| "Ward" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jenna On: December 15, 2002 17:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, thought it was sweet Bulma was asking for Vegeta. Still don't trust Juunanagou, but am waiting to see how bad everyone says him to be. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 11, 2002 23:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta better tell Bulma the truth about Juunanagou before that stupid idiot does something that she's gonna regret. By letting him kiss her and responding to it Bulma has given that asshole the green light to take things further. Thank God Kakarott saw what happened and tried to talk some sense into her. I only wish that he would tell Vegeta what he saw so that Vegeta finally tells Bulma what Juunanagou is really capable of. Great chap LV! |
Reviewed By: Chrissy On: December 11, 2002 18:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely adore Bulma and Vegeta. Vegeta needs to come clean to Bulma about Juunanagou before she gets herself into trouble. He loves, he just better admit it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kima On: December 11, 2002 17:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. It's great. I wish everyone would stop being so hard on Bulma. It's not like she has the complete story here. She finds Juunanagou charming and he hasn't given her a reason not to think that. She has to find out for herself. |
Reviewed By: Leo On: December 11, 2002 17:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant! This is a definite change from the B/V fics I've seen.I can't wait for the next chapter. This fic is so good. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 09, 2002 02:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, it's gotten to the point that I want to jump into your story and slap some sense into Bulma. Serves her right for lying to Vegeta and not heeding his warning. The King is gonna be one pissed off dude when he finds out who she met and what happened while she was with him. I get the feeling that the "blonde" was the cause of Vegeta's hatred towards Juunanagou. He probably did to her what he's planning on doing to Bulma. Great chap. Can't wait to read more ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 30, 2002 00:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG poor Bulma. What a hellacious childhood. She had such a prick for a father. At least Vegeta knows her side of the story. What I can't believe is that he pushed her away and now she's gotten the wrong idea about what happened between them. I think his actions, or lack thereof, are gonna come back to haunt him. After being rejected by Vegeta, Bulma may just give in to Juunanagou. Wow, excellent update!! Happy New Year ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 05, 2002 20:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma, what the f*ck do you think you're doing??? She's obviously as stupid as she is beautiful. I can't believe that she would lie to Vegeta like that. Everyone's concerned for her safety and she is too immature to notice it. I just hope that Juunanagou doesn't rape her or something like that and I'm curious as hell to find out what happened in the past to make Vegeta hate him so. Great chap. Brilliantly written!! |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 14:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is truely one of the best fics I've ever read!
It has a great storyline, and your grammer is better than most of the people who post around here. Not pointing fingers or anything....
Anyway, please keep up the great work!
Ja ne~
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 17, 2002 20:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. I think it's safe to say that Juunanagou did something in the past to piss off Vegeta and Kakarott. I don't trust him and I think he's got unsavory plans for Bulma. In fact, all those "Kings" seem like a bunch of a$$holes. It's a wonder that Vegeta let them set foot in his palace. One thing that did make me laugh was the fact that Kakarott used to chase his tail-lol. I imagined what that would've looked like and I'm still chuckling ^_^. Well, I can't wait to find out what the two kings are talking about. I'm sure it will answer a few of my questions. |
Reviewed By: Susan (suenami927@yahoo.com) On: September 15, 2002 13:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kakarott was absolutely adorable. Imagine falling for CC that way. She's older than him and another race but he doesn't care. That's the way it should be...he's truly in love *sighs*. Veggie, on the other hand, is about as romantic as a pile of dead leaves. I think he's in denial though. His frequent trips out of town might be a sign that he's t rying to put some distance between him and Bulma. Oh, and lets not forget how close he came to carving up Kakarott because he thought that K was proposing to Bulma. Well I can't wait to see how he reacts at the party. You know someone's gonna hit on Bulma and that's gonna drive Vegeta up the wall. Anyway, this was another great chapter and I can't wait for #3. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Susan (suenami927@yahoo.com) On: September 15, 2002 13:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kakarott was absolutely adorable. Imagine falling for CC that way. She's older than him and another race but he doesn't care. That's the way it should be...he's truly in love *sighs*. Veggie, on the other hand, is about as romantic as a pile of dead leaves. I think he's in denial though. His frequent trips out of town might be a sign that he's t rying to put some distance between him and Bulma. Oh, and lets not forget how close he came to carving up Kakarott because he thought that K was proposing to Bulma. Well I can't wait to see how he reacts at the party. You know someone's gonna hit on Bulma and that's gonna drive Vegeta up the wall. Anyway, this was another great chapter and I can't wait for #3. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Susan (suenami927@yahoo.com) On: September 15, 2002 12:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I review let me just say Welcome to MMO. I was hoping that you would start posting your fics here, especially after FFN's latest stunt. Is it safe to assume that you'll also post your other great stories? Hope so, it would be nice to read them again ^_^. As far as Ward goes, this is definitely a winner and I've only read the first chap. It's a treat to see Bulma as an sad and shy girl, neglected all her life by that buttwipe of a father, as opposed to the confident, ill tempered genius that we've come to know and love. I love the way you portrayed the Saiyans, more like warriors during the Middle Ages. King Vegeta has stolen my heart by the way he treats little Bulma. So caring, tender and respectful towards her. Yep, I'm hooked now and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Great job LGV!! -Sue |
Reviewed By: aiya On: September 14, 2002 12:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh! i love this! update soon! |
Reviewed By: Jennifer On: September 13, 2002 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job! I hope I dont have to wait long for the next chapters. I enjoyed it. |
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