| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
BULMA BRIEFS??? Whoa... wasn't expecting that!!! And Trunks has feelings for MARRON??? Darn... how is this gonna be a B/G T/P lemon??? Can't wait until the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 06:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know I love this story!!!
Chichi is so stupid it ought to be illegal!!! LOL she sees panties in Goten's pocket and the first person she thinks of is Bulma??????????????????????? OMG that was the funniest thing I've ever heard!!!!!!!!!!! If it was Goku's pockets yeah sure I could see that... but GOTEN???
The lemon was wonderful honey, well worth waiting for!!! And I know when you finally get to it, the T/P lemon will be awsome too!!
I hate Trunks with Marron... oh wait a sec... I just don't like Trunks in general right now, that man is such a jerk! Poor Pan getting stuck with him!! LOL I want to know what Vegeta will say about his little princess with Goten when Bulma gets yelled at by CC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep writing honey!! Love ya!! |
Reviewed By: DiamondHalo On: March 22, 2003 10:39 PST
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!! It's great!!! One request though, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE get to the T/P parts! Trunks and Pan are my fave couple! Update very soon please! I need to read more of this story! I'm addicted to it! |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 16:14 PST
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Err, how do you get Bulma from Briefs? I mean, it could be anyone's; Bulma's mother, Bra, Bulma...some random clone out to take over the world. Anybody. However, this should prove to be a very interesting plot twist. Poor Goten though...I actually feel sorry for him. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 17:47 PST
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XD I'm sorry, but ChiChi is stupid...
This is getting good!!! ^_^ I'm so glad you've updated!! It's been WAY too long!!!
Please update A.S.A.P. 'cause I can't wait!!! =D I wanna see some T/P going on!! ^_^ But, maybe that's just me...*growls and hisses at Marron* ^^;;
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: It's a Mack truck, with a "k" at the end. Not that it matters...just though you'd like to know, though! ^_^;; |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 13, 2003 17:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The bathroom scene cracked me up!!!!
I've been married to the same man for 9 yrs and he still won't let me near the bathroom when he's in there!
Great chapter...as always! |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 07:08 PST
Comment/Review:
hey what with all the wait is something wrong it' almost been two months since u last added a chapter. there is many people scorching to read the next chapter. it seems I can't sleep at night just thinking of this story(j/k) but i'm close though. |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 04:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! I came by hoping to see an update. I miss the perks of being the beta-onna and getting to read it 1st. **sniff, sniff** Oh well, I hope you'll have me back when the 'puter finally makes it over the big blue, this whole trekking to the library thing to get my ff fix is getting old. ~TTYL
May the muses keep you inspired ^_^
~EM |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 13:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Say what you say, but I've been a HUGE FAN of Gokusgirl since FF.net!!! I've read EVERY STORY... even though I haven't reviewed them all... *blushes* N E WAYZ... and this is by far the BEST ONE YET!!! I'm a HUGE P/T fan and I can wait until you write more chapters about them SOON!!! Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: yaselle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 08:55 PST
Comment/Review:
Wow! this just keep getting better. I love this story. Please write more soon. And if you could start more seriously on the P/T part it would be even better!
*Hey, what can I say? I'm a P/T lover, sorry!* |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 20:02 PST
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Poor Goten, noooo wait, go Bra go. Loved it so far. |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: January 29, 2003 01:02 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update!!! I like that Bra was smart enough not to do anything at CC especially after Trunks & Goten weren't. Does Goten realize what he's gotten himself into? This could get very interesting. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 17:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So... when are we gonna get a little Pan/Trunks? |
Reviewed By: update!!!!!! On: January 26, 2003 16:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't stop the story there!!! UPDATE SOON |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 21, 2003 21:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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