| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PAN AND TRUNKS LEMON UPDATE NOW@!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PAN AND TRUNKS UPDATE!!!!!, NOW!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan an Trunks UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: !@#$%^&*()+_!@$^&*(*&^%$#%^&* On: January 21, 2003 21:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: January 15, 2003 19:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I had reviewed more. About your new comments - On other fics, I have waited over 3 months for a page, so if ppl can't deal with the fact that you have a life, they don't have to continue reading. I'd much rather get shorter chapters every month than nothing for several months. The fact that you have told us that you are continuing this is good enough for me. So hang in there update as soon as you can, but no pressure, cuz that takes all the fun out of it for you. It truly is a fantastic fic and I for one will wait as long as it takes for you to update. |
Reviewed By: kOdaKmOmeNt On: January 11, 2003 10:05 PST
Comment/Review:
OMGosh!!! That was so incredibly good. I can't beleive how you made Trunks and Goten's personalities! Wicked awesome, you should definitely continue! The next chapter should be very good considering that Bra and Goten are the better couple of the two! They kick mad ass! Well,keep goin with this, it's really great!!!!
PEACE-kOdaKmOmeNt |
Reviewed By: SaiyanMad On: January 02, 2003 12:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the coolest fic!!! I like it how you don't just make it so that bra fancies goten, goten likes her= have it off 4 a while, it's not all happy happy perfect the whole time which makes it a proper story. |
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