| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 13:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about time you've updated this story (you won't find me anywere else on your list of reviewers because last time I read this, I didn't have time to review, sorry...). Don't take too long on the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Blacky On: December 27, 2002 16:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story you should write more often it is very creative for once trunks is not an goodie goodie. |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 09:27 PST
Comment/Review:
Gokusgirl you sure know how to right a story, so can u e-mail me a copy of the updated version at jsw097@aol.com. also i think your right about how goten and trunks were players |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 10:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't just stop here!!! That is just, not fair!!!!! And when does the Trunks and Pan thing start!?!?!?!? Anyways, it's a really really good story, it's STILL on of my favorites!!
Keep it going!!
B.J |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 21:22 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry...I noticed that there were two readers who were complaining in an, erm...somewhat mean-like way about the short chapters after my last review (Not so much mean way, but you know what I mean...kind of a "nagging" review).
I understand about the whole "Updating" thing, I'm really bad with my own stories as it is. I hope my last review didn't offend you in any way, or was what was the cause of you writing that in your summary.
Can't wait 'till you update next!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 12:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo Hoo!! another chapter!! (Why do MM never tell me?? They're supposed to) Thoroughly enjoyed it Gokusgirl - well worth the wait...what has Bra got planned for Goten??? The poor boy has been in BB hell for months now!! : D ... I quite like Marron, but I also like the way you've made her a complete slut!! HA!! naughty GG!! I look forward to the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 09:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story and i never thought i would happen this way. |
Reviewed By: raska On: December 18, 2002 10:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaining, original, and well-written story so far. Trunks is getting what he deserves- he can be such an ass. I can't wait to hear about what's involved in the bonding ritual! |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 18:37 PST
Comment/Review:
No offense gokusgirl, but I waited two months for that? There was almost no plot in this particular chapter; it was more like filler. However, as a whole I love the story and I can't wait to see how it develops. I'm just dissapointed with this particular chapter. |
Reviewed By: silverdragon_eye On: December 17, 2002 18:15 PST
Comment/Review:
@_o...
No fair...*pouts* Don't you think that was just a little too short? |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 18:09 PST
Comment/Review:
WEE!!!
Yay!!! Another chappy, and beautifully written, I might add!!
Though I was a bit disappointed, you only wrote the whole chapter on just Bra and Pan in that shoe store, then they chatted for a moment or so, and then that was it.
I understand how hard it is to always keep your readers pleased and keep cranking out chapters, so I'm not critisizing you or anything (did I spell critisizing right? ...Oh well!), but it's just a way of letting you know that I LOVE your story and I can't WAIT for more!!! ^_^
Please crank out the next chapter (hopefully longer this time) As Soon As Possible!!!!
Ja 4 Now!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I know the next chapter is gonna be Bra/Goten, but sneak in some hints with Trunks and Pan!!! =D I'm so excited, I can't wait!!! You're the best!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: December 16, 2002 20:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I've never read this before!!!
Oh...it is so WONDERFUL! Another AWESOME fic....I am eagerly awaiting the next update. |
Reviewed By: xocherryxo On: December 16, 2002 18:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD JOB!! ur story is awesome, write more soon !!! me in suspense ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Xanthe On: December 15, 2002 20:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great potential in the story. Please post the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Death Flower [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 14:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The enjoyment factor was nine because it was so short!!! C'Mon! Next time, make the chapter shorter. |
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