| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bloody_X (not logged in) On: July 29, 2003 10:45 PDT
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Keep it coming! This is such a great story... I can't wait for the Trunks/Pan lemon... or pairing whatever.... ;) |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X (not logged in) On: July 25, 2003 08:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REEEEAAAAALLY Like this story, I think that you should continue... SOON!!! I think that it was funny when Vegeta came into the room, and Goten fell off the bed, I laughed for a few minutes or something...
But, me and my sisters, Freaky_X and Psyco_X think you should continue soon.
Bloody Jennie |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 18:19 PDT
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*Sigh* Are you EVER gonna update this story? I mean seriously, it's been 34 days since you last updated! No, I do not count the days, that would be a VERY bad sign if I started doing that, I just did a little math quickly to fugure it out. So could you update, please? |
Reviewed By: kittykat88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 08:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue, it is really good!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 12:51 PDT
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Yay, yu finally updated! Can you make Pan slap Trunks or something, he's really being an ass and he deserves it. After all, it's his best friends niece! |
Reviewed By: Reneex On: June 06, 2003 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soo much, I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: DBB On: June 06, 2003 10:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is dedicated to everyone who hate Chi-Chi... y'all can kiss my ass!!! Chi-Chi rocks, and she's only reacting as any mother would react!!!
This story rocks, and I hope Pan kicks Trunks in the nuts for what he said. She's better off with Hiei (Yu Yu Hakusho) anyway. Let that purple-haired brat have "Morron!!!" |
Reviewed By: Nesha On: June 06, 2003 10:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa!!! That was unexpected!!! How can Trunks be so cruel??? I KNEW Pan deserved better!!!
And how's Bulma gonna react when Chi-Chi accuses her of sleeping with Goten??? More importantly... how's Vegeta gonna react???
Either way... drama some MAJOR drama is gonna occur!!! I'll keep on the lookout for more updates!!! |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: June 05, 2003 00:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated!!! Loved the conversations in this chapter. Looking foward to Goku's talk to Goten. I think Pan should get to kick Trunks' ass for that comment. Hope you can update the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 17:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!!!!! I must say...YOU ROCK!!!!!! I MEAN IT TOO!! Wow!!
Anyways: I read "Fate's Hand" a few days ago, and I was really intrigued to find out that YOU had helped out the author! That was SUCH a MASTERPIECE!!! I'm a fairly new member here (2 months) I got a series of my own that is doing REALLY ! Its called "Hilarious Outakes!" and I JUST finished it, too!
Although I'm done with it, I was wondering if you'd leave me a review telling me wheter or not I should continue with 30 more chapters for it!!
The Title is called "Hilarious Outakes!"
The Author is Mikey B23
The Genre is Hentai/Comedy
The Animes included are:
-DBZ
-Card Captor Sakura
-Pokemon
-Digimon
-Inu Yasha
-SailorMoon
-Sonic the Hedgehog (my PERSONAL FAV. ANIME!)
-Gundam Wing
-Metroid
-Yugioh!
Sory for the LONG review, but Mikey B23 needs to know!! I'd really appreciate your response!!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!........................... |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it hasbeen a while since I have read this and guess what it was worth it oo. I love this story and please up date soon. keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Reji On: June 03, 2003 07:19 PDT
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OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHhhh, you are so mean....this was not what I expected at all.
I think Trunks should get a real spanking for being suchs a jakass and so does Chi Chi for being so nosy.
Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: gjhggk On: June 03, 2003 03:22 PDT
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I really like the story but this t/p g/b fanfic is lacking one element. T/P!!! I'm beggining to think this is going to turn out a t/m! Another thing I just have to tell you cause I'm annoying and like to have the facts right, Bra and Pan are about the same age (give or take a year) so bra is just as much a child to goten as pan is to trunks. And another thing pans a fighter, and chichi's grandaughter at that, if trunks were to call her a baby she would have socked him (and it would hurt to cause she could beat up goten at five) despite the fact that she likes him. Thats just how pan is. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 02:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I ever told you how much I HATE Chi Chi??? I hope Bulma smacks her in the mouth! Another great chap! |
Reviewed By: _____ On: April 13, 2003 20:46 PDT
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Update when you're free please!!!!!!! |
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