| "Ward" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sluggy On: June 15, 2003 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cruel is too nice of a description of that chapter...I would have said YAY! Vejiita opens the journal, too, IF HE HAD OPENED IT TO THE END AND NOT THE FRIGGEN BEGINNING!!! It's gonna take him eons to read 8 years of entries! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chappie, though. Keep it up or I'll sic my Radditz action figure on you! :D |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 14:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm taking back all the nice things I've said about you - that was just plain CRUEL!!!
I'm just glad Vegeta opened the friggin' diary! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 19:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ugh! You know that horrible feeling in your chest when you just know something terrible is going to happen? Well, it just kept on building in mine the further I read into this chapter. Talk about tense!
It's pretty bad when I'm sitting here yelling at my computer screen. :(
I want Radditz to say something... I want Bulma to say something... I want Vegeta to go ahead and push Junana off a cliff... Oops, I didn't mean to verbalize that last thought. O.o
This was a great chapter, LGV! Lots of angst and all. You've done a fantastic job of making me truly hate Junana. Really - that cliff idea isn't so bad, is it? ;) |
Reviewed By: lil rach On: May 11, 2003 14:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great story!! i love it soo much and all the characters! finally bulma and vegeta are together.. but for how long? update soon i love it!! :) |
Reviewed By: Ice_queen664 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good please update soon |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 16:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
That chapter was absolutely beautiful! It cleared up the questions about exactly what happened to Vegeta and Juuhachigou and brought Bulma and Vegeta (almost) to where we all want them to be. :)
But, I really don't want poor Radditz to have to end up with Juuhachigou, even if she was a pawn in the whole thing... :( |
Reviewed By: RA83 On: April 13, 2003 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story, and every one of your others, as I have read (and am reading) them all. I sure hope Bulma and Vegeta work out these difficulties and make this story NC-17 soon.... LOL |
Reviewed By: Credik On: April 13, 2003 17:54 PDT
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GR8 new chappy. Sorry i don't think i have reviewed 4 you b4 but i LUV ur story.
As for the Radditz part near the end I LUV IT AS WELL
I hope you pursue the pairing in2 further chapters. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: April 02, 2003 22:17 PST
Comment/Review:
How could you do this to me...I mean them??? Bad author! Just kidding. I wonder what you have cooked up in that creative mind of yours to get our favorite couple together. Can't wait till next time. Post soon! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover On: April 01, 2003 13:28 PST
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Yay! You finally updated again! Can you try and make the next wait a little shorter? Thanks! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 14:55 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic just keeps getting better and better. There's no way I would have suspected Goku, though. It's obvious her brother set her up.
I feel so badly for Bulma and Vegeta, though. Will they ever get together?
Not by the hints you left at the end of this chapter. I just hope it was Radditz! :( |
Reviewed By: MoonPyncess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 14:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic sooo much! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update as soon as you can! I have to know what will happen with Vegeta and Bulma!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 15:09 PST
Comment/Review:
Hurry and update! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 24, 2003 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good for you Bulma, someone had to take the initiative ^_^. Sure looked like Veggie was enjoying himself. I just hope that Juu doesn't ruin it for both of them, and then maybe they'll be doing more than kissing by the time the night is over ^_~. |
Reviewed By: kainee On: February 23, 2003 21:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay~!! Finally, some V/B action! Lol, now I sound like some horny fan girl. But I mean, after some torture, they deserved some relief ^__^ Anyway, I wonder what more could happen? Since Juu seems out of the picture... but there's still the question of Radditz-- it seems like he won't help as much anymore... Mou!!! When will Trunks ever be born!?!?! ;__;
Anyway, very good job Lavie (Um... sorry but your name is really really long... and that's my way of shortening it-- if you don't like it, I won't repeat it again... ~_~) Write more! ^__^ |
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