| "Ward" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: January 06, 2003 00:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a stupid, stupid saiyan!! I was afraid this would happen. GRRRRRRRRRRR!!! This is all Vegeta's fault. He better start spillin the beans to Bulma or he's gonna lose her permanently. Can I slap him? -_-. |
Reviewed By: Jenna On: January 05, 2003 19:49 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh! Vegeta, you ass! I can't believe his idiotic behavior and I knew it would drive Bulma to Juunanagou. At least Juunanagou is falling for her and may end up a decent guy in the end if he really cares for her. |
Reviewed By: Jen On: February 16, 2003 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I don't like AU fics, but this one is great! I love the character development and how they seem to stay somewhat true to their anime personalities. Can't wait for the next updates. |
Reviewed By: AmiGirl9 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not lying with my ratings either. I LOVE your stories! Thank you so much for writing. Now, darn you for making them miserable again. urgh!! ~Ami |
Reviewed By: Kima On: December 30, 2002 10:41 PST
Comment/Review:
Excellant chapter. Aw, Vegeta is such an insensitive idiot! Geez, he means well, but he always says the wrong things. I hope Bulma doesn't feel so rejected she runs to Juunanagou. |
Reviewed By: Addicted On: December 28, 2002 18:43 PST
Comment/Review:
I meant you're not your. D'oh!! |
Reviewed By: Addicted On: December 28, 2002 18:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CURSE YOU!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
Alright. Calm. Breathe. Sorry. Your story is WONDERFUL! I started it a long time ago on FF.net, but then my computer died and I lost track of my stories. I was just thinking that I would like to go back and find some of them and then, lo and behold, I find this one. I don't want to rush you or anything, but pleeeeease update soon! You should write professionally. Your really good! |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: December 27, 2002 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Great chapter! Man i hope Vegeta kills juunanagou! He is so evil! Ok please update soon.
Ja Ne! ^_-*!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 22, 2002 21:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegita, Vegita, Vegita...JUST TELL HER HOW YOU FEEL!!! He's torchering himself by thinking that she only sees him as a friend, even though she moaned his name that night. And I hope you're right, Juunanagou's stunt might bring them together. At least I hope so. Beautifully written and insightful. So much emotion and sadness. Great chapter LGV!! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 14:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is that you can't update this fic fast enough! 8-)
I loved this last chapter, as it really gets into the guts of Vegeta's feelings for Bulma. I just wanted to scream at him, "Damn it Vegeta, just go ahead and make her yours!"
Of course, that would make short work of your fic, so I guess I'll let you do whatever it is you have planned and keep my mouth shut. 8-)
I absolutely love Vegeta in this type of role!
Meliza |
Reviewed By: Kima On: December 22, 2002 13:17 PST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta's in love. Awwww. Vegeta is so in love it ain't even funny! Curious to know if Juunanagou was behind Bulma's attack? Hmmm? Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 16, 2002 02:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those were some nasty words that Veg said to K and CC. Coldblooded I'd say. Could it be that the woman that Juunanagou had ruined in the past was pregnant with Veg's child? Anyway, looks like Juunanagou's plan didn't go as he'd hoped and that his accomplice got his butt kicked for nothing ^_^. I'm with CC, the longer Veg waits to tell the truth to Bulma the worse things will get for him and her. Another great chap!! |
Reviewed By: seamaidian On: December 15, 2002 14:52 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the unbrakeable bond between bulma and geta. i cant wait to see whats going to happen next. hope to read more soon. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 13, 2002 16:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that Kakarott told Vegeta what happened between Bulma and King Scum, and that Bulma promised Vegeta that she would stay away from him. Unfortunately Vegeta didn't act on it and spill the beans on Juunanagou. What an idiot! He has just set up Bulma to go thru alot of unnecessary pain. What gets me is that he loves her and doesn't do anything about it. She's a woman for God's sake and those little kisses on her cheek and forehead have got to go. Juunanagou's plans made me sick to my stomach. I can't believe that he's gonna try to convince Bulma, with the help of lies, that Vegeta is evil. As always, you manage to convey the characters emotions in such a way as to make the reader feel the same thing. As always, another great chap!! |
Reviewed By: Jenna On: December 15, 2002 17:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, thought it was sweet Bulma was asking for Vegeta. Still don't trust Juunanagou, but am waiting to see how bad everyone says him to be. |
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