ever after. Vegeta reading the sex scenes from her dreams in Bulma's diary was quite amusing. This is a wonderful story; I look forward to reading the epilogue. ~Gail~ |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 29, 2003 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic it was WELL detailed and everything!! ^_^ Will there be a sequile? |
Reviewed By: Tess Mort (Tessa) On: July 29, 2003 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes, YES! They're finally together! Forever and always! And the lemon last chapter was superb! *Glomps Lavender Goddess* I'm sad Radditz left, but I'm sure he'll be tied in to the Epilouge. (which, by the way, I am so very excited for!) I'll miss this fic so much; it was truly one of my favorite B/V's of all time!
Never stop writing fanfiction-- ever. Please? |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: July 28, 2003 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo~ the long awaited update! Very sweet, romantic ending to a great B/V romance : ) Hope you start another B/V soon! |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: July 20, 2003 20:19 PDT
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Yay! Thank goodness! AT last!
Great 2 chapters, can't wait for the next. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 13, 2003 18:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice work keep going. |
Reviewed By: Vitaralastla On: July 11, 2003 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did really well, and I'd recommend taking up serious writing if you haven't already. I enjoyed the way you kept to the pre-set characteristics of Vegeta and the gang, while keeping things origional at the same time. *You got a slightly lower mark for Origionality only because the them of Ward falls in love with Warden thing has been done many times before, but I still enjoyed this version much more than I have in any book or Fan Fic I've read yet. Keep up the good work and for God's sake don't put out the next chapter soon!!!! :) |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: July 03, 2003 15:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
Fantastic! More, more, more! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 02, 2003 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ PLEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ PLEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ UPDATE ITS GREAT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Tasha On: June 28, 2003 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome chapter plz do continue, can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 21:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
If I send you chocolate will you make everything better in the next chapter?
I know these cliffhangers are simply the work of a very good author, but I swear I'm starting to get an ulcer!
OK, if you don't buy that, I did have to color my hair earlier than usual because of the gray... I blame it on you! |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: June 22, 2003 12:40 PDT
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Glad that Vegeta now truly knows the whole story!! Who's the bastard that shot Vegeta? Update plz!!! |
Reviewed By: Cat On: June 22, 2003 12:24 PDT
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That is just evil to end it there. You better hurry up, I cannot wait another week to find out what happens. Great story, btw. |
Reviewed By: Tsukino On: June 16, 2003 13:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! Plz continue! I have read all your stories and I think they are VERY well written. Keep up the good work LGV, you really do have a talent. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: June 16, 2003 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Torture! Ok, this chapter was wonderful, but what an evil cliffhanger!!! Please hurry and post the next chapter. |
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