| "Ward" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikeie On: January 31, 2003 12:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please, please PLEASE write the next chappie! and wutever u do, do not break geta's heart!! he's too kewl!! other than that this story is great
~I Love Legolas~ |
Reviewed By: garnet On: January 28, 2003 16:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story and please update soon. I am very anxious to know what will happen in the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 10:16 PST
Comment/Review:
Okay, is Vegeta doing this just so he can stop Bulma from marrying Juunanaou or has he just lost his mind? Hurry up with the next chapter, you write too slow!(No offense.) |
Reviewed By: Bulma75 On: January 25, 2003 15:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey ^_~ its me again, lol. I love this story, it's incredibly creative. Update soon, chao. |
Reviewed By: Jennifer On: January 25, 2003 09:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe Vegeta can convince Bulma of his feelings and get her to marry him. She wouldn't have ended up with Juunanagou if she'd be sure of his feelings and he hadn't pushed her away. Love is such a pain in the ass! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: January 24, 2003 23:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. Keep updating!!! I can't what to see what Bulma's reaction is to Vegeta's words. |
Reviewed By: Kiki On: January 24, 2003 21:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Vegeta needs to marry Bulma quick. Hope he convinces her to marry him. I'm a little disappointed she had sex with Juu. but I know she did it out of sadness and desperation. And I think Vegeta could forgive her. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2003 19:54 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it looks like Veggie got his point across rather nicely ^_^. I guess peeking inside the diary finally forced him to realize what's been going in her head for quite some time. At least he has realized that the whole Juu mess could've been avoided if he had just told her everything from the very beginning. Now the question is will Juu stand in the way of V/B's happiness. Oh yeah, and Happy Birthday! :D |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2003 19:38 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate Bulma for having done what she did. I can't believe that she would sleep with Juunanagou, and not out of love either. Right now what I'm wishing is that Vegeta redo his will and get rid of her completely, that filthy pig! Sorry, I really like Bulma, but I am so disappointed in her behaviour -_-. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 13:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder how Vegeta is going to react once he finds out that he's Bulma's mystery love? I can't wait 'till the next chapter! Hurry up! Ugh... I can't believe that Bulma actually slept with that bastard Juunanagou! How repulising. I had hoped that you would have had Bulma save her virginity for Vegeta, but whatever, this is your story. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 11:19 PST
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Nooooooo! Tell me Bulma didn't just sleep with Juunanagou! *sighs* How will Vegeta react when he finds out? Not well, I take it. *Waits rather Un-patiently for next chapter* |
Reviewed By: kainee On: January 19, 2003 17:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic a lot and it's one of the ones I look forward to. But mou! Bulma and Vegeta Forever~! No Juuhachigou! Sooo evil nooooo, must get mental image out of my mind now. Blech.
Okay, immature wallowing set aside, it's a great story. You cause great dramatic effect and I like the way you pace yourself-- even if it leaves readers panting to know more even though recent developments might lead you to think... that you don't want to read it anymore just because something bad happened. But you still have that morbid feeling of wanting to continue reading it because you wish for that perfect happy ending. This fic is very realistic and if there is any OOC for any of the characters, there is a reason since this is A/U and also because it's pulled off so well.
Keep up the good work! (no more non V/B!!! ~__~) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 12, 2003 23:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fucking mess! I wish Kakarott or Vegeta would've just told her the truth right then and there. Now Juunanagou has the green light to do whatever he wants with her. I don't like where this is going but I'll wait to read the next chap before I have my nervous breakdown. Btw, great chap!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 10:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can Bulma become any blinder? Isn't she gonna remember what Goku told her in chapter six? Anyway, this is a great story, hurry up with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Rascal On: January 06, 2003 23:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I avoided this story for a long time as I usually don't like A/U fics, but this is sooo good! I feel like I'm stuck in a Jane Austen novel! I love Jane Austen novels! I am waiting with baited breath! Please do hurry your next chapter!!! |
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