| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
| Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin on Hime On: December 13, 2002 14:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friends are pissed at me because I recommended this fic and it isn't finished. I have one word for you... UPDATE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: March 16, 2003 10:38 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. The bathroom scene was so funny, LOL. Trunks is sure having trouble resisting Marron. You can tell what he's thinking with. I can't wait to see how you change this to T/P, since yes, I'm a T/P fan. If Goten thinks his dad is going to be able to explain what's happning to him, I'll be surprised if he'll know. Maybe Trunks will...and Chichi, who knows *besides you* what she'll do next. Doesn't she realize there are 2 B. Briefs? Can't wait for the update. |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 07:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update soon, *falls on her knees* PLEASE!!!
I need more to read!!! |
Reviewed By: someone who red ur story On: December 01, 2002 16:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE! come on ur killin me! Ill die befor u finish this story. PLEASE HURRY! |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 07:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES!!!
*runs around while she's throwing candy into the air* |
Reviewed By: Severina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 22:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HAVE to know what Bra's planning for Goten! Oh lord! And that Marron! What a little tramp!
I'm loving this honey! Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: FloralBlackMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 13:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...LOVED IT!!! Hurry up! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 13:31 PST
Comment/Review:
WAHHH!!! *sniffles and sobs* It's too short!!! ;_;
But it's better than nothing!!! ^_^ That was a really good chappy, but I just wish there was more!!!
Please, please, PLEASE update ASAP!!!! =D Tankies!!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I'm still working on your piccie for this story... o_o;; Sorry it's taking a while, but I've been really busy. You'll get it soon though!!! I promise!!! Thanks for waiting! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: strompf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 07:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
vey good! can't wait for the next chapter. original I like it. |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: November 12, 2002 15:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh wow... so good... must find out rest soon... HURRY UP AND UPDATE PLEASE! i WANT TO SEE IF GOTEN MAKES IT!! |
Reviewed By: Lo On: October 31, 2002 09:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're one of my favorite fic writers. I just can't get enough of your stories. Excellent writing, I love it, and more lemons please. |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 21:37 PST
Comment/Review:
As in a girl slipped him something, and it wasnt' his fault. Damn that would suck. Well, thank you for the excellent fanfic, though personally I think it needs more lemon (you can never have too much lemon!). |
Reviewed By: Shader On: October 29, 2002 16:13 PST
Comment/Review:
hey marron is one o my faves but a threesome geeze shes a skank |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 16:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I browse the stories and I find one from the webmistress of my favorite site!!
Excellent story gokusgirl, keep up the good work.........poor Goten : ) |
Reviewed By: Keeren_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 18:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEAAAAASSSSE WRITE MORE!
I LOVE THIS FIC! |
| Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] |
