| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 20:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you very busy, but I just wanted to let you I am patiently waiting for a update and still very interested in seeing it continue.
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Reviewed By: jenna On: November 16, 2003 10:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, keep up the good work.
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Title: chapter 12
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 06:56 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't review sooner, actually I thought I had but I don't see it. I'm so glad you updated!!! And that this fic is going to continue. I'm surprised Chichi disregarded the fact that it could have been Bra rather than Bulma, but if Chichi gets her mind set, it is hard to change. I see Pan is fairing a little better with Trunks, but Marron had to show up. Looks like Pan is going to have to either deal with Marron or prove to Trunks she's the better woman or both. Things should get interesting.
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Reviewed By: LiL PriNCeSs Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 18:24 PDT
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hey that was good.. sorry it always tkaes me a long time to read these... u gotta get the next chapter out soon ok.. i really really wanna ko what happens.. lol that convo between goku n goten was funny.. lol...
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Reviewed By: Nana Babee On: October 19, 2003 21:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is my new favorite story *smile* all day long I've been searching for a good story and here I found one. I think you have a great potential. Hehe I hope you continue writing and update very soon! I really enjoyed this story, please continue. ~Nana~
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Title: Ur Awsome.
Reviewed By: ssj4 yuffie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 18:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is might be the best T/P, Gtn/Bra fic that I've ever read. I really like your characterization, although I think that Goten is kind of OOC, but I love him ^_^ So the awaited encounter between Chichi and Bulma may be in the next chapter (I'm on the edge of my seat), hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 16:35 PDT
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Damn, Marron is really such a bitch! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: phillip On: October 10, 2003 16:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a cool story... keep it up now... dont waste my time waiting for you to be done with this fanfic... =)... hope you finish it... and fast too!!!
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Reviewed By: Reneex On: October 09, 2003 12:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sooo glad your back I love this story, Ican't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Bulmafox On: October 07, 2003 10:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
POOR PAN! Trunks does not deserve her.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just can not believe that Goku and Chi Chi are stupid enough to think Goten is messing around with Bulma! And I get the feeling that poor Pan is going to have to deal with Marron... perhaps Bulma and Pan should team up and start bitch slapping people! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nesha (2 lazy 2 login) On: October 06, 2003 12:14 PDT
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Man, Pan should've slapped "Morron" for that comment! But, I enjoyed this chapter very much! And Bulma's on her way to Chi-Chi's... why am I sensing a VIOLENT confrontation on the way?
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Reviewed By: LiL PriNCeSs Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 08:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow! i read dis fic soo long ago n it end with "Bulma Briefs". I was like i gotta read more but i kinda didnt check mediaminor so sorry bout that. well now i kno u updated n im very happy. i love dis fic. its funny it really is. i cant wait for Goku's talk with Goten. next xhapter should be good. update soon please. |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 12:05 PDT
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When are you gonna continue on this? I simply can't wait! I'm going crazy! Crazy I tell you!!
*spins around and vanishes with a cloud of dust* |
Reviewed By: Rei_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 02:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY AND UPDATE IM DYING!!!!!!!!!!! |
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